单元主题写作四
话题分析
本单元的主要话题是“谈论居民区和指路”。通过本单元的学习,学生应该能够对自己所在的居民区做一些简单的介绍,并能用简单的语言问路、指路。
常用表达
词汇:perfect; wonderful; quiet; busy; clean; beautiful; noisy; block; through; coffee; cost; enjoyable; across from; do exercise; sound like; be convenient for; go shopping; go past/by; be/get lost; be busy doing; be friendly to sb.; turn left/right
句型: 1.Can you tell me the way to…
2.Turn right/left…at the…crossing.
3.It’s…block(s) (away) from…
4.…is/are busy doing…
5.I’m doing well.
典型例题
你居住在哪里 你喜欢你的社区吗 小区的环境怎么样 请以“My Neighbourhood”为题,介绍一下你的社区。不少于70词。
写作思路
这是一篇介绍小区的典型习作,根据要求,我们可以按照“总—分—总”的结构来写:
1.概述小区的整体情况,表达自己喜欢与否。(My neighbourhood is…)
2.对小区的环境、建筑物、人们等各方面的情况进行具体描述。(It stands… It’s clean…)
3.深化主题,表达自己对小区生活的感觉或评价。(Life in my neighbourhood is very convenient…)
连句成篇
My Neighbourhood
My neighbourhood is a beautiful place. I like it very much. I have lived here for five years. It stands beside a river. It’s clean and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers in it. It also has a coffee shop, a bakery, a restaurant, a flower shop and a parking lot. The bakery is across from the parking lot. The flower shop is next to the restaurant. I like the bakery very much. Because my daughter likes the bread and biscuits there.
Also the people in my neighbourhood are very friendly. When we meet on the way, we always say hello to each other. We always help each other. We just like good friends. We always chat with each other after dinner.
Life in my neighbourhood is very convenient and enjoyable. So I think my neighbourhood is perfect.
假如你是李明,明天是你的生日,爸爸妈妈将在家里为你举办生日聚会,你想邀请好朋友张磊来参加聚会。请根据下列提示,给张磊写一封电子邮件,告诉他去你家的路线。
提示:1.乘21路公共汽车,在第三站下车。
2.下车后沿着建设路走,经过一个公园和一个购物中心。
3.看到交通灯时向右拐,之后会看到一家电影院,你家就在电影院的对面。
要求:1.语句通顺,语法正确。
2.不少于70词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Zhang Lei,
It’s my birthday tomorrow. My parents will have a party for me at home.
See you tomorrow!
答案
小试身手
One possible version:
Dear Zhang Lei,
It’s my birthday tomorrow. My parents will have a party for me at home. I’d like you to come to my party tomorrow. I’ll tell you how to get to my house.
You can take a No. 21 bus and get off at the third stop. Then walk along Jianshe Road, and you’ll go past a park and a shopping centre. Turn right when you see the traffic lights. Then you will see a movie theatre. My house is across from it. I think you can find my house easily.
See you tomorrow!
Yours,
Li Ming