九年级英语中考作文课件

课件28张PPT。Writing
The High School Entrance Exam(中考) is coming!good ways to get relaxed
discussIs going outing(春游) a good way to relax for Grade 9 students ? Why?
I think it’s (not) good for us. Because …
1. get close to nature;
enjoy the beautiful nature2. Open our eyes and
increase our knowledge3. be good for our health1. waste time ; affect our study2. feel tired3. Worry about our safety Recently class 4 had a discussion on if going outing is a good way for Grade 9 students to get relaxed.
Seventy percent of the students think it’s a good way. They think it’s a good chance to get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful nature. Going outing can not only open our eyes but also fill them with more knowledge. Going outing is good for their health.
30% of them don’t like the idea. In their opinion, going outing is a waste of time, and it has a bad effect on their study. After all, going outing will also make us feel tired. What’s worse, if they go out to a strange place, no one can be sure of the safety of every student
Going outing is of benefit not only to our health but also to our study. However, it should be organized well . Recently class 4 had a discussion on if going outing is a good way for Grade 9 students to get relaxed.
70% of the students think it’s a good way. _____they think it’s a good chance to get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful nature. ______, going outing can not only open our eyes but also fill them with more knowledge. ________, going outing is good for their health. ___________, 30% of them don’t like the idea. In their opinion, going outing is a waste of time, and it has a bad effect on their study. After all, going outing will also make us feel tired. What’s worse, if they go out to a strange place, no one can be sure of the safety of every student
________, going outing is of benefit not only to our health but also to our study. However, it should be organized well . in a word , besides , first , next , on the other hand , FirstNextBesidesOn the other handIn a wordWriting skill:
使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。Sometimes to do relaxing things
can make you feel better.
Tony GinaTony GinaTony Ginaso…that, and ,than, so, however, but, so…The better learning way,the better grade you’ll get.
Tony and Gina are two middle school students . They both work hard but they have different learning ways .
Tony often tired in class . He hardly listens to the teacher , he
miss lots of important points that the teacher makes . As a result,
It’s too difficult for him to finish the homework quickly . So he has
to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep .
However , Gina listens careful and tries to catch what the teacher says in class . Because of this , so she learns better than
Tony and she goes to bed early .
In my opinion , Gina learns better in class and has more free
time to enjoy herself , so I prefer her learning way .
改错1.Tony is often tired in class. / Tony often gets/feels tired in class .2. he misses lots of important points 3. Gina listens carefully4.Because of this , she learns better than Tony . Enjoy beautiful words and sentences.hardlystay up late …butas a result…soandhowever1 …points that the teacher… (定语从句 ) Writing skill:
使用好词好句能使你的文章加分增加文采。 Tony and Gina are two middle school students . They both work hard but they have different learning ways .
Tony is often tired in class . He hardly listens to the teacher , he
misses lots of important points that the teacher makes . As a result,
It’s too difficult for him to finish the homework quickly . So he has
to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep .
However , Gina listens carefully and tries to catch what the teacher says in class . Because of this , she learns better than
Tony and she goes to bed early .
In my opinion , Gina learns better in class and has more free
time to enjoy herself , so I prefer her learning way .
It’s too difficult for him to finish the homework quicklytries to catch what the
teacher says in classmisses lots of important points that the teacher makesShe learns better thanTonyOur school lives are nearly ending .What do you think of your school life ?What are important things in your school life ?Do you have any dreams now ? What are they?activitieswriting 三年的初中学习生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊——成长记录袋中应该增
添一份你自己满意的答案,请以My school life 为题写一篇短文, 记下你的校园
生活，字数６０－９０。
写作指导：
１．Before writing：
( 细读试题，认真审题 )
写作指导：
２．While writing：
　　
3． After writing：　
（１） 拟提纲，分好段落 （２）连句成篇 检查全文, 注意逻辑和文采．
Don’t give up , you’ll be successful .
Homework:
1.根据中考评分标准，四人一组互评作文
并订正个自的错误及找出同组作文中好
词、好句 。（记录在作文本）
2. 再为你的作文另写一段开头和结尾.
Thank you附作文评分标准（供参考）：
第五档（很好）：13—15分
表达清楚，行文连贯，复合句运用自如正确，有文采，用上全部关键词， 语言得体，基本无误或错误很少。
第四档（好）：10—12分
表达基本清楚，行文基本连贯，尚能运用复合句，语言有少量错误。
第三档（还好）：7—9分
只能运用简单句表达，语言有较多错误，但尚能答意。
第二档（较差）：4—6分
能写出几个要点，但语言错误较多，影响了意思表达。
第一档（差）：0—3分 白卷或文不对题，错误百出，不知所云。 Recently class 4 had a discussion on if going outing is a good way for Grade 9 students to get relaxed.
70% of the students think it’s a good way. They think it’s a good chance to get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful nature. Going outing can not only open our eyes but also fill them with more knowledge. Going outing is good for their health.
30% of them don’t like the idea. In their opinion, going outing is a waste of time, and it has a bad effect on their study. After all, going outing will also make us feel tired. What’s worse, if they go out to a strange place, no one can be sure of the safety of every student
Going outing is of benefit not only to our health but also to our study. However, it should be organized well . 参考I’m a schoolgirl. AND I am very interested in English. I think English is very useful and important to us . I try to listen to English on the radio and write diaries every day. I can understand my teacher’s spoken English in class. I can speak English to my classmates in class and I am good at reading English. But I find it's not easy for me to remember words. We have many chances to speak English, but I'm very shy. So when it's my turn to speak, I often feel very nervous and I am afraid of making mistakes（根据填表情况讲述在英语学习过程中遇到的困难）. Now no matter how I work hard, I can't improve my English.（这些困难的影响）