Module4如何写“出行方式类”的文章
【写作任务】
请你根据下表提示内容,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下Jack与Lily上学方式,同时也介绍一下自己选择的上学的交通方式,并说说理由。
要求 1.短文除包括所给提示内容外,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,80词左右。
姓名 Jack Lily 我
离学校距离 最近 最远 ……
交通方式 Ride a bike By car ……
花费时间 10分钟 10分钟 ……
观点 有益健康 最舒服、更安全,但有时路上交通会拥挤 ……
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2、 审题
体裁 记叙文
话题 介绍出行方式
时态 一般现在时
人称 第一人称、第三人称
(1) How to write a passage
(2) Answer the following questions:
1. How to express ways to a place
2. How to express the reasons
3. Some important sentence structures
3、 文章布局
Para. 1: 直接点题,引出下文。
Para. 2: 根据题目要点写出Jack, Lily和自己的去学校方式并且陈述原因。
Para. 3: 总结全文,用疑问句询问读者的方式。
4、 遣词造句
1. 词汇库
same 相同的
different 不同的
closest 最近的
farthest 最远的
opinion 观点
comfortable 舒服的
2. 短语箱
the same school 相同的学校
close to 离….近
far from 离….远
ride a bike 骑自行车
be good for 对….有好处
in one’s opinion 在某人看来
not only…..but also….. 不仅…..而且….
because of 由于…..
heavy traffic 拥挤的交通
as a result 结果
3. 句型
1 表示出行方式的句型【老师自行补充】
2 It takes sb. sometime to do sth.
3 It may take a longer time than usual because of the heavy traffic.
4 Sb. spend sometime doing sth.
5 Could you tell me how you go to school
4. 作文模板
Jack and Lily are my good friends. We go to the same school and we are in the same class. However, we have different ways to go to school.
Jack lives school; as a result, he every day. It takes him about . He thinks it’s because it is .
Lily lives school, so he usually . It takes him about to get there. In his opinion, it’s .
As for me, I always . It is . In my opinion, it’s .
5、 Could you tell me how you go to school
6、 参考范文
Jack and Lily are my good friends. We go to the same school and we are in the same class. However, we have different ways to go to school.
Jack lives the closest to school; as a result, he rides a bike to school every day. It takes him about ten minutes. He thinks it’s a good way because it is good for his health.
Lily lives the farthest from school, so he usually goes to school by car. It takes him about 10 minutes to get there. In his opinion, it’s not only the most comfortable but also the safest way, but it may take a longer time than usual because of the heavy traffic.
As for me, I always spend twenty minutes walking to school. It is the cheapest and the healthiest. In my opinion, it’s the best way to go to school.
Could you tell me how you go to school
7、 课后练习
国庆节即将到来,大家都纷纷计划外出旅游。请你就游西湖提出几种不同的出行方式,并说明你最喜欢的出行方式,陈述原因。
【参考答案】
National Day is coming. Everyone is planning to go traveling during the 7-day holiday. When it comes to traveling to West Lake, different people will choose different ways. You can visit West Lake by bus, by bike or on foot.
As for me, I will choose to walk. First, I think it is the cheapest and the healthiest. Second, I can stop whenever and wherever to enjoy the beautiful scenery and take some pictures. Third, it’s the most convenient to go to the shops on the street to buy some souvenirs.
Therefore, visiting West Lake on foot, I think, is the best way.
Beginning
Lily
Jack
Ways to school
Your own way
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