高考英语读后续写写作指导学案
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高考英语读后续写写作指导
一、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's a shop I must have walked past a million times before, but have only noticed until now, and have never thought to enter. It's a little brown brick building with a small window display offering various forgettable items that are of no interest to me. But I have some extra time today and decide to take a quick look.
The interior (里面) of the shop is cool and dark，and it takes a moment for my eyes to ad- just. A strong rose smell hangs thickly in the air, which is nearly enough to turn me away. In spite of this, I continue further into the store, eyes scanning the shelves for anything interesting. Indeed, there are different items, and yet none appeals to me.
“Can I help you ”
I look up to see an elderly woman behind the counter. She looks a little surprised, and I wonder when she last saw a customer enter her shop.
“Just looking casually,” I reply.
I make a full circle of the place and there is indeed nothing here I wish to purchase. I wonder how the old woman manages to stay in business. I head towards the door, but pause when I notice a large old book on a wooden stand.
There is no visible title on the well-worn leather cover, and it is locked with a combination lock (密码锁). Beside the book, there is a paper with numbers on it. The numbers read: 02-11-32.
I try the lock with the combination, but it does not open. I am now even more curious to discover what lies between the book's pages. “What is this book about ” I ask the old woman, who has been staring at me quietly the whole time. “Do you know the combination ”
“I do,” the woman replies, but adds nothing more.
I am annoyed by her response, and I've had enough of this place. I turn to leave and I am almost out the door when I hear the woman say, “Try your birthday.”
I wander back over to the book. She's crazy, I think. With my index finger, I hit the numbers into place so that they now show my birth month, day, and year.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my astonishment, the lock opens.
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Suddenly, I hear a voice, telling me I'm the shop assistant until I find the next customer.
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参考答案：
To my astonishment, the lock opens. I pull back the heavy cover and glance through the pages. “This can’t be right,” I whisper in shock as I realize the book is a biography about me! I look up to question the woman, but she is gone and the shop suddenly seems different and brighter. The shelves are now filled with all my favorite things. I wander around the shop again. How did I miss this shop before I would buy any of these items in it gladly!
Suddenly, I hear a voice, telling me I'm the shop assistant until I find the next customer. I sit behind the counter, waiting for a customer to come in. However, they all walk past the window as though the place were invisible. The few that do enter seem uninterested in what I have to sell, or complain that the smell in the air is too strong. Until one day, a young woman takes an interest in the book. “It won't open,” she notes. “Try your birthday,” I say.
分析：
本文讲述了主人公光顾了一家平平无奇的商店，就在准备离开的时候，他发现木架上有一本用密码锁锁着的旧书，旁边的纸片上面还写着一串密码。在尝试用密码打开书失败后，他对这本书产生了更大的兴趣。这时店主告诉他，真正的密码是他的生日。强烈的好奇心驱使他在密码锁上输入了自己的生日。果然，书打开了！但与此同时，原来的店主消失了，他成为了新的守店人，直到下一位对书感兴趣的客人出现。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“令我吃惊的是，锁开了。”可知，第一段可描写锁开后我所看到的书中的内容和这一行为引起的变化。
②由第二段首句内容“突然，我听到一个声音，告诉我我是店员，直到我找到下一个顾客。”可知，第二段可描写我接替前任成为守店员后的工作和等待来下一个守店员的过程。
2.续写线索：打开书——店主消失——周围的变化——成为守店人——等待下一个顾客
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.注意到：noticed/see
②.看一看：take a quick look/have a look
情绪类
①.吃惊：surprised/astonished
②.好奇：curious/interested
二、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
BPWD is a startup company, where my workmates and I work our heads off, seeking solutions to various environmental problems. We are what people consider a group of promising young talents working in a promising industry. We are from different backgrounds but we all fit in well with the high— paced life and enjoy all the convenience that Salt Lake City can offer. We pride ourselves on all the differences we are making to this planet but our best subject for lunch break chat is what we do as volunteers to protect a lake called Lake Purilence.
We first heard about the lake from my workmate, Bluto, who referred to it as his childhood paradise, where he used to fish, swim and cast pebbles (鹅卵石) with his friends. He described the lake area as one of the few places of wildness that had not been ruined by modern tourism. He had left the place for years since his parents sold their farm near the lake and moved to the city, but he still kept dreaming of going back. In his own words, he was “nature starved”. Attracted by Bluto's description, the five of us working in the same office got on our way to it in October, 2019, taking advantage of a federal holiday.
It was a place not only lesser known but also out of the way. We took a flight first and then rented two cars at the airport. We had to travel along backroads in rental cars to finally get there but the scenery was absolutely stunning. No wonder it was loved so dearly by Bluto. All the beautiful trees and the grass were covered with red and orange leaves and the quiet lake is like a mirror reflecting the golden rays of the sun. A short distance away, we could see a few other tourists taking pictures by the lake and some white birds flying up from the water and the patches of reed marshes (芦苇荡). Amazed by the scene, our hearts longed for a closer encounter with the lake.
注意:
1.续写的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As we got closer to the lake, however, we saw something strikingly inharmonious to the beautiful view.
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Looking at my workmates, I put forward a plan, which met their immediate approval.
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参考答案：
As we got closer to the lake, however, we saw something strikingly inharmonious to the beautiful view. At the shore of the lake we could see litters of plastic bags and bottles here and there. Out of professional sensitivity, we could see what all this means to the environment and to the wild life. The disappointment and awkwardness were especially unbearable for Bluto, as if his childhood wonderland was ruined. We felt a strong drive to help our friend restore the wonderland and protect the lake before the situation turned too serious.
Looking at my workmates, I put forward a plan, which met their immediate approval. We decided to work as a voluntary team to do what we can to turn it around. Action began right then and there. We walked around the lake to collect litters and put up no littering signs. What we didn't expect was that the other tourists joined us in our action. We also arranged regular inspections and agreed to take further actions when necessary. So far we have been able to live up to the title we give ourselves: Guards of Lake Purilence.
解析：
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在工作伙伴Bluto的描述下对Lake Purilence产生了浓厚的兴趣，作者和伙伴们来到这座湖，被它的美丽所震撼，但是当再靠近一点时，却发现了与这美丽很不和谐的事情。他们制定了计划来保护这座湖。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，当我们走近湖的时候，我们看到了与美丽的景色极不协调的东西。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现了湖边人们对环境的破坏。
②由第二段首句内容“看着我的同事们，我提出了一个计划，立即得到了他们的赞同。”可知，第二段可描写作者和同事们如何采取行动保护这座湖的环境。
2.续写线索：
发现——失望——冲动——计划——行动——成功
3.词汇激活
行为类
①破坏：ruin/destroy
②修复：restore/renovate
③保护：protect/guard/preserve
情绪类
①失望：disappointment/letdown
②尴尬：awkwardness/embarrassment
三、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mike took the last bite of the chocolate ice cream and jumped into the car with his parents. They headed off to the Olympic sized pool for the big swim meet.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift and won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
“Congratulations," said his father. His mother gave him a hug, even though he was wet.
A week later, it was time for another swim meet and Mike decided to eat the same ice cream. He thought that it was his luck ice cream and that it might help him win again.
He took first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. Since then, Mike has decided to have the same ice cream before every swim meet and has always won. Several months passed and Mike was feeling unbeatable. Although he wouldn't admit it, all the ice cream was adding pounds to his athletic swimmer's build.
It didn't take long before the luck ice cream had lost its magic. Mike started to slip to second place and then third place in his races. His scores kept worsening and Mike felt really bad. He knew what was wrong. But he couldn't admit it to himself and especially to his parents. He did not want to disappoint them.
One day, his mother sat down at the table with him and said, “Mike, we know you love ice cream，but maybe it's not healthy for your body to eat so much of it. Your father and 1 think it is making you gain weight. Is it OK for us to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go for the final competition In order to strengthen your muscles, your father will go running with you three days a week. We think it will help you feel better.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mike unwillingly agreed.
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Finally the big competition of the season came.
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参考答案：
Mike unwillingly agreed. Every other day, he would go running with his dad. He still went to the swim meets each week but he didn't do well. Seeing that it was really hard for Mike, his father sometimes couldn't help inviting Mike to get some of his luck ice cream. But he refused the sweet treat and continued running with his father.
Finally the big competition of the season came. As he dived into the swimming pool, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as hard as he could. This race seemed much longer. When he finished the race, he felt really tired and was not sure what to expect. Suddenly he heard thundering cheers from the audience and saw his parents were smiling from ear to ear. His jaws dropped as he looked at the scores. He had beaten his own record, and everyone else's too. Mike realized he had won his race, without the help of his luck ice cream.
解析：
通过所给文章，Mike自从在一次游泳比赛前吃完一个冰激凌赢得比赛之后，他认为那是他的幸运冰激凌，之后每次比赛前都吃一个。直到由于吃多冰激凌，他体重增加，比赛成绩也越来越落后，他的父母建议他停止吃冰激凌并且在父亲的陪同下开始锻炼。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Mike不情愿地答应了。”可知，第一段可描写Mike停止吃冰激凌并且开始锻炼的详细情况。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，本赛季最重要的比赛来了。”可知，第二段可描写在坚持锻炼之后，Mike在本赛季最重要的比赛中的表现和结果。
2.续写线索：开始锻炼——坚持——参加比赛——赢得比赛——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①继续做某事：continue doing sth./go on doing sth.
②完成：finish/complete
③打败：beat/defeat
情绪类
①幸运：luck/fortune
②期待：expect/look forward to
四、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Why she let out my secret why she did that to me ” I vividly remembered that day when I was confused at the knowing looks which everyone gave me. That terrible experience was imprinted (铭刻) on my mind. I couldn’t forgive the person with whom I had shared my secret. She lost all my trust and friendship.
Five years back, Sally was a new addition in our class. I don’t know what but there was something sticky about her that attracted me towards her. She was the most friendly person I knew. We started as classmates but after a few months we were like best friends. We did homework together and dreamed of going to the same university one day. We hung out and went to the movies on weekends. That was a sweet time.
Nevertheless, I couldn’t expect such an enormous betrayal from her. I didn’t know what made me tell Sally about my personal life. I felt much regret to myself. She exaggerated (夸大) the matter, added her own spices to it and made it the hottest topic in school. It was like someone had stabbed a knife in my back. After she revealed my secret, everyone at school started laughing at me and gazing at me wherever I passed. I was like a pond in which someone had thrown a stone and it had been spilled up. It was the most embarrassing time I had gone through. Soon afterwards, I left school and shifted to another one, because I thought no one had the right to laugh at me. Sally called me many times but I didn’t answer. My heart was broken because the person whom I trusted most cheated me.
I made efforts to remove the scar from my heart. I started a new life, leaving all the bad memories behind, because they made me a person who often thought about the past experiences. Five years later, with the life going on, I made new friends and seldom thought about the past.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But one day I met Anna in the market, my former classmate, who told me shocking news.
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I immediately called Sally in order to explain the misunderstanding.
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参考答案：
But one day I met Anna in the market, my former classmate, who told me shocking news. Anna said that after I left school the gossip soon disappeared. Everyone in our class missed me. Because I left without saying goodbye, Sally was sad for a long time. And to my amazement, she told me that Sally was not the one who brought my secret to light. It was Mary who had a big mouth and always wanted to put her nose in other people’s matters. She happened to overhear my conversation with Sally. I was all at sea, feeling that the floor had slipped away beneath my feet. Anxious and regretful, I asked Anna for any contact with Sally.
I immediately called Sally in order to explain the misunderstanding. After getting through, I sincerely apologized to her. She said softly: “Never mind. We are good friends.” I was in tears, guilt and joy. At that moment, I wished it had not happened. I wished time could go back and I could overcome my mistake. From that I got a lesson in life that we should learn to trust our loved ones, because a little mistake can lead us to ruin what we should value. Trust is the foundational principle that holds friendship. Trust is also the easiest thing in the world to lose. We need to be open and trust our friends.
解析：
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者跟萨莉结为好友，跟她分享自己私密事情，结果秘密被同学知道，并且添油加醋害的作者被同学嘲笑，所以作者果断转学，之后萨莉打电话，作者也不接，在后来一次在市场遇到以前同学安娜知道事情真相的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但有一天，我在市场上遇到了安娜，我以前的同学，她告诉我一个令人震惊的消息。”可知，第一段可描写作者知道了事情真相。
②由第二段首句内容“我立即打电话给莎莉，向她解释这个误会。”可知，第二段可描写作者和好友莎莉重归于好。
2.续写线索：真相大白——打电话——道歉——重归于好——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①爱打听别的事：put one’s nose in other people’s matters/inquisitive
②揭露秘密：bring one’s secret to light/expose a secret
情绪类
①令人震惊：shocking/surprising
②哭了：be in tears/cry
五、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写的词数应为150左右。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over her father, Ken, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging a photograph of her father with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy”, she said softly, “Why won't you come back ”
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father's death, Desiree refused to accept it “Daddy will be home soon,” she'd tell her mother. “He's at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chatting with her father “I miss you, Daddy,” she'd say. “When will you come back ” Desiree's situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken's birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother “How about if we tie a litter to a balloon.” her mother said, “and send it up to heaven ” Desiree's eyes immediately lit up.
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with HAPPY BIRTHDAY above a drawing of The Little Mermaid (美人鱼). Desire and her father had often watched it.
The child's eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken's grave. Then Desiree dictated (口述) a letter to her Dad. “Daddy, Happy birthday, I love you and miss you,” she rattled off (快速说). “I hope you get this and can write to me on my birthday in January.”
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree let fly the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till disappear. “Now Dad's going to write back to me,” Desiree said confidently.
Every day since they'd flew the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
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One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Desire's fifth birthday came and later on the afternoon, a package arrived.
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参考答案：
Paragraph 1
One day, 3, 000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eye. Curious, he approached to find a silver balloon, with a piece of paper at the end of the string, wrapped in plastic. Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines to his wife Donna. She was deeply moved. With tears in her eyes, Donna decided to help Desiree. The couple went to buy a birthday card and a book of The Little Mermaid, and then she began to write a letter to Desiree.
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Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later on the afternoon, a package arrived. Looking at the unfamiliar return address, Desiree’s mother was confused. Suddenly an idea struck her: the balloon! She opened the parcel and found a card with “For a Dear Daughter”. Her heart raced. She rushed to Desiree’s room and showed her the letter. “It’s from Daddy!” Desiree jumped with joy, asking her mother to read it for her. “Happy birthday, my little angel!” Her mother began. A big tear began to trickle down Desiree’s cheek.
解析：
通过阅读所给文章可知，4岁的小女孩Desiree 9个月前失去了父亲，她没有适应父亲的去世，认为父亲在工作，在父亲生日那天，她想给父亲寄卡片，母亲带她去商店买了气球，写了一封信绑在气球上，自从放飞了气球，她每天都问妈妈爸爸收到了没，直到几个星期后她不问了。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：一天，3000英里外，韦德正在猎鸭子，突然灌木丛中有什么东西引起了他的注意。本段应该写韦德出于好奇去查看，发现了这个银色气球和上面的信，他把信带回家，他的妻子看了信的内容，深受感动，决定帮助Desiree，回信给Desiree。第二段开头是：Desiree的五岁生日到了，下午晚些时候，一个包裹送来了。本段应该写Desiree的妈妈拿着包裹，立马想到了这个包裹可能与气球有关，打开包裹后，发现是给女儿Desiree的，她立马给女儿看，Desiree看了信后，非常开心和感动。
注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：at the end of，decide to do sth.，rush to，trickle down等高级词汇；Taking it home和Looking at the unfamiliar return address非谓语动词短语，with a piece of paper at the end of the string和With tears in her eyes是with复合结构等高级句式。
六、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Walter John was a 20-year-old college student from Homewood, Alabama. As a young man in college far away from home, he didn’t have much money. He had to work part-time to cover his living costs.
Recently he gave up his part-time job in the fast-food business and found a new one at a home-moving company called Bellhops. The pay for his new job was higher, and John gained more flexibility with his hours, which allowed him to focus on his studies a bit more. He wanted to do everything he could to secure this new employment opportunity, so he thought he had to try his best to make sure that everything would go well on his first day!
But sometimes, life hits you unexpectedly. A day before John began his new job, his car broke down! With little money to his name, he couldn’t have his car repaired at the garage. None of his friends were able to take him to work. What was worse, the public transportation was not running at his working time. If he took a taxi, it would cost him half his salary.
Therefore, he decided to walk to the company.
In order to get there by six in the morning, he thought that the safest way would be to leave at midnight. John even challenged himself to arrive there one hour earlier. Even though it seemed like such a far walk, John knew he was fit enough to do it. This was challenging, but John knew it was possible.
He grabbed his wallet and his phone and left his apartment. As soon as he stepped out of the door, he realized that walking alone in the dark at midnight can be dangerous. Moreover, he had to walk through a large wood as well as many blocks of the city. Therefore, he went back to take a bat (球棒) and a kitchen knife for safety purposes. In case a wild animal or some bad person attacked him, at least he would have something for protection.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally John started his long walk.
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At that time, a car was drawing closer.
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参考答案：
1.Paragraph 1:
Finally John started his long walk. A few hours into the trek, he saw eyes in the distance, so he grabbed his bat before realizing it was just a stray dog. He walked across the street, hoping the dog wouldn’t bother him, and he also picked up a ball and threw it in the opposite direction. It worked. John walked for three hours straight and felt great about it. His legs burned a bit, but another three hours would hurt him. He thought a quick rest could give him more energy, so it was a calculated decision to take a break.
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At that time, a car was drawing closer. When the driver, Mark, pulled up to John, he rolled down the window and asked why he was all alone in the morning on the road. John told the Mark what he was doing. Impressed by his story, Mark offered to give him a lift. Thanks to Mark’s help, John managed to make it to the destination at 5:30. With the sun peeking over the horizon, John’s face glowed with gratitude. Feeling energetic, he couldn’t wait to get started.
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Finally John started his long walk. He walked nonstop and soon he was deep in the forest. Apart from the creepy cry from owls and the rustling of trees, the wood was in a deathly silence. Unconsciously, he quickened up and held onto the bat tightly. Abruptly, a terrible howl, from what sounded like a wolf, broke the silence and startled him. He jumped up and ran as fast as his legs could carry him. He didn’t stop running until he saw a flash of light at a distance, moving quickly towards him.
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At that time, a car was drawing closer. At the sight of John, the driver slowed down and stopped. He asked cautiously, “What are you doing here at this time ” Hearing that there were probably wolves in the forest ahead, the man immediately urged John to get in and turned around the car. After John told the man why he was in the wood, the man burst into laughter, “I know your company, young man. I’m the boss. You see, I was just off work when you went to work. Now, would you like to have breakfast together ”
解析：
本文以故事发展顺序为线索展开。文章讲述了一名叫做沃尔特·约翰的穷学生不得不做兼职工作以支付生活费用。为了提高收入，他换了一份工作。在第一天上班时，因为自己汽车抛锚和公共交通停运，他不得不午夜开始步行去上班。在他走得筋疲力尽感到腿疼时，一位好心的司机搭载了他，这让他没有迟到并备受鼓舞。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“最后约翰开始了他的长途行走。”可知，第一段可描写约翰在长途步行时的感受
②由第二段首句内容“这时，一辆车开得越来越近。”可知，第二段可描写这位车主上前询问后搭载了约翰一程以及约翰在受到帮助时的内心感受。
2.续写线索：决定长途步行去上班——很累——想休息但又怕迟到——过路司机提供帮助——感受
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.横穿：walk across/ go across
②.设法做某事：manage to do/try one’s best to do
情绪类
①.感谢：thanks to one’s help/with gratitude/
②.积极：feel energetic/can’t wait to do
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高考英语读后续写写作指导
一、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's a shop I must have walked past a million times before, but have only noticed until now, and have never thought to enter. It's a little brown brick building with a small window display offering various forgettable items that are of no interest to me. But I have some extra time today and decide to take a quick look.
The interior (里面) of the shop is cool and dark，and it takes a moment for my eyes to ad- just. A strong rose smell hangs thickly in the air, which is nearly enough to turn me away. In spite of this, I continue further into the store, eyes scanning the shelves for anything interesting. Indeed, there are different items, and yet none appeals to me.
“Can I help you ”
I look up to see an elderly woman behind the counter. She looks a little surprised, and I wonder when she last saw a customer enter her shop.
“Just looking casually,” I reply.
I make a full circle of the place and there is indeed nothing here I wish to purchase. I wonder how the old woman manages to stay in business. I head towards the door, but pause when I notice a large old book on a wooden stand.
There is no visible title on the well-worn leather cover, and it is locked with a combination lock (密码锁). Beside the book, there is a paper with numbers on it. The numbers read: 02-11-32.
I try the lock with the combination, but it does not open. I am now even more curious to discover what lies between the book's pages. “What is this book about ” I ask the old woman, who has been staring at me quietly the whole time. “Do you know the combination ”
“I do,” the woman replies, but adds nothing more.
I am annoyed by her response, and I've had enough of this place. I turn to leave and I am almost out the door when I hear the woman say, “Try your birthday.”
I wander back over to the book. She's crazy, I think. With my index finger, I hit the numbers into place so that they now show my birth month, day, and year.
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1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To my astonishment, the lock opens.
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Suddenly, I hear a voice, telling me I'm the shop assistant until I find the next customer.
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参考答案：
To my astonishment, the lock opens. I pull back the heavy cover and glance through the pages. “This can’t be right,” I whisper in shock as I realize the book is a biography about me! I look up to question the woman, but she is gone and the shop suddenly seems different and brighter. The shelves are now filled with all my favorite things. I wander around the shop again. How did I miss this shop before I would buy any of these items in it gladly!
Suddenly, I hear a voice, telling me I'm the shop assistant until I find the next customer. I sit behind the counter, waiting for a customer to come in. However, they all walk past the window as though the place were invisible. The few that do enter seem uninterested in what I have to sell, or complain that the smell in the air is too strong. Until one day, a young woman takes an interest in the book. “It won't open,” she notes. “Try your birthday,” I say.
分析：
本文讲述了主人公光顾了一家平平无奇的商店，就在准备离开的时候，他发现木架上有一本用密码锁锁着的旧书，旁边的纸片上面还写着一串密码。在尝试用密码打开书失败后，他对这本书产生了更大的兴趣。这时店主告诉他，真正的密码是他的生日。强烈的好奇心驱使他在密码锁上输入了自己的生日。果然，书打开了！但与此同时，原来的店主消失了，他成为了新的守店人，直到下一位对书感兴趣的客人出现。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“令我吃惊的是，锁开了。”可知，第一段可描写锁开后我所看到的书中的内容和这一行为引起的变化。
②由第二段首句内容“突然，我听到一个声音，告诉我我是店员，直到我找到下一个顾客。”可知，第二段可描写我接替前任成为守店员后的工作和等待来下一个守店员的过程。
2.续写线索：打开书——店主消失——周围的变化——成为守店人——等待下一个顾客
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.注意到：noticed/see
②.看一看：take a quick look/have a look
情绪类
①.吃惊：surprised/astonished
②.好奇：curious/interested
二、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
BPWD is a startup company, where my workmates and I work our heads off, seeking solutions to various environmental problems. We are what people consider a group of promising young talents working in a promising industry. We are from different backgrounds but we all fit in well with the high— paced life and enjoy all the convenience that Salt Lake City can offer. We pride ourselves on all the differences we are making to this planet but our best subject for lunch break chat is what we do as volunteers to protect a lake called Lake Purilence.
We first heard about the lake from my workmate, Bluto, who referred to it as his childhood paradise, where he used to fish, swim and cast pebbles (鹅卵石) with his friends. He described the lake area as one of the few places of wildness that had not been ruined by modern tourism. He had left the place for years since his parents sold their farm near the lake and moved to the city, but he still kept dreaming of going back. In his own words, he was “nature starved”. Attracted by Bluto's description, the five of us working in the same office got on our way to it in October, 2019, taking advantage of a federal holiday.
It was a place not only lesser known but also out of the way. We took a flight first and then rented two cars at the airport. We had to travel along backroads in rental cars to finally get there but the scenery was absolutely stunning. No wonder it was loved so dearly by Bluto. All the beautiful trees and the grass were covered with red and orange leaves and the quiet lake is like a mirror reflecting the golden rays of the sun. A short distance away, we could see a few other tourists taking pictures by the lake and some white birds flying up from the water and the patches of reed marshes (芦苇荡). Amazed by the scene, our hearts longed for a closer encounter with the lake.
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1.续写的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As we got closer to the lake, however, we saw something strikingly inharmonious to the beautiful view.
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Looking at my workmates, I put forward a plan, which met their immediate approval.
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参考答案：
As we got closer to the lake, however, we saw something strikingly inharmonious to the beautiful view. At the shore of the lake we could see litters of plastic bags and bottles here and there. Out of professional sensitivity, we could see what all this means to the environment and to the wild life. The disappointment and awkwardness were especially unbearable for Bluto, as if his childhood wonderland was ruined. We felt a strong drive to help our friend restore the wonderland and protect the lake before the situation turned too serious.
Looking at my workmates, I put forward a plan, which met their immediate approval. We decided to work as a voluntary team to do what we can to turn it around. Action began right then and there. We walked around the lake to collect litters and put up no littering signs. What we didn't expect was that the other tourists joined us in our action. We also arranged regular inspections and agreed to take further actions when necessary. So far we have been able to live up to the title we give ourselves: Guards of Lake Purilence.
解析：
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在工作伙伴Bluto的描述下对Lake Purilence产生了浓厚的兴趣，作者和伙伴们来到这座湖，被它的美丽所震撼，但是当再靠近一点时，却发现了与这美丽很不和谐的事情。他们制定了计划来保护这座湖。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然而，当我们走近湖的时候，我们看到了与美丽的景色极不协调的东西。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现了湖边人们对环境的破坏。
②由第二段首句内容“看着我的同事们，我提出了一个计划，立即得到了他们的赞同。”可知，第二段可描写作者和同事们如何采取行动保护这座湖的环境。
2.续写线索：
发现——失望——冲动——计划——行动——成功
3.词汇激活
行为类
①破坏：ruin/destroy
②修复：restore/renovate
③保护：protect/guard/preserve
情绪类
①失望：disappointment/letdown
②尴尬：awkwardness/embarrassment
三、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mike took the last bite of the chocolate ice cream and jumped into the car with his parents. They headed off to the Olympic sized pool for the big swim meet.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift and won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
“Congratulations," said his father. His mother gave him a hug, even though he was wet.
A week later, it was time for another swim meet and Mike decided to eat the same ice cream. He thought that it was his luck ice cream and that it might help him win again.
He took first place again in his race. Mike was feeling pretty good. Since then, Mike has decided to have the same ice cream before every swim meet and has always won. Several months passed and Mike was feeling unbeatable. Although he wouldn't admit it, all the ice cream was adding pounds to his athletic swimmer's build.
It didn't take long before the luck ice cream had lost its magic. Mike started to slip to second place and then third place in his races. His scores kept worsening and Mike felt really bad. He knew what was wrong. But he couldn't admit it to himself and especially to his parents. He did not want to disappoint them.
One day, his mother sat down at the table with him and said, “Mike, we know you love ice cream，but maybe it's not healthy for your body to eat so much of it. Your father and 1 think it is making you gain weight. Is it OK for us to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go for the final competition In order to strengthen your muscles, your father will go running with you three days a week. We think it will help you feel better.”
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Mike unwillingly agreed.
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Finally the big competition of the season came.
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参考答案：
Mike unwillingly agreed. Every other day, he would go running with his dad. He still went to the swim meets each week but he didn't do well. Seeing that it was really hard for Mike, his father sometimes couldn't help inviting Mike to get some of his luck ice cream. But he refused the sweet treat and continued running with his father.
Finally the big competition of the season came. As he dived into the swimming pool, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as hard as he could. This race seemed much longer. When he finished the race, he felt really tired and was not sure what to expect. Suddenly he heard thundering cheers from the audience and saw his parents were smiling from ear to ear. His jaws dropped as he looked at the scores. He had beaten his own record, and everyone else's too. Mike realized he had won his race, without the help of his luck ice cream.
解析：
通过所给文章，Mike自从在一次游泳比赛前吃完一个冰激凌赢得比赛之后，他认为那是他的幸运冰激凌，之后每次比赛前都吃一个。直到由于吃多冰激凌，他体重增加，比赛成绩也越来越落后，他的父母建议他停止吃冰激凌并且在父亲的陪同下开始锻炼。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Mike不情愿地答应了。”可知，第一段可描写Mike停止吃冰激凌并且开始锻炼的详细情况。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，本赛季最重要的比赛来了。”可知，第二段可描写在坚持锻炼之后，Mike在本赛季最重要的比赛中的表现和结果。
2.续写线索：开始锻炼——坚持——参加比赛——赢得比赛——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①继续做某事：continue doing sth./go on doing sth.
②完成：finish/complete
③打败：beat/defeat
情绪类
①幸运：luck/fortune
②期待：expect/look forward to
四、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Why she let out my secret why she did that to me ” I vividly remembered that day when I was confused at the knowing looks which everyone gave me. That terrible experience was imprinted (铭刻) on my mind. I couldn’t forgive the person with whom I had shared my secret. She lost all my trust and friendship.
Five years back, Sally was a new addition in our class. I don’t know what but there was something sticky about her that attracted me towards her. She was the most friendly person I knew. We started as classmates but after a few months we were like best friends. We did homework together and dreamed of going to the same university one day. We hung out and went to the movies on weekends. That was a sweet time.
Nevertheless, I couldn’t expect such an enormous betrayal from her. I didn’t know what made me tell Sally about my personal life. I felt much regret to myself. She exaggerated (夸大) the matter, added her own spices to it and made it the hottest topic in school. It was like someone had stabbed a knife in my back. After she revealed my secret, everyone at school started laughing at me and gazing at me wherever I passed. I was like a pond in which someone had thrown a stone and it had been spilled up. It was the most embarrassing time I had gone through. Soon afterwards, I left school and shifted to another one, because I thought no one had the right to laugh at me. Sally called me many times but I didn’t answer. My heart was broken because the person whom I trusted most cheated me.
I made efforts to remove the scar from my heart. I started a new life, leaving all the bad memories behind, because they made me a person who often thought about the past experiences. Five years later, with the life going on, I made new friends and seldom thought about the past.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But one day I met Anna in the market, my former classmate, who told me shocking news.
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I immediately called Sally in order to explain the misunderstanding.
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参考答案：
But one day I met Anna in the market, my former classmate, who told me shocking news. Anna said that after I left school the gossip soon disappeared. Everyone in our class missed me. Because I left without saying goodbye, Sally was sad for a long time. And to my amazement, she told me that Sally was not the one who brought my secret to light. It was Mary who had a big mouth and always wanted to put her nose in other people’s matters. She happened to overhear my conversation with Sally. I was all at sea, feeling that the floor had slipped away beneath my feet. Anxious and regretful, I asked Anna for any contact with Sally.
I immediately called Sally in order to explain the misunderstanding. After getting through, I sincerely apologized to her. She said softly: “Never mind. We are good friends.” I was in tears, guilt and joy. At that moment, I wished it had not happened. I wished time could go back and I could overcome my mistake. From that I got a lesson in life that we should learn to trust our loved ones, because a little mistake can lead us to ruin what we should value. Trust is the foundational principle that holds friendship. Trust is also the easiest thing in the world to lose. We need to be open and trust our friends.
解析：
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者跟萨莉结为好友，跟她分享自己私密事情，结果秘密被同学知道，并且添油加醋害的作者被同学嘲笑，所以作者果断转学，之后萨莉打电话，作者也不接，在后来一次在市场遇到以前同学安娜知道事情真相的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但有一天，我在市场上遇到了安娜，我以前的同学，她告诉我一个令人震惊的消息。”可知，第一段可描写作者知道了事情真相。
②由第二段首句内容“我立即打电话给莎莉，向她解释这个误会。”可知，第二段可描写作者和好友莎莉重归于好。
2.续写线索：真相大白——打电话——道歉——重归于好——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①爱打听别的事：put one’s nose in other people’s matters/inquisitive
②揭露秘密：bring one’s secret to light/expose a secret
情绪类
①令人震惊：shocking/surprising
②哭了：be in tears/cry
五、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写的词数应为150左右。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over her father, Ken, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging a photograph of her father with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy”, she said softly, “Why won't you come back ”
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father's death, Desiree refused to accept it “Daddy will be home soon,” she'd tell her mother. “He's at work.” When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chatting with her father “I miss you, Daddy,” she'd say. “When will you come back ” Desiree's situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken's birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother “How about if we tie a litter to a balloon.” her mother said, “and send it up to heaven ” Desiree's eyes immediately lit up.
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with HAPPY BIRTHDAY above a drawing of The Little Mermaid (美人鱼). Desire and her father had often watched it.
The child's eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken's grave. Then Desiree dictated (口述) a letter to her Dad. “Daddy, Happy birthday, I love you and miss you,” she rattled off (快速说). “I hope you get this and can write to me on my birthday in January.”
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree let fly the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till disappear. “Now Dad's going to write back to me,” Desiree said confidently.
Every day since they'd flew the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
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One day, 3,000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Desire's fifth birthday came and later on the afternoon, a package arrived.
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参考答案：
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One day, 3, 000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eye. Curious, he approached to find a silver balloon, with a piece of paper at the end of the string, wrapped in plastic. Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines to his wife Donna. She was deeply moved. With tears in her eyes, Donna decided to help Desiree. The couple went to buy a birthday card and a book of The Little Mermaid, and then she began to write a letter to Desiree.
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Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later on the afternoon, a package arrived. Looking at the unfamiliar return address, Desiree’s mother was confused. Suddenly an idea struck her: the balloon! She opened the parcel and found a card with “For a Dear Daughter”. Her heart raced. She rushed to Desiree’s room and showed her the letter. “It’s from Daddy!” Desiree jumped with joy, asking her mother to read it for her. “Happy birthday, my little angel!” Her mother began. A big tear began to trickle down Desiree’s cheek.
解析：
通过阅读所给文章可知，4岁的小女孩Desiree 9个月前失去了父亲，她没有适应父亲的去世，认为父亲在工作，在父亲生日那天，她想给父亲寄卡片，母亲带她去商店买了气球，写了一封信绑在气球上，自从放飞了气球，她每天都问妈妈爸爸收到了没，直到几个星期后她不问了。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：一天，3000英里外，韦德正在猎鸭子，突然灌木丛中有什么东西引起了他的注意。本段应该写韦德出于好奇去查看，发现了这个银色气球和上面的信，他把信带回家，他的妻子看了信的内容，深受感动，决定帮助Desiree，回信给Desiree。第二段开头是：Desiree的五岁生日到了，下午晚些时候，一个包裹送来了。本段应该写Desiree的妈妈拿着包裹，立马想到了这个包裹可能与气球有关，打开包裹后，发现是给女儿Desiree的，她立马给女儿看，Desiree看了信后，非常开心和感动。
注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：at the end of，decide to do sth.，rush to，trickle down等高级词汇；Taking it home和Looking at the unfamiliar return address非谓语动词短语，with a piece of paper at the end of the string和With tears in her eyes是with复合结构等高级句式。
六、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Walter John was a 20-year-old college student from Homewood, Alabama. As a young man in college far away from home, he didn’t have much money. He had to work part-time to cover his living costs.
Recently he gave up his part-time job in the fast-food business and found a new one at a home-moving company called Bellhops. The pay for his new job was higher, and John gained more flexibility with his hours, which allowed him to focus on his studies a bit more. He wanted to do everything he could to secure this new employment opportunity, so he thought he had to try his best to make sure that everything would go well on his first day!
But sometimes, life hits you unexpectedly. A day before John began his new job, his car broke down! With little money to his name, he couldn’t have his car repaired at the garage. None of his friends were able to take him to work. What was worse, the public transportation was not running at his working time. If he took a taxi, it would cost him half his salary.
Therefore, he decided to walk to the company.
In order to get there by six in the morning, he thought that the safest way would be to leave at midnight. John even challenged himself to arrive there one hour earlier. Even though it seemed like such a far walk, John knew he was fit enough to do it. This was challenging, but John knew it was possible.
He grabbed his wallet and his phone and left his apartment. As soon as he stepped out of the door, he realized that walking alone in the dark at midnight can be dangerous. Moreover, he had to walk through a large wood as well as many blocks of the city. Therefore, he went back to take a bat (球棒) and a kitchen knife for safety purposes. In case a wild animal or some bad person attacked him, at least he would have something for protection.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally John started his long walk.
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At that time, a car was drawing closer.
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参考答案：
1.Paragraph 1:
Finally John started his long walk. A few hours into the trek, he saw eyes in the distance, so he grabbed his bat before realizing it was just a stray dog. He walked across the street, hoping the dog wouldn’t bother him, and he also picked up a ball and threw it in the opposite direction. It worked. John walked for three hours straight and felt great about it. His legs burned a bit, but another three hours would hurt him. He thought a quick rest could give him more energy, so it was a calculated decision to take a break.
Paragraph 2:
At that time, a car was drawing closer. When the driver, Mark, pulled up to John, he rolled down the window and asked why he was all alone in the morning on the road. John told the Mark what he was doing. Impressed by his story, Mark offered to give him a lift. Thanks to Mark’s help, John managed to make it to the destination at 5:30. With the sun peeking over the horizon, John’s face glowed with gratitude. Feeling energetic, he couldn’t wait to get started.
2.Paragraph 1:
Finally John started his long walk. He walked nonstop and soon he was deep in the forest. Apart from the creepy cry from owls and the rustling of trees, the wood was in a deathly silence. Unconsciously, he quickened up and held onto the bat tightly. Abruptly, a terrible howl, from what sounded like a wolf, broke the silence and startled him. He jumped up and ran as fast as his legs could carry him. He didn’t stop running until he saw a flash of light at a distance, moving quickly towards him.
Paragraph 2:
At that time, a car was drawing closer. At the sight of John, the driver slowed down and stopped. He asked cautiously, “What are you doing here at this time ” Hearing that there were probably wolves in the forest ahead, the man immediately urged John to get in and turned around the car. After John told the man why he was in the wood, the man burst into laughter, “I know your company, young man. I’m the boss. You see, I was just off work when you went to work. Now, would you like to have breakfast together ”
解析：
本文以故事发展顺序为线索展开。文章讲述了一名叫做沃尔特·约翰的穷学生不得不做兼职工作以支付生活费用。为了提高收入，他换了一份工作。在第一天上班时，因为自己汽车抛锚和公共交通停运，他不得不午夜开始步行去上班。在他走得筋疲力尽感到腿疼时，一位好心的司机搭载了他，这让他没有迟到并备受鼓舞。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“最后约翰开始了他的长途行走。”可知，第一段可描写约翰在长途步行时的感受
②由第二段首句内容“这时，一辆车开得越来越近。”可知，第二段可描写这位车主上前询问后搭载了约翰一程以及约翰在受到帮助时的内心感受。
2.续写线索：决定长途步行去上班——很累——想休息但又怕迟到——过路司机提供帮助——感受
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.横穿：walk across/ go across
②.设法做某事：manage to do/try one’s best to do
情绪类
①.感谢：thanks to one’s help/with gratitude/
②.积极：feel energetic/can’t wait to do
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