(共20张PPT)
Unit 6 At one with nature
Developing ideas—Writing
目录
contents
Pre-writing
I
Language points
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While-writing
II
Homework
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Post-writing
III
I
Pre-writing
Pre-writing: Thinking & Discussing
What is a summary
A summary of something is a short account of it, which gives the main points but not the details.
account n. 描述;叙述
Pre-writing: Thinking & Discussing
What is a summary writing
A shortened passage.
Retain the key points of the original.
A restatement in your OWN words.
retain v. 保留
Pre-writing: Thinking & Discussing
Steps to complete a summary writing:
Read for the main idea and the structure;
Read for the key points;
Rewrite the key points;
Add proper transitional words(过渡词);
Revise and polish the summary.
Pre-writing: Thinking & Discussing
Read the passage and underline the topic sentence of each paragraph.
Topic sentence of each paragraph
Para 1: British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.
Para 2: However, recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market.
Para 3: Herbal tea has various health benefits.
Check your answers
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While-writing
Their Popularity:
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Unusual flavours:
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Health benefits:
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Read the passage again and make notes under the headings.
Many people make their very own gardens with easy-to-grow herbs.
Mango, strawberry, apple, pear, blackberry leaf and dandelion
It can help people relax. It can help people’s immune systems. It can be good for digestion.
While-writing: Reading and Writing
Attention!
Write a summary of the passage. Use the notes to help you.
When writing a summary, don’t just combine all the topic sentences. Instead, reconstruct the key information to make the paragraph coherent, concise and natural.
adj 连贯的
adj 简洁的
While-writing: Reading and Writing
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Post-writing
Share your summary with our class.
Post-writing: Presentation
Post-writing: Evaluation
Questions Your evaluation Evaluator
Does the summary include the key points 4 2 0
Is the restatement written in his/her own words 3 2 1
How is the language 12 8 4 2
How is the handwriting 3 1 -1
Paper design 3 1 -1
TOTAL MARK
Post-writing: Reference Text
Fruit and herbal teas
British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs. Such a habit is so popular that many people plant easy-to-grow herbs in their own gardens. There are many flavours of herbal tea, including traditional lemon and ginger, as well as many unusual flavours such as mango, strawberry, apple, pear, blackberry leaf and dandelion.
Post-writing: Reference Text
Aside from the variety of flavours, herbal tea also has various health benefits. Some can help people relax, and some, like ginger tea, are good for the immune system, while others, such as mint tea, are beneficial for digestion.
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Language points
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各种各样的
很好地改变
易种植的草本植物
a variety of
make a nice change to
easy-to-grow herbs
Find the following phrases in the passage and work out their meanings.
Language points
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近些年见证了……
对……有积极的影响
帮助某人
免疫系统
recent years have seen…
have a positive effect on
give sb. a helping hand
immune system
Language points
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Homework
Homework
Please polish (润色) your summary and hand it in.