Unit4 Problems and advice(Writing）课件 (共17张PPT）

(共17张PPT)
9A Unit 4 Problems & Advice
Before-listening
Students’ problems and worries
homework
friends
parents
90%
40%
60%
have problems with…
not enough sleep
getting low marks
Growing up can be
difficult.You may have many problems.
being laughed at
having no close friends
not enough time to do homework
getting too many tests and exams
not good at sports/ P.E.
quarrel with parents
Aunt Linda: My friend, do you have any problems when you grow up
Student: Yes, I… Can you give me some advice
Aunt Linda : Sure, I think you should…
Pair work
妙
用
过
渡
句
Here are my suggestions.
My suggestions are as follows.
I’ll try to make some constructive
suggestions.
Here I’ll share with you my suggestions.
【展示点拨】
善
用
一二三
First… Second…Third
Firstly…secondly…Finally
Firstly…Besides…Moreover/what’s more
First of all…In addition…Last but not least
【展示点拨】
If I were him, I would…..
I think he is supposed to….
I’d like to suggest that…..
I think it would be wise to take the following action.
Ways to give suggestions:
It’s a good idea to...
It’s important for you to...
You can do…/ You can’t do…
Do…/ Don’t do…
You should do …/ You shouldn’t do…
You need to do…/ You don’t need to do…
You’d better do…/ You’d better not do…
Why don’t you do… / Why not do…
How/ What about doing…
You can consider doing
What’s the matter with…..
What’s your trouble
What’s wrong with…
What happened to….
What makes you unhappy
Do you have a problem
I have a problem of
I have trouble doing
I am worried about….
I am annoyed with
I regret not doing/doing…
It’ s awful of
ashamed/embarrassed
stressed /anxious
drive sb mad
nervous/confused
Upset/feel sorry about doing sth
用
好
祈
使
句
DO型祈使句
祈使句+
and+陈述句
Be ready to help others.
Believe in yourself.
Try to be a good listener.
Build up your confidence
and you’ll benefit from it.
Be easy-going and you’ll be
popular with your friends.
【展示点拨】
in my opinion
personally speaking,
In my eyes
As far as I am concerned
I hope my suggestions will be helpful
I will be more than happy to see improvements in this aspect.
Vote for the biggest problem in your group, then give the report.
I am always careless and get low marks in exams.
I feel lonely at school.
I can’t wear my own clothes at school.
I have to give up my favorite hobbies because of studies.
My friend often borrows money from me but never returns it.
I have too much homework to do every day.
I have …..
The problem we want to solve is …
we have this problem because…
we think we should/ we had better…
give the report
Groupwork
group leader
Joe 是一名初三的学生，由于即将面临中考，他感到十分焦虑，以致学习效率下降。假设你是Sally， 以下是你给他的一些调整心态，提高学习效率的建议：
1 多做运动，放松身心
2 保证充足的睡眠，以便课堂上更好地学习知识
3 1-2 条其它建议
Dear Joe:
Sally
五步法：
五美
四连
三列
二构
一审
书面
表达
Step by step
1. 审
2. 构
3. 列
4. 连
5. 美
人称_____ 时态_____ 要点_____
连字成句，连句成段
在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想，使文增色。
把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加细节
列出要点
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
表并列：and, besides, in addition（加之）, what’s more, …
表转折：but, yet, however, on the contrary（相反）,…
表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally…
表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, …
表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as，like…
发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point of view,…
表总结陈词：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
临考如何提高写作能力：
１．适当加强阅读量．读得越多，在潜移默化中，你提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快．
２．背诵经典文段．在平时阅读训练及范例作文中把一些经典文段整理到本子中，抽时间背诵，不能不说是积极备战，快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径．背，可以加强语感，使自己的表达更地道．
３．加强练习．加强实际写作练习至关重要．我们练习的重点是文章是否切题，行文是否流畅，有无严重语法错误等．