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There's a girl but I let her get away
It's all my fault cause _______ got in the way
And I'd be lying if I said I was OK
About that girl the one I ______ get away
I keep saying no
This can't be the way we're supposed to be
I keep saying no
There's gotta be a way to get you _______ to me
Now I know you gotta
___________ up if you want somebody
Can't let him get away, oh no
You don't wanna ________ up sorry
The way that I'm feeling every day
pride
let
close
Breaking
end
That girl
grammar
pronunciation
speaking
...
writing
new words
MH
Hi, I’m Minghua from China. I’m learning English and I feel so frustrated. There are just so many new words to remember and English grammar rules are really confusing. I become very nervous when I speak English, too.
What should I do
Give advice
Tip1: When you give advice, try to use ___________
sentence structures.
different
way
Tip3: You’d better give some ________ and ________ so that your advice can be taken easily.
reasons
examples
Give reasons
1. 翻译：你是否能学好语法取决于你的学习方法。
Whether or not you can learn grammar well depends on your learning habits.
2. You are interested in something. 连成一句
Your brain is more active.
You can pay attention to it for a long time more easily.
If you are interested in something, your brain is more active and it is also easier for you to pay attention to it for a long time.
Give reasons
3. Use it or lose it.
---Even if you learn new words well, you will forget them unless _____________.
4. I think if you speak more, you’ll be better. 同义句
The more you speak, the better you’ll be.
造句：review, remember easily
The more you review, the more easily you’ll remember.
Tip3: If you can, try to use some powerful sentences to make your reasons persuasive (有说服力).
Discussing
Each group chooses one challenge from Minghua and tries to offer at least 2 suggestions for him.
Make some notes in the chart.
Remember: 1. work in a group of 3 or 4；
2. Try to use key words in the chart;
Minghua’s one challenge:
Best ways Reasons Examples
1.
2.
3.
Tip4: Try to use some linking words to make your article coherent (连贯) and logical (有逻辑).
5 minutes!!
Writing
Write a letter to Minghua to give him some advice.
Use your notes above.
Dear Minghua,
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
I hope these tips are helpful for you. I am sure
you will feel less frustrated soon.
Good luck!
________
Self-check List
1. Do you offer at least 2 suggestions for the challenge
2. Do you list reasons for the suggestions
3. Do you have examples for the reasons
4. Do you use proper linking words
5. Do you use beautiful sentences in the article
Let’s check
Self-check List
1. Do you offer at least 2 suggestions for the challenge
2. Do you list reasons for the suggestions
3. Do you have examples for the reasons
4. Do you use proper linking words
5. Do you use beautiful sentences in the article
Yes No
Yes No
Yes No
Yes No
Yes No
Homework
1. Finish your
article and polish
it with your group
mates.
2. Share your
article with each other.
Thanks
so much!!!A Writing Lesson: Advice on English learning
Teacher School Lesson Type Writing
Material Go for it Unit1 How can we become good learners 9A Subject Give advice
Objectives
At the end of the class, students are expected to 1. be able to write an article to give advice on English learning;2. be able to offer ways, reasons and examples to make advice more reasonable and persuasive;3. be aware of using some beautiful sentences and different sentence structures to make advice better;4. share their advice with others.
Teaching Procedures
Steps Learning activities Teaching purposes
Warming up Listen to the song “That girl” and talk about the challenge in listening. To involve the students and lead to the topic: challenge
Preparing for writing 1. Challenges in learning EnglishTalk about students’ own challenges in learning EnglishGive a task about giving advice: Talk about Minghua’ challenges in learning English To show the necessity of giving advice
2. How to give adviceEncourage students to offer different ways to solve Minghua’s challenges.Tip1: When you give advice, try to use different sentence structures.Analyze the passage in 2b to find out reasons and examples for adviceTip2: You’d better give some reasons and examples so that your advice can be taken easily.Enjoy the languages in 2b to make the reasons more persuasive.Tip3: Try to polish the sentences to make your language more beautiful. To raise student’s awareness of giving advice by using ways, reasons and examples.To guide students to think about how to make the advice more easily to take.
Writing 1. Discuss in groups: Choose one challenge from Minghua and fill in the chart about the ways, reasons and examples. To let students to work together and get more ideas from each other.
2. Write a letter to Minghua to give him advice on his challenge. Use the notes in the chart above. To encourage students to practice how to give advice, based on their own discussion.
Sharing& evaluating 1. Evaluate their own articles according to checklist.2. Check some articles together and share. To provide a platform for students to learn from each other and share their writing.
Assignment 1. Finish your article and polish it with your group mates.2. Share your article with each other.That Girl歌词如下：
There's a girl but I let her get away
曾经心爱的女孩 我却让她擦肩而过
It's all my fault cause pride got in the way
自尊心作祟 一切都是我的错
And I'd be lying if I said I was ok
若说无事 其实只是谎言未戳破
About that girl the one I let get away
那个女孩 我们曾擦肩而过
I keep saying no
我一直否认
This can't be the way we're supposed to be
这不该是我们的结果
I keep saying no
我一直否认
There's gotta be a way to get you close to me
一定还有办法让我们重新来过
Now I know you gotta
到现在我才明白
Speak up if you want somebody
要对所爱之人大声诉说
Can't let him get away, oh no
别让他错过
You don't wanna end up sorry
你不愿后悔无措
The way that I'm feeling everyday
不要像我这样 终日在悔恨中度过
(Don't you know)
（你是否知晓）
No no no no
不要像我这样
There's no home for the broken heart
破碎的心 无家可归
No no no no
不要像我这样
(Don't you know)
（你是否知晓）
There's no home for the broken
破碎的心 无家可归
There's a girl but I let her get away
曾经心爱的女孩 我却让她擦肩而过
It's my fault cause I said I needed space
全都因为我说需要空间 都是我的错
I've been torturing myself night and day
我不断折磨着自己 日出日落
About that girl, the one I let get away
那个女孩 我们曾擦肩而过
I keep saying no
我一直否认
This can't be the way it was supposed to be
这不该是我们的结果
I keep saying no
我一直否认
There's gotta be a way to get you
应该还有办法
There's gotta be a way to get you
一定还有办法
Close to me
让我们重新来过
You gotta
你应当
Speak up if you want somebody
要对所爱之人大声诉说
Can't let him get away, oh no
别让他错过
You don't wanna end up sorry
你不愿后悔无措
The way that I'm feeling everyday
不要像我 终日在悔恨中度过
(Don't you know)
（你是否知晓）
No no no no
不要像我这样
There's no home for the broken heart
破碎的心 无家可归
(Don't you know)
（你是否知晓）
No no no no
不要像我这样
There's no home for the broken
破碎的心 无家可归
No home for me
无处可去
No home cause I'm broken
无家可归 失魂落魄
No room to breathe
无法呼吸
And I got no one to blame
一切只能怪我自己
No home for me
无处可去
No home cause I'm broken
无家可归 失魂落魄
About that girl
那个女孩
The one I let get away
我们曾擦肩而过
So you better
你最好
Speak up if you want somebody
对所爱之人大声诉说
You can't let him get away oh no
别让他错过
You dont wanna end up sorry
你不愿后悔无措
The way that I'm feeling everyday
不要像我 终日在悔恨中度过
(Don't you know)
（你是否知晓）
No no no no
不要像我这样
There's no home for the broken heart
破碎的心 无家可归
(Don't you know)
（你是否知晓）
No no no no
不要像我这样
There's no home for the broken
破碎的心 无家可归
Oh
哦
You don't wanna lose at love
不想失去所爱之人
It's only gonna hurt too much
唯有伤痛愈来愈深
I'm telling you
告诉你
You don't wanna lose at love
不想失去所爱之人
It's only gonna hurt too much
唯有伤痛愈来愈深
I'm telling you
告诉你
You don't wanna lose at love
不想失去所爱之人
Cause There's no home for the broken heart
心碎之人 无家可归
About that girl
那个女孩
The one I let get away
我们曾擦肩而过
There's a girl but I let her get away
It's all my fault cause pride got in the way
And I'd be lying if I said I was OK
About that girl the one I let get away
I keep saying no
This can't be the way we're supposed to be
I keep saying no
There's gotta be a way to get you close to me
Now I know you gotta
Speak up if you want somebody
Can't let him get away, oh no
You don't wanna end up sorry
The way that I'm feeling everyday
No no no no
There's no home for the broken heart
No no no no
There's no home for the brokenUnit1 How can we become good learners Writing
Class: _________ Name: ______________
Topic: Learning how to learn English
Challenges Solutions and Ways
be afraid to ask questionsmake mistakes in grammarcan’t get the pronunciation rightdon’t’ know how to increase reading speedfind the language structures difficult to understandforget the new words quicklydon’t get much writing practice listen to a tape and repeat out loudjoin an English club to practice speakingread word groups instead of reading word for wordtry many times and learn from mistakestake notes by writing down key words or by drawing mind mapsuse pictures and tables to learn grammarwrite down the correct answers next to the mistakesspell and pronounce new words aloud every daymake word lists for different topicsuse chants, songs and pictures to help remember new wordswrite four or five words a day on pieces of paperkeep a diary to practice writing
Sentence structures:You could try to improve English by ... You’d better ...The secret to learning English is by ... You don’t need to ... You just need to ...V-ing is a great way to learn English. I suggest you should ...To improve your English, you should try to ... It will be great if you ...
Writing task:
Minghua meets some problems in learning English. He released a post online and hopes to get some help. Please read it and offer some advice to help him improve English.
I. Discussing
Each group chooses one challenge from Minghua and tries to offer at least 2 suggestions for him.
Make some notes in the chart. 每组选明华其中一个问题提2-3条建议，填写表格。
Remember: 1. work in a group of 3 or 4；
2. Try to use key words in the chart.
Minghua’s one challenge:
Best ways Reasons Examples
1. 2. 3.
II. Writing
Write a letter to Minghua to give him some advice. Use your notes above.
1. Use the following expressions to help you:
There are three good ways to ... You can ... whenever ...
If you do this, you will ... The ..., the ...
This will help you to ... You will ... unless ...
2. 短文首句仅供参考：
Don’t be frustrated. Learning a new language is not easy. I can share some of my learning tips with you.
III. Let’s check.
Self-check List
1. Do you offer at least 2 suggestions for the challenge Yes No
2. Do you list reasons for the suggestions Yes No
3. Do you have examples for the reasons Yes No
4. Do you use proper linking words Yes No
5. Do you use beautiful sentences in the article Yes No
Hi, I’m Minghua from China. I’m learning English and I feel so frustrated. There are just so many new words to remember and English grammar rules are really confusing. I become very nervous when I speak English, too.
What should I do
Dear Minghua,
___________
__________________
I hope these tips are helpful for you. I am sure you will feel less frustrated soon.
Good luck!
____________
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