中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Section Ⅴ Writing
建议信
写作指导
文体感知
建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告的一种文体。写信时要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要委婉和缓。
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增分佳句
1．建议信开头常用句式：
①I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.
我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。
②I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to get along well with your classmates.
很高兴收到你的来信，就如何与同班同学相处得好来征求我的建议。
③Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.
这里有帮助你的一些建议。
④I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。
2．表达建议常用句式：
①First(ly), why not join a club If you do this, you can make friends.
首先，为什么不参加一个社团呢？如果这样做的话，你就会交到朋友。
②Second(ly), you should try to talk with others. Then/That way, you will feel better.
其次，你应该尽力与他人交谈。那样，你会感觉好一些。
③Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down.
再次，看书或听音乐将会是一个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。
④Last but not least, you should talk with her first.
最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。
⑤As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should help each other.
就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。
3．建议信结尾常用句式：
①I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
②As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the advice above.
如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，并且会愿意和你交朋友。
③I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll get along well with your classmates.
我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。
④I believe, with your trying, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
我相信，有了你的努力，你会成功克服这些困难的。
典题实例
写作要求
假如你是李华，最近你收到了你的美国朋友珍妮(Jenny)的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中还不能适应新环境，她不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你回信，内容如下：
1．向珍妮表示问候和安慰；
2．针对她的问题提出以下建议：(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；(2)遇到困难时，互相帮助。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
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词汇推敲
1．the_same_problem 相同的问题
2．worry_about_ 担心
3．take_part_in_ 参加
4．communicate_with 与……交流
5．in_trouble 处于困境
6．share_happiness_and_sorrow_with_ 与……同甘共苦
7．as_far_as...concerned 就……而言
8．make_new_friends 交新朋友
遣词造句
1．完成句子
①你进入高中后情绪低落。
You feel bad_after_entering_the_high_school．
②你的同学也面临着同样的问题。
Your classmates are facing_the_same_problem．
③你不必太担心。
You don’t have to worry_too_much_about it.
④邀请同学参加一些活动。 这有助于你们通过相互交流促进相互理解。
Try to invite your classmates to_take_part_in_some_activities together. It will help you understand each other better_by_communicating_with_them．
⑤帮助有困难的同学。
Help your classmates who_are_in_trouble．
⑥和同学同甘共苦是一个好主意。
It is a good idea if you share_happiness_and_sorrow_with your classmates.
⑦如果你能听从我的建议，你的同学会更了解你，并会喜欢和你交朋友。
Your classmates will know you better and will like to_make_friends_with_you if you can follow_my_advice.
2．句式升级
⑧用因果关系结构连接句②和句③
Your_classmates_are_facing_the_same_problem,_so_you_don’t_have_to_worry_too_much_about_it.
⑨用定语从句合并升级句④
Try_to_invite_your_classmates_to_take_part_in_some_activities_together,_which_will_help_you_understand_each_other_better_by_communicating_with_them.
⑩用 as time goes on丰富句⑦
As_time_goes_on,_your_classmates_will_know_you_better_and_will_like_to_make_friends_with_you_if_you_can_follow_my_advice.
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One possible version：
Dear Jenny,
I am sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. As far as I know, your classmates are facing the same problem, so you don’t have to worry too much about it. Here are some suggestions.
First, try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together, which will help you understand each other better by communicating with them. Besides, help your classmates who are in trouble. Last but not least, it is a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your classmates.
As time goes on, your classmates will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow my advice.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
实战演练
假设你是李华，最近你的英国笔友杰克(Jack)刚刚转入一所新学校。由于他性格内向，不擅长交朋友，所以他感到非常孤独，因此写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
I’m sorry to hear that you are lonely in your new school._________________
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Yours，
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear_Jack，
I’m_sorry_to_hear_that_you_are_lonely_in_your_new_school.However, the situation is easy to change if you can take my advice.
First of all, don’t be too worried.Everyone may have such bad times when they move to a new environment.Second，you should greet your teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus.It is always easier to make new friends when you show your friendliness first.Third，it would be a good idea if you often take an active part in class activities, which is a good way for others to learn about you.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and begin to make new friends as soon as possible.
Yours，
Li_Hua中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Section Ⅴ Writing
建议信
写作指导
文体感知
建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告的一种文体。写信时要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要委婉和缓。
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增分佳句
1．建议信开头常用句式：
①I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.
我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。
②I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to get along well with your classmates.
很高兴收到你的来信，就如何与同班同学相处得好来征求我的建议。
③Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.
这里有帮助你的一些建议。
④I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.
如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。
2．表达建议常用句式：
①First(ly), why not join a club If you do this, you can make friends.
首先，为什么不参加一个社团呢？如果这样做的话，你就会交到朋友。
②Second(ly), you should try to talk with others. Then/That way, you will feel better.
其次，你应该尽力与他人交谈。那样，你会感觉好一些。
③Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down.
再次，看书或听音乐将会是一个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。
④Last but not least, you should talk with her first.
最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。
⑤As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should help each other.
就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。
3．建议信结尾常用句式：
①I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
②As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the advice above.
如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，并且会愿意和你交朋友。
③I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll get along well with your classmates.
我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。
④I believe, with your trying, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
我相信，有了你的努力，你会成功克服这些困难的。
典题实例
写作要求
假如你是李华，最近你收到了你的美国朋友珍妮(Jenny)的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中还不能适应新环境，她不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你回信，内容如下：
1．向珍妮表示问候和安慰；
2．针对她的问题提出以下建议：(1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；(2)遇到困难时，互相帮助。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
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词汇推敲
1． _ _ 相同的问题
2． _ _ 担心
3． _ _ _ 参加
4． _ 与……交流
5． _ 处于困境
6． _ _ _ _ _ 与……同甘共苦
7． _ _ 就……而言
8． _ _ 交新朋友
遣词造句
1．完成句子
①你进入高中后情绪低落。
You feel bad_ _ _ _ _ ．
②你的同学也面临着同样的问题。
Your classmates are _ _ _ ．
③你不必太担心。
You don’t have to _ _ _ it.
④邀请同学参加一些活动。 这有助于你们通过相互交流促进相互理解。
Try to invite your classmates _ _ _ _ _ together. It will help you understand each other better_ _ _ _ ．
⑤帮助有困难的同学。
Help your classmates _ _ _ ．
⑥和同学同甘共苦是一个好主意。
It is a good idea if you _ _ _ _ your classmates.
⑦如果你能听从我的建议，你的同学会更了解你，并会喜欢和你交朋友。
Your classmates will know you better and will like _ _ _ _ if you can _ _ .
2．句式升级
⑧用因果关系结构连接句②和句③
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
⑨用定语从句合并升级句④
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
⑩用 as time goes on丰富句⑦
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
妙笔成篇
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实战演练
假设你是李华，最近你的英国笔友杰克(Jack)刚刚转入一所新学校。由于他性格内向，不擅长交朋友，所以他感到非常孤独，因此写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
I’m sorry to hear that you are lonely in your new school._________________
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Yours，
Li Hua
