Let’s Make Tiantai More Beautiful!
Tiantai is so beautiful that lots of visitors come here every here. In order to make our hometown more beautiful, we can begin with small things as students.
In our daily life, I always ________________________________
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___________________________________________________________Teaching Plan for Unit 13
Writing: Saving the earth
Materials: Go For It Grade 9
Teaching objectives:
By the end of the class, the Ss can be able to:
1. understand the structure of a passage.
2. use different sentence structures to give solutions.
3. give supporting details to explain their solutions.
4. use the linking words and beautiful phrases in their articles.
Steps Learning activities Teaching purposes
Free talk Enjoy the beauty of Tiantai. To make them be proud of their hometown.
Pre-writing Discuss problems caused while traveling and in our daily life. To help them realize some small actions can lead to a bad future.
Discuss what the government has done for the environment. Then give an example. To help Ss learn to use linking words in a passage. Also, they need to have a clear structure of the passage.
Talk about what the students do to protect the environment. To help Ss know they can begin with small things.
Give advice to ask more students to join them. To guide Ss to learn how to make their article acceptable.
To find out the sentences in the book to appeal. To raise Ss awareness of using the good sentences when writing a passage.
While-writing Write an article to show their opinions. To encourage Ss to practice what they have learned in class.
Sharing and evaluating Share the writing and evaluate them according to the worksheet. To provide a flatform for Ss to learn from other and improve their writing by sharing and evaluating.
Homework Polish the writing.(共34张PPT)
Unit 13 Writing
Tiantai is so beautiful that lots of visitors come here every year.
More and more people come to visit Tiantai,
but too many people may ________________.
be too noisy
It is convenient to travel by car,
but too many cars may ____________.
cause air pollution
Some visitors enjoy eating and drinking,
but _____________________________.
they throw rubbish everywhere
________________________________,
but _____________________________.
What has the government started to do
People clean up the rivers to keep the water clean.
More bio-toilets are built.
More trees are planted.
They ask more cleaners to clean the public places.
There are more rubbish bins in the public places.
They call up plenty of volunteers to join.
They put up notices on the streets.
Tiantai is so beautiful that a lot of visitors come every year. However, traveling also brings some problems. We need to pay attention to the problems.
The government has started to take action. ____________, people clean up the rivers from time to time _________make the water cleaner. More bio-toilets are built and more trees are planted. ________, there are ________ more rubbish bins, __________more cleaners to keep the public places clean and tidy. ___________, more volunteers take an active part in it. _________________, they put up notices to make more people realize the importance of saving the environment.
For example
in order to
Besides
not only
but also
What’s more
Last but not least
It’s our duty to make Tiantai more beautiful. Let’s take action now!
Beginning
Body
Ending
Tip1: Try to use some linking words (连接词).
As students, we can protect the environment by doing small things in our daily life.
What do you usually do to protect the environment
To cut down air pollution, we should take the bus or subway instead of driving. P98
I think simple things like bringing a bag to go shopping can help. P98
Also, I never take wooden chopsticks or plastic bags when I order takeaway food. P98
For example, you can save electricity by turning off the lights when you leave a room. P100
I think it’s a great idea that you now have to pay for plastic bags. P100
To …, we should …instead of ….
I think simple things like doing …can help/ is helpful….
We should never ….
For example, you can … by doing sth.
I think it’s a good idea/ way that ….
Tip2: Try to use different structures.
What small things can we do as students
Writing
4月22日是世界地球日，学校将举行“环保小达人”评选活动，请结合实际情况，谈谈你日常生活中的环保行为，并给其他同学提出建议，号召他们做从身边的小事做起，争做“环保小达人”。
I do, you do,
let’s do together！
Let’s take action now! P100
Everyone in this town should _______________ cleaning it up! P97
So together, our actions can ________________and _____________________! P98
We __________________any longer to take action! P100
ways to appeal
play a part in
make a difference
lead to a better future
can’t afford to wait
Let’s Make Tiantai More Beautiful!
Tiantai is so beautiful that a lot of visitors come every year. In order to make Tiantai more beautiful, we can begin with small things as students.
In our daily life, I always__________________________________
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I think everyone should play a part. ___________________________ __________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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What your and your friends do
Your advice
Make an appeal.
Self-check List
1. Do you have a clear structure in your article
2. Do you list things you do and advice for other people
3. Do you make an appeal(呼吁) to other people
4. Do you use proper linking words and good phrases
5. Do you use different sentence structures in the article
Saving the earth is saving ourselves.
Let’s take action and begin with small things.
Small actions can make a big difference.
Polish your article after class.
Think of more small things we can do in our daily life to protect the environment.
Homework
Thank you!
The government has done lots of things. It ____________ builds up more bio-toilets， ____________ cleans up the rivers and mountains. __________,
We are trying to save the earth!
Let’s Make Tiantai More Beautiful!
Tiantai is a wonderful place for traveling. However, traveling causes some problems for the environment. We need to do something to make Tiantai more beautiful.
In my daily life, I always__________________________________ __________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________ I think everyone should play a part in doing it.__________________
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All these small things could add up and become big things that could make our hometown better. Let’s take action now!
What do you usually do to protect the environment
What do you advise others to do？(at least 3 ways)
Give some examples or details.
Beginning
Body
Ending
introduction
appeal (呼吁)
Tiantai is so beautiful that a lot of visitors come every year. However, traveling also brings some problems. We need to pay attention to the problems.
The government has started to take action. ____________, people clean up the rivers from time to time _________make the water cleaner. More bio-toilets are also set up. ________, they _________ place more rubbish bins, __________ ask more cleaners to keep the public places clean and tidy. ___________, people plant more trees so that we can take in fresh air. _________________, volunteers put up notices to make more people realize the importance of saving the environment.
What has the government started to do for the environment
For example
in order to
Besides
not only
but also
What’s more
Last but not least
It’s our duty to make Tiantai more beautiful. Let’s take action now!
Beginning
Body
Ending
Tip1: Try to use some linking words (连接词).
What problems might traveling bring
There might be ____________________.
Some visitors might ________________.
There might be air pollution because most visitors drive cars when they travel.
Serious
How beautiful Tiantai is!
Let’s Make Our Hometown More Beautiful!
In order to make our hometown more beautiful, everyone should play a part. Never forget that we can begin with small things.
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Self-check List
1. Do you list ways/ solutions to deal with the problem
2. Do you make an appeal(呼吁) to the other people
3. Do you use proper linking words and good phrases
4. Do you use different structures in the article
What do you usually do to protect the environment
What do you advise others to do？
Give some specific suggestions.
Beginning
Body
Ending
introduction
appeal (呼吁)
Let’s Make Our Hometown More Beautiful!
In order to make our hometown more beautiful, everyone should play a part. Never forget that we can begin with small things.
For example,______________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All these small things could add up and become big things that could make our hometown better. Let’s take action now!
Let’s begin with small things in order to
protect the environment!
1. To…, we should… instead of….
2. I think simple things like doing sth.… can help.
3. I never do….
4. You can do… by doing sth.
5. It’s a good idea/ way that….
6. It’s +adj. for sb. to….
……
Tip2: Try to use different structures.
How beautiful Tiantai is!
What are the problems in our daily life
The government has done lots of things in order to solve the problems from traveling
Who can help solve the problems caused in our daily life
Everyone should play a part.
