(共16张PPT)
Module 2 The natural world
Unit 4 Seasons
第5课时 Writing
目录
01
写作乐园
02
课堂练习
写作乐园
话题四 描述最喜欢的季节
【短文写作】
一年有四季,你最喜欢哪个季节呢?请以“My favourite season is …”为题写一篇短文。80词左右。
要点:1. 描述你最喜欢的季节;
2. 你喜欢该季节的原因。
My favourite season is ___________
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【写作指导】
此篇作文以最喜欢的季节为主线,主要内容是谈论个人最喜欢的季节和喜欢的缘由。写作内容渗透着本单元的话题和语言目标——谈论季节和当季的活动。
在写作过程中要明确以下几点:
1. 由作文要谈的内容“My favourite season is_______”决定我们在写作中所用时态要以一般现在时为主。
2. 从话题内容看,我们可以描述自己最喜欢的季节的气候、食物以及可以从事的典型活动和庆祝的节日等。如果介绍春天(spring),可从春天的特点,如天气、植物的变化和自己的活动等来说明。从自身观察入手,如感受到天气变暖,阳光舒服;有时会下雨,下雨后植物更绿了;可以和朋友们一起在草地上放风筝、抓蝴蝶、玩游戏等。
【范文赏析】
My favourite season is spring
There are four seasons in a year. My favourite season is spring. Spring is colourful. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves turn green and flowers of every kind are in bloom. The birds sing in the tree. The weather gets warm. The sunlight is gentle. Sometimes it rains, and the plants look greener after the rain. In spring, I can fly kites, catch butterflies and play games on the grass with my friends. It’s interesting to take a trip in spring. Spring is my favourite season!
课堂练习
一、写作仿写
1. start to do / doing sth. 开始做某事
【例句】He started playing the piano at the age of six. 他在6岁的时候开始学习弹钢琴。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)冰开始融化了。
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(2)我妈妈每天九点钟开始上班。
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The ice started to melt / melting.
My mum starts to work / working at 9 o’clock every day.
2. spend time / money (in) doing sth. 花时间 / 金钱做某事
spend time / money on sth. 在某事物上花时间 / 金钱
【例句】She spends all day (in) learning English. 她花一整天的时间学习英语。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)我花了两个小时解这道数学题。
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(2)他们花了两年时间造这座桥。
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I spent two hours on this Maths problem.
They spent two years (in) building this bridge.
3. get+adj. 变得
【例句】The weather is getting warm. 天气渐渐变暖了。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)我们的生活变得越来越好了。
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(2)在冬季,白天变得更短。
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Our lives are getting better and better.
In winter, days get shorter.
4. It is+adj. for sb.to do sth. 做……是怎么样的
【例句】It is happy for us to play football. 对我们来说,踢足球是很开心的。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)在秋天去野餐是很令人放松的事情。
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(2)在暑假时去旅游是很令孩子们兴奋的事情。
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It is relaxing for people to have a picnic in autumn.
It is exciting for children to take a trip during the summer holiday.
5. … because … ……因为……
【例句】I like autumn because the weather is comfortable.我喜欢秋天,因为天气很舒服。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)我们需要多做运动,因为运动有益于我们的健康。
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(2)杰克今天很开心,因为他可以去电影院看电影。
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We need to do more sports because they are good for our health.
Jack is very happy today because he can watch a film at the cinema.
二、书面表达
请根据下面的内容要点,以“The Mid-Autumn Festival”为题,写一篇关于中秋节的短文。
要点:1. 中秋节在秋天,那时天气不太热也不太冷,非常凉爽;
2. 那天我们全家一起吃月饼,晚上赏月;
3. 小孩子们是最开心的,因为他们可以玩游戏,也可以玩
花灯;
4. 中秋节是我最喜爱的节日。
提示词:点花灯 light lanterns
要求:1.80词左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数内;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
The Mid-Autumn Festival
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The Mid-Autumn Festival is in autumn. In autumn, the weather is not too hot or too cold. It is very cool. During the festival, our family have moon cakes together. And we also watch the Moon at night. The children are the happiest. They can play games and light lanterns. It is interesting for them to run here and there with the beautiful lanterns. This festival is for family reunion, so it’s my favourite festival.
谢 谢!