话题复习 写作之微技能 (共16张PPT)

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《中考英语话题复习》
书面表达微技能指导与训练5
语言的丰富性——句式多样性策略
语言的丰富性——句式多样性策略
句式多样性能体现语言丰富性。只有句式多样化，文章才会生动有趣，充满活力。句式多样性指的是同一内容用不同的句式来表达。也可指通过变换句子的结构，使文章的语言灵动而不单一。
【微技能指导】
一、不同句式表达同一内容
宁波中考作文
三年的初中生活让你收获满满。校英语报邀你写一篇短文，给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或他们的父母提一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象，阐述你的观点。
这篇文章需用到提建议的句型。以建议学弟学妹要多参加各种社团为例：
1. Why not / Why don’t you join some clubs
2. You’d better join some clubs
3. It’s a good idea to join some clubs.
4. I suggest you should join some clubs.
5. I advise you to join some clubs.
6. What / How about joining some clubs
7. It’s best to join some clubs.
8. It is important for you to join some clubs.
9. Try to join some clubs.
10. Don’t forget to join some clubs.
11. Joining some clubs will be good for you.
12. ...
类似的例子还有兴趣与爱好话题的描述，我们如果通篇使用I like ...，那该是多么单调啊！如果用丰富的句型替换，如：be crazy about, be fond of, be interested in, be good at, nothing is more enjoyable than ..., another hobby is ..., spend lots of time doing sth. ... 等来替换like，文章会更有层次。这就是不同句式表达同一内容的方法策略。
二、变换句型结构
▲主语句式（句型）多样性
一篇文章尽量使用不同的主语，也是语言丰富性的一种体现。如下面描述语言学习问题的片段：
My biggest problem is that I can’t memorize English words. I usually spend lots of time doing that, but it doesn’t work. Another thing I feel difficult is that I’m afraid to speak English in front of class. What’s more, I’m worried about my writing. There are always a few mistakes in my composition. What should I do
以上片段中不同主语的更迭，尽显语言风采。下面介
绍6种不同主语句式。
1. it做形式主语或动词不定式作主语：It is + adj. + to do sth.
①It is necessary for us to eat fresh fruit and
vegetables every day.
②It is good for our health to take a walk after dinner.
2.动名词作主语
①Reading English newspapers is a good way to
improve your English.
②Playing ball games is popular in our school.
3.名词性从句作主语
①What you have done for me makes me moved
a lot.
②When we’ll go for a picnic depends on the
weather.
4. 被动语态
①English is spoken by the most people around
the world.
②The bike was stolen last night.
5. There be 句型
①There are lots of ways to learn English well.
②There is a piano in the corner.
6. 在原有的句子前添加一个主语
①My biggest problem is that I can’t memorize
English words.
②Another thing I feel relaxed is that we can listen
to music before class.
▲改写的妙用
1. He should get to school on time.
→He is expected / supposed to get to school on
time.
2. The film is very interesting.
→The film is nothing but interesting.
3. He speaks good English.
→He speaks perfect English
4. In fact, it’s quite easy.
→As a matter of fact, it’s quite easy.
5. The mobile phone is very good and is sold
everywhere in China.
→The mobile phone is of high quality and is sold
everywhere in China.
6. Meimei, a 17-year-old girl, has been learning
English for 12 years.
（同位语换成非限制性定语从句）
→Meimei, who is seventeen years old, has been
learning English for 12 years.
7. He wants to go to Tsinghua University. He
works really hard.
（用非谓语动词开头）
→In order to go to Tsinghua University, he
works really hard.
8. The sight was really amazing. He took lots of
photos.
（合并句子）
→The sight was so amazing that he took lots of
photos.
9. Our school trip was very wonderful.
（改感叹句）
→How wonderful our school trip was!
10. He broke the window.
（改强调句）
→It was he who broke the window.
【微技能指导】
今年的九月，你要开始高中生活了，这个阶段是我们人生中的一个重要时期。在即将到来的暑假中，为了更好地适应高中的学习生活，你要打算做些什么？
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
2. 词数在110词左右。
I will enter senior high school in September. I will do something during the summer vacation.
First of all, I will spend a month reviewing lessons. In addition, I will take exercise. It can help keep me strong. What’s more, I will make myself well-prepared by previewing the lessons in senior high school. Last but not least, I will learn to take care of myself.
I hope that I will live a wonderful life.
请根据题目要求，综合运用我们所学的写作微技能，如审题、主题句、支持句、1+N拓展策略、扩句、句式多样性等，对所给的文本进行修改，使文本更具有逻辑性和丰富性！
I will enter senior high school in September. You can't imagine how excited I am! In order that it can help me adapt to my new school life. I plan to do something useful during the summer vacation.
First of all, I decide to spend almost a month reviewing what the teacher taught me in junior high school. In addition, I am going to take more exercise with my parents, which will help keep me physically strong. Most importantly, I would like to make myself well-prepared by previewing the lessons in
senior high school so that I can have a better
understanding of them. Last but not least, in order to
learn to be independent, I make a decision to learn to
take good care of myself. I must try to do some
housework, such as washing the clothes, making the
bed.
I do hope that I will live a wonderful life after I
carry out the plans above.