人教版（2019）选择性必修第一册Unit 1People of Achievement 应用文写作之人与自我之人物介绍（写作课）课件 (16张ppt)

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应用文写作之人物介绍
Father of two bombs.
Mother of millions of
babies.
The first Chinese
woman awarded
by the Nobel
Prize.
Our national
hero for fighting
against Novel Coronavirus.
They are great people who deserve our respect.
Lead in
Learning Aims:
Write an essay about the person I respect.
The person I respect
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read the content
form the structure
Reading and writing can't be separated. Reading is breathing in, writing is breathing out.
Information
Read for content
Age
Education
Occupation
Life goal
Appearance
Achievement
Hobbies
What have you known about the information
Quality
Read for content
Age:
Occupation:
Education:
Life goal:
Appearance：
Achievement:
Hobbies:
Qualities:
90 years old
scientist, specialist
Southwest Agricultural College
finding ways to grow more rice
sunburnt face and arms, slim and strong body
super hybrid rice
listening to violin music, playing mah-jong,swimming and reading
generous, devoted, hard-working...
23 years old（1953）
60 years old （1990）
90 years old（2020）
He is a_____________person,who____________________.
persistent
never gives up his dream
Organize the content
Content
Structure
Qualities...
Show respect...
The person I respect
Age,Occupation...
(choose 3 or 4 aspects)
Write an article about Yuan Longping. ( 90-100 words)
Structure Beginning Body Ending First Draft
The person I respect
The person I respect is Yuan Longoping.______________
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In my opinion, he is a ________person,who____________
___________________.What's more, he is a _____________
person,who________________________________________.
Besides,he is a ________person,who____________________
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In the end,_______________________________________
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Write an article:
Write an article about Yuan Longping. ( 90-100 words)
Structure Beginning Body Ending First Draft
The person I respect
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Write an article:
1. a clear structure
2.a beautiful handwriting
3. no spelling mistakes
4.no grammar errors
1.Does the writer use a clear structure
(beginning, body, ending)
2.Does the writer have a beautiful handwriting
3.Does the writer make any spelling mistakes
4.Does the writer make any grammar errors
Checklist :
Exchange your drafts:
What do you want to be in the future
Which kind of person do you want to be
Homework:
Please read the articke and write an essay about Zhong Nanshan.
First Draft
The person I respect
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See you next time!