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Module 4 Fun time
Unit 8 Collecting things
第5课时 Writing
目录
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写作乐园
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课堂练习
写作乐园
话题八 我的收藏品
【短文写作】
很多人都有收藏东西的爱好。请你以“My collection”为题写一篇短文。80词左右。
要点:1. 你的收藏爱好是什么?描述一下你的收藏品;
2. 你从何时开始有此爱好?描述你的第一个收藏
品是怎么得到的;
3. 你收藏该物品的原因。
My collection
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【写作指导】
此篇作文以谈论收藏为主线,主要内容是谈论个人的收藏爱好、原因及收藏品的来源。写作内容渗透着本单元的话题和语言目标——谈论个人的收藏爱好、收藏品、收藏的意义。
在写作过程中要明确以下几点:
1. 由作文要谈及的内容“My collection”决定我们在写作中要以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。
2. 结合话题内容,我们在写作过程中会大量用到表达收藏的短语和句型。
【范文赏析】
My collection
I like collecting stamps. I started collecting stamps at the age of eight. My first stamp was from my father. He gave it to me as a New Year present. The stamp had a picture of monkey on it. The picture was beautiful. This made me interested in stamps. Then I started to look for more stamps. Now I have more than 50 stamps. From the stamps, I learn a lot about Chinese culture. Collecting stamps brings me not only knowledge but also a lot of fun. It makes me happy.
课堂练习
一、写作仿写
1. a collector of … ……的收藏者
【例句】He is a collector of works of art. 他是艺术作品的收藏者。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)艾伦是一名铅笔收藏者。
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(2)我是贝壳的收藏者。
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Alan is a collector of pencils.
I’m a collector of seashells.
2. doing sth. is+adj.做某事是……的
【例句】Doing morning exercises is good for our health. 做早操对我们的身体健康有益。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)收集贺卡很有趣。
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(2)学习英语很重要。
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Collecting cards is very interesting.
Learning English is very important.
3. be interested in对……感兴趣
【例句】He is interested in fishing.他对钓鱼很感兴趣。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)他对阅读很感兴趣。
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(2)我对收集钥匙环感兴趣。
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He is interested in reading books.
I am interested in collecting key rings.
4. follow sb. into 跟随某人进入
【例句】The children followed the teacher into the classroom. 孩子们跟着老师进了教室。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)游客跟随导游进了公园。
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(2)这个男人跟随着她进入屋子,然后偷了她的钱。
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The visitors followed the guide into the park.
The man followed her into the house and stole her money.
5. be bad for … 对……有害的
【例句】Smoking is bad for our health. 吸烟对我们的健康有害。
【仿写】(汉译英)
(1)吃太多的糖对你的牙齿不好。
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(2)吃薯片对你的身体不好。
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Eating too many sweets is bad for your teeth.
Eating chips is bad for your health.
二、书面表达
我们每个人都有很多兴趣爱好。有人喜欢听音乐、看电影,也有人喜欢读书、爬山,而你喜欢收藏各种书籍。请根据下面的内容提示写一篇文章介绍自己收藏的书籍。
要点: 1. 从八岁开始收藏书籍;
2. 现在有100多本书籍;
3. 第一本书是妈妈给的,第二本书是来自好朋友的
生日礼物,之后就喜欢上了收藏书籍。
提示词:不同的 different 礼物 present
要求:1. 80词左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;
4. 标点正确,书面整洁。
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Everyone has different hobbies. As for me, I love collecting books. I started to collect books when I was eight years old. Now I have over 100 different books. They are so meaningful. The Little Prince was the first book I got from my mother. She hoped I would like making friends with others. The second one was a birthday present from my best friend. From then on, I liked collecting books. I always spend my free time reading them.
I like collecting books because they are not only interesting, but also educational. I learn a lot from books.
谢 谢!