中考专区二轮专题----书面表达记叙文写作教学课件(共10张PPT)

(共10张PPT)
theme (主题)
plot (情节)
Are there any photos that are special to you
Who are in the photo
When and where was it taken
Why is it special to you
What’s the theme of the story
…are/ is in the photo. It was taken…. It is very special to me because…. From this experience, I learnt…/ I will never forget…
Writing task
（2017年重庆中考A卷）在过去的日子里，我们曾经欢笑，也曾经哭泣……照片，或将这些精彩定格，或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事。
要求：
故事必须原创；
80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称
参考要点：
描述你的照片（时间，地点，人物……）；
分享你的故事（起因，经过，结果……）；
谈谈你的感受（感动，怀念，影响……）。
happy or sad moments
have influenced or moved us greatly
Plot情节
theme
have a clear theme
keep to the theme
be attractive and lively
Writing tips
A good story should
Good plots (changes)
More details
Beautiful expressions
Possible version
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, there are three people, my parents and I. It was my first time to go to the beach and I had a great time. I remember I saw the sea. It was really blue and beautiful. And the big beach made me feel relaxed and happy. I tried to dig a hole on the beach and I was interested in something on the beach. I had looked for a lot of things I want. And my parents and I went together to play next to the sea. I would never forget how beautiful the sea is. I was so happy that I didn't want to leave. My parents and I took a photo there to write down this exciting memory.
It was the day I will never forget and it was the best photo that I will keep forever.
Have a clear theme and keep to it!
Possible version
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was ten, while my dad looked younger. Look, we're playing ping-pong happily.
I used to be a ping-pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day's work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “never give up, dear. I'm proud of you!”
Now, I spend less time playing ping-pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!
Beautify the sentences!
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was having a picnic with my classmates and the teacher.
When I was in Grade 8, we had a school trip to the mountains. It was sunny, the flowers and trees along the way were very beautiful. We were all in excitement at first. But it was too long to see the end of the road, I was so tired that I was about to stop and give up. At that time, some of my classmates slowed down and encouraged me to keep walking. And my teacher put his hand on my shoulder to give me power and energy. Finally, I reached the top where I enjoyed the most beautiful views that I had never seen before.
Thanks to my teacher and classmates, I will never forget the joy at the top of the mountain!
Possible version
have a clear theme
keep to the theme
be attractive and lively
Polish your writing according to the check list and share your story with your classmates.
Both laughter and tears are the best gifts from life.
Let’s enjoy the taste of life!