20223年人教版九年级中考作文专项 安全与健康(1)课件

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九年级英语一轮复习
话题作文---安全与健康
典例分析
近年来，学生意外事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们应该如何自我保护呢？请你用英语给学校广播站写一封信并提出一些建议吧。要求：100字左右。
审题：
一、主题：
二、人称：
三、时态：
四、文体/格式：
自我保护（安全）
第一人称
一般现在时
说明文/书信
审要点：
现状；安全的重要性
保证安全的建议
写作提示
近年来，学生意外事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们应该如何自我保护呢？请你用英语给学校广播站写一封信并提出一些建议吧。要求：100字左右。
写作框架：
开头：现状+安全重要性
中间：建议/措施
结尾：观点/倡议
佳作欣赏
Dear class，
As we know that a great number of dangers and accidents happen to teenagers nowadays, which cause forever pain to families. So It is necessary for us to know how to protect ourselves.
How to prevent being hurt I’d like to share some my advice with you.Firstly, we are supposed to obey the traffic rules. Never cross the road when the traffic lights are red. And remember that teenagers are not allowed to drive. Beside, Never share personal information with strangers while surfing the Internet or making friends on line. What’s more, don’t be afraid to ask parents or teachers for help whenever you are in trouble, for they have more experience and love you.
Above all, Life is the first wealth to everyone. We should take safety seriously and learn something about self-protection.
Yours,
Li Hua
当堂写作
当前，冠状病毒性肺炎（NCP）的爆发严重损害了人们的健康，给社会带成了巨大的负面的影响。请你用英文写一篇100字左右的短文，谈谈如何预防新冠肺炎。要点如下：
1.减少外出，若外出时佩戴口罩 2.勤洗手 3...（请至少补充一条）
审题：
一、主题：
二、人称：
三、时态：
四、文体/格式：
预防病毒（保持健康）
第一人称
一般现在时
说明文（建议/措施）
审要点：
现状+预防病毒的重要性
预防疾病的措施
写作提示
当前，冠状病毒性肺炎（NCP）的爆发严重损害了人们的健康，给社会带成了巨大的负面的影响。请你用英文写一篇100字左右的短文，谈谈如何预防新冠肺炎。要点如下：
1.减少外出，若外出时佩戴口罩 2.勤洗手 3...（请至少补充一条）
写作框架：
开头：现状+预防病毒的重要性
中间：建议/措施
结尾：观点/倡议
开头：
中间
结尾
速构提纲
当前，新冠病毒肺炎肆虐，严重损害了人们的健康，对社会造成
了负面影响。我们应该积极采取措施预防疾病。
尽量减少外出或去人员拥挤的地方，外出时必须带口罩；
保证卫生，勤洗手，进门后换洗衣服；
3. 早睡早起，锻炼身体，健康饮食，增强抵抗力；
4.劳逸结合，减缓压力，保持积极的心态。
健康是最大的财富，让我们行动起来，健康自己，抵御病毒！
一、提分好词
请大家头脑风暴，想一些关于本作文话题的好词汇吧！
1. 新型冠状病毒肺炎
2. 爆发、肆虐
3. 损害健康
4. 对……造成不好的影响
5. 采取措施
6. 预防疾病
1.The novel coronavirus pneumonia
2. Outbreak
3. Be harmful to health=do harm to health
=be bad for health
4. Have a bad influence on……
5. Take action/ take measures to
6. Prevent diseases/illnesses
1. 减少外出
2. 佩戴口罩
3. 勤洗手
4. 换洗衣服
5. 增强抵抗力/体质
6. 劳逸结合
7. 减少压力
8. 保持积极的心态
1. Avoid going out
2. Wear a mask
3. Wash hands frequently
4. Change your clothes
5. Increase resistance/immunity/
build up one’ body
6. Combine/balance work and rest
7. Reduce pressure/ Don’t put too much pressure on yourself
/Don’t push yourself so hard
8. keep an active attitude.
/maintain a positive attitude.
常见的话题相关短语
keep fit / healthy=be in good health
keep safe / keep safety in mind
form good living/eating habits 养成好生活/饮食习惯
face difficulties with courage 勇敢地面对困难
keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食
Eat healthy / junk food
mental and physical health 身心健康
get rid of bad habits戒掉坏习惯
build up one’s body 增强体质
二、提分好句
1.巧用比较级
1)没有什么比健康更重要。
2)越运动，越健康。
Nothing is more important than heath.
Health is more important /precious/valuable than anything else.
The more exercise you do, the healthier you will be.
In a way，it seems more important to prevent diseases by reducing pressure and keeping an active attitude.
4)在某种程度上，减少压力，保持积极的心态在预防疾病方面至关重要。
3)早睡早起能使我们更聪明，更健康。
Early to bed and rise can make us smarter and healthier.
1.We are supposed to / ought to/ should ……
2.We’d better ……
3.We have to /must/need to……
4.I don’t think sixteen-year-olds should be allowed to …
5. 祈使句
Ask for help whenever you are in trouble…
Never cross the road without looking carefully.
Don’t share personal information with strangers.
2.提出建议
建议句型练习
为了防止感染（infect），我们应该尽可能减少外出。
我们最好早睡早起，这样才能拥有更加健康的身体。
我们需要学习一些抵御病毒的方法来保护自己，远离疾病。
To prevent us from being infected，we are supposed to/ought to/ should
go out as little as possible/ avoid going out as much as possible.
We’d better go to bed and rise early so that we can have a healthier body.
We need to learn some ways of preventing the virus to stay away from diseases/ illness.
出门不戴口罩是不允许出门的。
不要吃太多的垃圾食品，多吃蔬菜水果才能使我们保持健康。
不要熬夜上网，否则会严重损害你的视力(eyesight) 。
We are not allowed to go out without wearing a mask.
Don’t eat too much junk food. Eating more vegetables and fruits
make us healthier.
Never stay up late to surf the Internet, otherwise/ or it will hurt your eyesight seriously.
1. It is necessary for us to keep a balanced diet.(有必要）
2. It is very important for us teenagers to keep safe.
3. It is dangerous to push each other when we go upstairs or
downstairs.
3.巧用it形式主语
It is difficult/interesting/dangerous/important/impossible/
necessay/wise/impolite..... to do sth
1.上学路上和同学结伴而行是明智的。
2. 我认为劳逸结合是很有必要的。
3. 对于人类来说，滥杀（hunt）、捕食野生动物是非常危险的。
it句型练习
It is wise to walk together with your classmates on our way to school.
I think it is necessary to combine/ balance work and rest.
It is very dangerous for humans to hunt and eat wild animals.
1. An apple a day keeps the doctor away 一天一苹果，医生远离我
2. Health is the first wealth. 健康是第一财富
3. Life lies in movement. 生命在于运动
4. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
早睡早起使人健康，富有和聪明。
5. Reading is to the mind while exercise to the body. 读书健脑，运动强身。
6. There is no doubt/denying that……
7. As we all know that/ As is known to all that…
4.巧用名言、谚语
当前，冠状病毒性肺炎（NCP）的爆发严重损害了人们的健康，
给社会带成了巨大的负面的影响。请你用英文写一篇100字左右的短文，
谈谈如何预防新冠肺炎。
要点如下：
1.减少外出，若外出时佩戴口罩
2.勤洗手
3...（请至少补充一条）
跃跃欲试
范文
There is no denying that the NCP outbreak is the hottest topic these days, it does great harm to our health and has a bad influence on our society. Everyone should take measures to prevent the diseases..
First, we are supposed to try not to go outdoors and avoid going to crowded places. In addition, wearing a mask is one of the most effective ways to protect us from getting infected. What’s more, it is necessary for us to develop a habit of washing hands frequently and changing clothes after getting back. Remember to do exercise and go to bed early, this will make us stronger and healthier. Last but not least, we’d better reduce some of our pressure and try to balance our study and rest to keep healthy.
Health is the first wealth. I strongly advise us to carry out these actions to make sure of our health.
Thank you!