2023年中考英语作文专项 经历与感受课件(共17张PPT)

(共17张PPT)
话题作文---经历与感受
命题角度
1.自己的经历和感受（I did it 2017；the biggest
change I have ever made 2016）
2.他人的经历对自己的影响（你想和哪位名人共进
晚餐2019；通过刘伟的故事得到什么启示2011）
教材链接
中考链接
我们每天都要做很多事情，有些还很棘手。请以“I did it！”为题，根据要点和要求写一篇短文，描写一件你完成的棘手的事情。（2017河南）
要点：1）你做了什么？
2）你是如何完成那件事的？
3）事后的感受？
审题：
一、主题：
二、人称：
三、时态：
四、文体：
我完成了一件棘手的事
第一人称
一般过去式+一般现在时
记叙文
审要点：
棘手的事情是什么？
我是如何完成得？
感受
拓展词汇：heart-broken 心碎的 grateful 感激的 （be grateful for…）
upset 失落的，沮丧的 unforgettable （事物）难忘的
名言好句帮我提分
1. Mother is the mother of success.
2. While there is a will，there is hope. 只要有决心，就会有希望。
3. Nothing is impossible for a willing heart. 心之所愿，无所不成。
4. Great hopes make great man.
5. God helps who help themselves.
6.Better late than never.
7. It’s the first step that costs troublesome.万事开头难。
8. Storms make trees take deeper roots. 风暴使树木深深扎根。
9. Actions speak louder than words.
10. Thanksgiving is a spiritual treasure. 感恩是一种精神宝藏。
好句仿写
1.When I was in Grade 6, I took part in a piano competition.(八下Unit6 P40)
2.When I was an 11-year-old boy, I was a little shy.
1. 经历 when…， 主语+过去式
牛刀小试
1.当我上四年级的时候，我开始反对我妈妈的观点了。
2.作为一个8岁的男孩，当我和别人交流的时候，我总是脸红心跳。
When I was in Grade 4, I began to disagree with/ got against my mother.
As an 8-year-old boy, when I communicated with others, my face always turned red and my heart beat fast.
好句仿写
1.I didn’t have courage to answer questions in class.
2.I didn’t have courage to ask teachers for help.
1. 经历 don’t have the courage to do sth
牛刀小试
1.三年前，我没有勇气和我喜欢的人交朋友。
2.当我刚进入这个学校的时候，我没有勇气和同学们大声地交流（exchange）观点。
Three years ago, I didn't have courage to make friends with people I like.
When I first entered the school, I didn't have courage to exchange my ideas with my classmates loudly.
好句仿写
1.Much to my regret, I didn’t have courage to admit my mistakes at that time.
2.Much to my surprise, he didn’t mind it and talked to me as usual.
1. 经历 much to sb’s + n，sb. +过去式
牛刀小试
1.使我大为遗憾的是，我没有在我最好的年龄全力以赴做我应该做的事。
2.使我大为惊讶的是，在过去的两个月里，他竟然变化这么大。
Much to my regret, I didn't try my best to do what I should do in my best time.
Much to my regret, such great changes have happened to him over the past two months.
好句仿写
1.I lost my notebook. How upset I was!
2.Finally I did a creative job. How proud I was!
2. 感受
牛刀小试
1.我在月考（the monthly exam）中获得了较好的成绩。我多么激动啊！
2.他帮我打破了我的记录。我多么感激（grateful）啊！
I got a better result in the monthly exam. How excited I was!
He helped me break my record. How grateful I was!
陈述句+感叹句
好句仿写
1.I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after the terrible earthquake. (八下Unit5 P38)
2.I liked the book so much that I made up my mind to read it carefully over and over again.
2. 感受
牛刀小试
1.我是如此得紧张以至于我不知道该说什么。
2.我是如此得喜欢他以至于我想一遍又一遍地听他的故事。
I was so nervous that I didn't know what to say.
I liked him so much that I made up my mind to read his story again and again.
好句仿写
So…that…
好句仿写
1.From his experience, I learned the importance of making good decisions and being in control of one’s life.(八下Unit1 P6)
2.From his experience, I learned that nothing is impossible for a willing heart.
牛刀小试
1.从他的经历中，我学到了合理地安排好时间的重要性。
2.从他的经历中，我学到了你永远不知道什么是可能的，除非你努力让它发生。
From his experience, I learned the importance of managing my time properly.
From his experience, I learned that you would never know what's possible unless you made it happen.
3.他人对自己的影响
From his experience, I learned …
好句仿写
1.His story taught me not to give up fighting for the bright future.
2.Her great story taught me that many new ways could be found when the old way didn’t work.
牛刀小试
1.他的故事教我当遇到困难的时候不要放弃。
2.他的故事教会了我有志者，事竟成。
His great story taught me not to give up when facing difficulties.
His great story taught me that where there is a will, there is a way.
3.他人对自己的影响
His story taught me（not）to do sth
佳作赏析
As is known to all that difficulties and challenges are full of our life. I achieved a big challenge by myself three years ago.
When I was in Grade 6，I was asked to climb Mount Song with my class. At the begining, I felt so excited that my body was filled with energy. As time went by, much to my surprise, tiredness made my step slow down and the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. At that time, the story of the famous mountain-climber Aron came up. His great story taught me the importance of making good decisions and being in control of my life, so I insisted on climbing to the top. How proud I was at that time! I’ve grown into a strong-minded person after this experience. I did it！
It’s the first step that costs troublesome. But I believe if we insist on it, the difficulties past will make us stronger. Climbing to he top, I have also reached a new height in my life.
档次 评分标准
五 17-20分 内容涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，书写规范，词汇丰富，没有或极少语法错误，长度符合要求100--130。
四 13-16分 内容涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，书写规范，词汇比较丰富，少量语法错误，文本长度符合要求。
三 9-12分 基本涵盖要点，结构规范，行文比较连贯，书写规范，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误，文本长度符合要求。
二 5-8分 要点不完整，行文不连贯，书写不规范，词汇不够丰富，较多错误，文本长度不符合要求。
一 o-4分 能用句子表达，错误百出。有一些英文单词，但与话题不相干。
英语作文评分标准
成长的过程中，总有一些令你难忘的经历，或美好，或难过。请以“An unforgettable experience in my mind”为题，描述你难忘的一次经历。不得出现真实姓名，词数100左右。
要求：1）这次经历是什么；
2）这次经历是如何发生的；
3）你从中学到了什么。
写作练兵
Thank you!