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课件34张PPT。Writing 初中英语
写作技巧
认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审
Examine the topic健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列 list the key points写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点如何度假
调查报告
倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.
Enjoy your vacation.列A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.a nice heada nice taila nice body加 add the start and the end加首尾，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。
问句是好文章开头的不错选择。
祈使句和感叹句可以选作结尾。写作第三步：A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.a nice heada nice taila nice body 连 join them恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。
信息点与承接词的关系：
信息点是珠子，承接词是线，用线把珠子串连起来就是一条熠熠生辉、优雅华贵的项链。单独看某一方就成为一条破绳子，一堆烂珠子。
写作第四步：1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and,
not only…but also, neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or;
3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all,
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but,
on the one hand…on the other hand;
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words;
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next,
later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;
9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually,
in fact,
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
generally speaking, 关联词句式富于变化例如；1.Jack came home at 7am yesterday.
--Jack didn’t came home until 7am yesterday.
2. We are good friends. We should help each other. ( good)
--We are good friends and we should help each other. (better)
--As we are good friends , we should help each other. ( much better)3. I was careless. I lost a bag on the ground. (good )
---I was careless and lost a bag on the ground. (better)
---I was so careless that I lost a bag on the ground. (much better)句式富于变化Let’s play a game._____ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _____.
We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking.
_____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. _____, he smiled.
ThoughinsteadlikeFirstlaterFinallyHow do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连美 Beautify it 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下（即表达不能出现语法语义错误），展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：一、英语重结构，汉语重语义
二、英语多长句，汉语多短句
三、英语多从句，汉语多分句
四、主语，宾语等名词成分“英
语多代词，汉语多名词”
五、英语多被动，汉语多主动
六、英语多变化，汉语多重复
Skill One Make your sentences correctGood good study, day day up.
We should do sports a week once.
Save the environment is our duty.
There is going to have a meeting today.
I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekSavingbeachieveStudy hard and make progress every day.Skill Two Express in different waysOur parents really wish us to work hard.
Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.
The teenagers like the computers.
The teenagers are fond of the computers.
We shouldn’t eat junk food.
We should stay away from the junk food.
When he spoke, he got more excited.
The more he spoke, the more excited he got.
We should learn English grammar.
It’s important to learn English grammar.We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美书面表达写作技巧审列加连美写作注意“四定”1. 定内容, 不折不扣。
2.定时态， 世态前后呼应。记叙文、日记一般用一般过去时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；计划等用般将来时。
3.定人称，用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。
4.定句型、定词语；应依据内容。应该先定句型后定词语。写作注意的几个问题： 尽量使用简单句，如果复合句用不好就不要用，文章算不上完美，但很实用。要牢记 “避繁就简”原则。当然长句短句交叉使用最好。
把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。
选词：普通的叙述文或短文，应该选择简洁、朴实、准确的大众化词语，避免使用矫饰、复杂、故弄玄虚的词，并尽可能挑选积极的动词。
实战练习一 假如3月18日是星期天，天气晴朗，你班学生乘车去
乐山市罗城古镇旅游，玩得非常愉快。请用英语完成
一篇日记。 要点如下：
1．我们于清晨出发；
2．抵达小镇后，我们参观了当地一些名胜；
3．中午我们在小镇附近野餐，大家被那里的美景所 吸引；
4．下午有的同学去钓鱼，有的同学放风筝；
5．旅途中男同学给了女同学很多帮助。
Words and expressions: 我们于清晨出发；
1. We set off early in the morning.
2. We leave early in the morning.
3. We set off in the afternoon.
4. We sent early in the morning. 抵达小镇后，我们参观了当地一些名胜；
1. After we got to the small town, we visit some place of interested.
2. After arrived at the small town, we visited some places of interesting.
3. After getting to the small town, we visited some places of interest.
4. After we reach the small town, we visits some place of interest. 中午我们在小镇附近野餐，
1. In the noon we had a picnic near the town.
2. At the noon, we have picnic near the town.
3. At noon, we had a picnic near the town.
4. In the afternoon, we had picnic near the town. 大家被那里的美景所吸引；
1. Everyone attacked by the beautiful scenery there.
2. Everybody were attracted the beautiful scenery there.
3. Everybody was attracted by the beautiful scenery there.
4. Everyone is attracked the beautiful scenery there. 下午有的同学去钓鱼，有的同学放风筝；
1. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing, and some flew kites.
2. In the afternoon, some classmates went to fishing, and some flew kites.
3. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing, and some fly kite.
4. In the afternoon, some classmates went fishing, some flied kites. 旅途中男同学给了女同学很多帮助；
1. In the journey, the boys give the girls lots of help.
2. During they traveled, the boys offer the girls much help.
3. When they were traveling, the boys offered many help to the girls.
4. During the trip, the boys offered a lot of help to the girls.Start: Today the students of our class made an unforgettable trip to Luocheng ancient town by bus.End:
What a pleasant day we had! And it
will be a wonderful experience and
memory in my mind forever.
告诫一：抓住大分，再争取小分 ；锦上添花。
只抓小分,放弃大分;竹篮打水一场空
写作难在坚持，成在坚持。 告诫二大家要下苦功夫， 更要用巧功夫中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）
信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档（10-12分）
信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表
达。
第三档（7-9分）
能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。
第四档（4-6分）
只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。
第五档（1-3分）
只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
写作技巧
认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审
Examine the topic健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列 list the key points写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点如何度假
调查报告
倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.
Enjoy your vacation.列A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.a nice heada nice taila nice body加 add the start and the end加首尾，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。
问句是好文章开头的不错选择。
祈使句和感叹句可以选作结尾。写作第三步：A lot of people travel .
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.a nice heada nice taila nice body 连 join them恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。
信息点与承接词的关系：
信息点是珠子，承接词是线，用线把珠子串连起来就是一条熠熠生辉、优雅华贵的项链。单独看某一方就成为一条破绳子，一堆烂珠子。
写作第四步：1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and,
not only…but also, neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or;
3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all,
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but,
on the one hand…on the other hand;
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words;
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next,
later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;
9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually,
in fact,
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
generally speaking, 关联词句式富于变化例如；1.Jack came home at 7am yesterday.
--Jack didn’t came home until 7am yesterday.
2. We are good friends. We should help each other. ( good)
--We are good friends and we should help each other. (better)
--As we are good friends , we should help each other. ( much better)3. I was careless. I lost a bag on the ground. (good )
---I was careless and lost a bag on the ground. (better)
---I was so careless that I lost a bag on the ground. (much better)句式富于变化Let’s play a game._____ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _____.
We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking.
_____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. _____, he smiled.
ThoughinsteadlikeFirstlaterFinallyHow do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连美 Beautify it 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下（即表达不能出现语法语义错误），展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：一、英语重结构，汉语重语义
二、英语多长句，汉语多短句
三、英语多从句，汉语多分句
四、主语，宾语等名词成分“英
语多代词，汉语多名词”
五、英语多被动，汉语多主动
六、英语多变化，汉语多重复
Skill One Make your sentences correctGood good study, day day up.
We should do sports a week once.
Save the environment is our duty.
There is going to have a meeting today.
I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekSavingbeachieveStudy hard and make progress every day.Skill Two Express in different waysOur parents really wish us to work hard.
Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.
The teenagers like the computers.
The teenagers are fond of the computers.
We shouldn’t eat junk food.
We should stay away from the junk food.
When he spoke, he got more excited.
The more he spoke, the more excited he got.
We should learn English grammar.
It’s important to learn English grammar.We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美书面表达写作技巧审列加连美写作注意“四定”1. 定内容, 不折不扣。
2.定时态， 世态前后呼应。记叙文、日记一般用一般过去时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；计划等用般将来时。
3.定人称，用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。
4.定句型、定词语；应依据内容。应该先定句型后定词语。写作注意的几个问题： 尽量使用简单句，如果复合句用不好就不要用，文章算不上完美，但很实用。要牢记 “避繁就简”原则。当然长句短句交叉使用最好。
把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。
选词：普通的叙述文或短文，应该选择简洁、朴实、准确的大众化词语，避免使用矫饰、复杂、故弄玄虚的词，并尽可能挑选积极的动词。
实战练习一 假如3月18日是星期天，天气晴朗，你班学生乘车去
乐山市罗城古镇旅游，玩得非常愉快。请用英语完成
一篇日记。 要点如下：
1．我们于清晨出发；
2．抵达小镇后，我们参观了当地一些名胜；
3．中午我们在小镇附近野餐，大家被那里的美景所 吸引；
4．下午有的同学去钓鱼，有的同学放风筝；
5．旅途中男同学给了女同学很多帮助。
Words and expressions: 我们于清晨出发；
1. We set off early in the morning.
2. We leave early in the morning.
3. We set off in the afternoon.
4. We sent early in the morning. 抵达小镇后，我们参观了当地一些名胜；
1. After we got to the small town, we visit some place of interested.
2. After arrived at the small town, we visited some places of interesting.
3. After getting to the small town, we visited some places of interest.
4. After we reach the small town, we visits some place of interest. 中午我们在小镇附近野餐，
1. In the noon we had a picnic near the town.
2. At the noon, we have picnic near the town.
3. At noon, we had a picnic near the town.
4. In the afternoon, we had picnic near the town. 大家被那里的美景所吸引；
1. Everyone attacked by the beautiful scenery there.
2. Everybody were attracted the beautiful scenery there.
3. Everybody was attracted by the beautiful scenery there.
4. Everyone is attracked the beautiful scenery there. 下午有的同学去钓鱼，有的同学放风筝；
1. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing, and some flew kites.
2. In the afternoon, some classmates went to fishing, and some flew kites.
3. In the afternoon, some of us went fishing, and some fly kite.
4. In the afternoon, some classmates went fishing, some flied kites. 旅途中男同学给了女同学很多帮助；
1. In the journey, the boys give the girls lots of help.
2. During they traveled, the boys offer the girls much help.
3. When they were traveling, the boys offered many help to the girls.
4. During the trip, the boys offered a lot of help to the girls.Start: Today the students of our class made an unforgettable trip to Luocheng ancient town by bus.End:
What a pleasant day we had! And it
will be a wonderful experience and
memory in my mind forever.
告诫一：抓住大分，再争取小分 ；锦上添花。
只抓小分,放弃大分;竹篮打水一场空
写作难在坚持，成在坚持。 告诫二大家要下苦功夫， 更要用巧功夫中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）
信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
第二档（10-12分）
信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表
达。
第三档（7-9分）
能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。
第四档（4-6分）
只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。
第五档（1-3分）
只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
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