2023年中考英语复习书面表达写作技巧课件 (共19张PPT)

(共19张PPT)
书面表达
英语中考备考复习
Part1 中考书面表达评分标准
Part2 常见写作错误
抄
改
连
扩
抓
审
书面
表达
Part3 写作基本步骤：六步法
01
02
03
04
05
06
审题
抓要点
扩展句子
查错改错
连句成文
誊写
Steps:
技巧一：中心明确，围绕发展
My Father
误：My father has various hobbies . He likes doing sports, surfing, listening to music and so on. I like music ,too. I think music is very important. It is……
文章中心：
father
music
Part4 书面表达写作技巧
技巧二： 巧用衔接词
选择 or, and, both…and…
原因 so, because
时间 at first, then, later, in the end, at last
转折 on the other hand(另一方面), but , however
总结 in a word（总之）, in all（总之）
递进 not only…but (also),
举例 and so on，for example
技巧三：句式多样化
长短句连用
简单句/复合句交叉
倒装句
感叹句
原句：It was a wonderful day.
What a wonderful day it was!
原句：I have never seen such a lovely dog.
Never have I seen such a lovely dog.
原句: We heard beautiful songs everywhere.
Beautiful songs were heard here and there.
技巧四：优美句子和词语运用
like
good
many
and
but
…
be fond of
wonderful, excellent, amazing,
a large number of
as well as
however
…
It is important…
Changes have taken place since…
It is good/helpful/harmful to…
It’s said that…
What a/How+形容词…！
技巧五：适当运用名言或俗语
Time is money. 一寸光阴一寸金
Time waits for no man.岁月不待人
Knowledge is power.知识就是力量
Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧
Its never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老
…
…
Part5 书面表达写作要求
要求二：语句通顺，语法正确
要求一：主题明确
I have a lovely dog which is called Jeff. It has brown hair with long ears. It is so clever that he can even understand a few English words…
主谓一致
时态正确运用
单词拼写正确
要求三：标点使用正确
汉语 英语
句号 。 .
逗号 ， ,
省略号 …… …
顿号 、 无
感叹号 ！ !
温馨提示：英语中无顿号 、
1. My father has various hobbies . He likes doing sports, surfing, listening to music…
2. He was late for school, because he missed the bus.
3. What a beautiful girl!
4. Why was he late
要求四：避免句式单一结构
He didn’t say anything. He left.
He left without a word.
We think the story is true.
The story is believed to be true.
组合句子
变换主语
(主动变被动)
复合句
I lost my watch in that shop. He said
He said that he lost his watchin that shop.
英语思维表达法
大雨
大病
大桥
大楼
大错
大写
大
big
≠
a heavy rain
a serious illness
a long bridge
a high rise/large building
a terrible/serious mistake
a capital letter
Part6 写作模式：十句作文法
第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主体，它应与第一段的主体相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主体。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过渡手段。
第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。
第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主体；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可将两句顺序倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。
基本模式:
01
主题句
扩展句
02
主题句
扩展句
扩展句
扩展句
扩展句
扩展句
扩展句
03
（结尾）—结尾句
（要视内容而决定扩
展句 的多少）
（总结全文，提出倡议
或号召）
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