Chapter 6 Using a story map to plan a story语法 课件(共13张PPT)

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4B Chapter 6
Using a story map to plan a story
You’re going to rewrite the story of ‘Rapunzel’.
First, change the prince into another character, for example, a hunter or a soldier.
hunter
soldier
You’ve chosen the hunter. Now you need to change the events in the story.
You can use a story map to help you plan the new story.
Do you still remember the three sections of a story: beginning, middle and ending
Let’s rewrite the beginning of the story now.
Remember to change the prince into the hunter.
Rapunzel and the Prince
Beginning Setting (time and place) and characters Setting: once upon a time, in a tall tower
Characters: Rapunzel and the prince
Characters: Rapunzel and the hunter
Rapunzel and the Hunter
Now change the events in the middle of the story.
Look at the hunter. Think of two problems with his habits.
Rapunzel and the Hunter
Middle Events a prince wanted to rescue Rapunzel
Rapunzel asked about his habits
(brush teeth 1 / week)
Rapunzel gave advice
(brush teeth 2 / day)
the prince came back the next week
Rapunzel asked about his habits again
(wash hair 3 / month)
Rapunzel gave advice again
(wash hair 3 / week)
brush teeth 2 / week
wash feet 1 / month
What advice did Rapunzel give him
brush teeth 2 / day
wash feet 1 / day
Now change the information in the story map.
a hunter wanted to rescue Rapunzel
(brush teeth 2 / week)
the hunter came back the next week
(wash feet 1 / month)
(wash feet 1 / day)
Think about the ending. What did the hunter do in the end
Rapunzel and the Hunter
Ending
the hunter climbed out of the window
and never came back again
Now change your notes in the story map into sentences.
Rapunzel and the Hunter
Beginning Setting (time and place) and characters
Setting: once upon a time, in a tall tower
Once upon a time a witch put a beautiful girl in a tall tower. Her name was Rapunzel.
One day Rapunzel saw a hunter and shook her
long hair out of the window. The hunter climbed up her hair.
Characters: Rapunzel and the hunter
Use the simple past tense to write your story.
Add dialogue to make the story more interesting.
Rapunzel and the Hunter
Middle Events
a hunter wanted to rescue Rapunzel
(brush teeth 2 / week)
the hunter came back the next week
(wash feet 1 / month)
(wash feet 1 / day)
Rapunzel asked about his habits
Rapunzel gave advice
Rapunzel asked about his habits again
Rapunzel gave advice again
(brush teeth 2 / day)
‘I’m here to rescue you,’ smiled the hunter.
‘Oh! Your teeth are bad
and dirty. How often do you brush your teeth ’ asked Rapunzel.
The hunter was surprised. ‘Twice a week,’ he replied.
‘You ought to brush your teeth twice a day. Come back when your
teeth are clean,’ said Rapunzel.
Rapunzel and the Hunter
Middle Events
the hunter came back the next week
(wash feet 1 / month)
(wash feet 1 / day)
Rapunzel asked about his habits again
Rapunzel gave advice again
The next week the hunter climbed up Rapunzel’s hair again. He
walked towards Rapunzel.
you wash your feet ’ asked Rapunzel.
‘You ought to wash your feet once a day …’ started Rapunzel.
‘Ugh! Your feet smell awful. How often do
‘Once a month,’ said the hunter.
Rapunzel and the Hunter
Ending
the hunter climbed out of the window
and never came back again
The hunter ran to the window. ‘You’re too bossy! I don’t want to rescue you anymore!’ he said. He climbed out of the window and never came back again.
Add extra dialogue to make your ending more interesting.
Great! Now you can write the new story. Put the sentences into paragraphs.
Rapunzel and the Hunter
Once upon a time a witch put a beautiful girl in a tall tower. Her name was Rapunzel. One day Rapunzel saw a hunter and shook her long hair out of the window. The hunter climbed up her hair.
You can add details to make your story clearer.
‘I’m here to rescue you,’ smiled the hunter. ‘Oh! Your teeth are bad and dirty. How often do you brush your teeth ’ asked Rapunzel.
The hunter was surprised. ‘Twice a week,’ he replied.
‘You ought to brush your teeth twice a day. Come back when your teeth are clean,’ said Rapunzel.
‘OK. I’m going to brush my teeth twice a day. Then my teeth will be nice and clean in a week’s time,’ said the hunter.
The next week the hunter climbed up Rapunzel’s hair again. He walked towards Rapunzel. ‘Ugh! Your feet smell awful. How often do you wash your feet ’ asked Rapunzel.
‘Once a month,’ said the hunter.
‘You ought to wash your feet once a day …’ started Rapunzel.
The hunter ran to the window. ‘You’re too bossy! I don’t want to rescue you anymore!’ he said. He climbed out of the window and never came back again.
‘OK. I’m going to brush my teeth twice a day. Then my teeth will be nice and clean in a week’s time,’ said the hunter.
The End