Module 3 TravelsUnit 6 Travelling around Asia Writing课件(共15张PPT)

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Module 3 Travels
Unit 6 Travelling around Asia
第5课时 Writing
目录
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写作乐园
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课堂练习
写作乐园
话题六 去某地旅行
【短文写作】
香港是一个国际化大都市。请你根据下面的内容要点，写一篇关于去香港旅游的短文。80词左右。
要点：1. 香港是一个购物的好去处；
2. 香港海洋公园里有很多动物，还可以看到海豚表演；
3. 在香港，你可以品尝世界各地的美食。
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【写作指导】
此篇作文以介绍香港旅游为主线，主要内容是从三个角度简单介绍香港，即购物者的天堂、香港海洋公园和香港美食。写作内容渗透本单元话题——亚洲旅游。
在写作过程中要明确以下几点：
1. 按照要求从三个方面介绍香港旅游，使用课文中的经典短语如in the centre of, delicious snacks等进行写作。
2. 结合话题，作文要结构完整，语句流畅。
【范文赏析】
Hong Kong is a wonderful place to visit. If you like shopping, you can go there.There are many shops in Hong Kong. You can buy most of the things from all over the world.
If you want to go sightseeing, you can visit Ocean Park. You can see many kinds of animals and watch a dolphin show in it.
In the centre of Hong Kong, you can eat a lot of delicious food, such as French food, Japanese food and Italian food.
If you visit Hong Kong, I’m sure you will have a wonderful time there.
课堂练习
一、写作仿写
1. one of+the+形容词最高级+名词 / 代词复数在……中最……之一
【例句】Shanghai is one of the largest cities in the world.上海是世界上最大的城市之一。
【仿写】（汉译英）
（1）玛丽是我们班最刻苦用功的女生之一。
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（2）深圳是中国最美丽的城市之一。
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Mary is one of the most hard-working girls in our class.
Shenzhen is one of the most beautiful cities in China.
2. in the centre of在……的中心
【例句】There is a point in the centre of the circle. 圆圈中间有一个点。
【仿写】（汉译英）
（1）游泳池在花园的中心。
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（2）我们学校中央有一个操场。
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The swimming pool is in the centre of the garden.
There is a playground in the centre of our school.
3. if 引导的条件状语从句如果……
【例句】If you don’t take care, you’ll fall off the tree. 如果你不小心点，你会从树上掉下来。
【仿写】（汉译英）
(1)如果下周日下雨，我们就不去野餐了。
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(2)如果你做些运动，你就会健康。
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If it rains next Sunday, we won’t go on a picnic.
If you play some sports, you’ll be healthy.
4. famous著名的；出名的
【例句】Lu Xun is a famous writer. 鲁迅是一位出名的作家。
【拓展】be famous for 因……而著名
【仿写】（汉译英）
（1）长城世界闻名。
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（2）湖南因美味小吃而出名。
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The Great Wall is famous all over the world.
Hunan is famous for delicious snacks.
5. have a wonderful time玩得开心
【例句】We had a wonderful time visiting Beijing. 我们在北京玩得很开心。
【仿写】（汉译英）
（1）如果你来深圳，你会玩得很开心。
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（2）我们打网球打得很开心。
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If you visit Shenzhen, you will have a wonderful time.
We had a wonderful time playing tennis.
二、书面表达
假如你是李华，本周日由你组织社团同学去深圳东部华侨城游玩。请根据下面的内容要点，用英语拟一份口头通知。
要点：1.集合时间和地点：上午九点，东部华侨城大门口；
2.欣赏中国茶文化及游览大侠谷;
3.自由活动一小时，可观光、拍照等；
4.请补充一至两点个人的想法或建议。
提示词：东部华侨城 OCT East 大侠谷 (Knight Valley)
要求：1.80词左右；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
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Hello, everyone! We are going to the Shenzhen OCT East this Sunday. We are going to meet at the gate of OCT East at
9 a.m.We are going to enjoy Chinese tea culture.Besides, we are going to visit Knight Valley.We also have an hour of free time to do something we like, such as going sightseeing, taking photos. Of course, we should take care of ourselves all the time. And if someone is in trouble, please call me.I believe that it will be an exciting tour and we will enjoy ourselves.
谢 谢！