7AUnit 8 Fashion -3 Writing 课件(共16张PPT)

(共16张PPT)
book7a unit 8
writing
Learning tasks for the writing class
To study the organization of an example article
To learn to write about your collection
Unit 8 Collecting Things
Postcard Collecting
Modern Postcards
places of interest
cultures
celebrities(名人)
works of art
illustrations(插图)
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Predict what Harry wrote about
When did he start the collection
How did he start the collection
How big is his collection
What are the postcards about
What is his favorite postcard like
How does he get the postcards
How much did the postcards cost
What does he get from the collection
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Harry
Example
When did he start the collection
How did he start the collection
How big is his collection
What are the postcards about
What is his favorite postcard like
How does he get the postcards
How much did the postcards cost
What does he get from the collection
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Tick off the mentioned questions
Tip1 Brainstorm ideas!
Example
When did he start the collection
How big is his collection
What are the postcards about
What is his favorite postcard like
How does he get the postcards
What does he get from the collection
beginning
body1
ending
body2
Introduce the topic
Details about his collection
More details about the collection
Echo the topic
Match the paragraphs
Tip2 Organize the ideas!
Example
Tip3 Give topic sentences!
My Collection
I collect postcards. It is easy to get postcards.
Now I have over 100 different postcards. I like collecting postcards!
Topic sentences
Underline the topic sentences
Example
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I am a collector of …
I have a (big) collection of …
Some show … while others show…
Some show …, others show….
3. It is expensive/convenient…to ….
I am fond of…
I am crazy over …
Tip4 Polish the language!
Note down more expressions
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Sum up
Brainstorm ideas
Organize ideas
Give topic sentences
Polish the language
How do we write a good article
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Practice
Write a short article about your collection. Follow the example in A.
-What do you collect
-When did you start
-How big is your collection
-How do you get them
-What do you get from your collection
I collect blind boxes.
I started the collection two years ago.
I have 11 blind boxes.
Usually my parents give one to me as a present.
I have great fun when I open the package.
Step1 Brainstorm your ideas!
Practice
I collect blind boxes.
I started the collection two years ago.
I have 11 blind boxes.
Usually my parents give one to me as a present.
I have great fun when I open the package.
Step2 Organize your ideas!
Practice
I collect blind boxes.
I started the collection two years ago.
I have 11 blind boxes.
Usually my parents give one to me as a present.
I have great fun when I open the package.
Step3&4 Now start writing with topic sentences and don’t forget to polish your language!
Practice
Bravo!
You’ve done a good job!
Hello, everyone! I am a collector of blind boxes. Two years ago my best friend sent me a blind box on my birthday and I started the collection.
Now I have already collected 11 blind boxes, with one more to make a series of 12. Some figures in the box are beautiful while others are not so pleasing to the eye. My favorite figure is a ballet dancer because I love ballet!
People say I should not be crazy over blind boxes. I think
they are right, though I have great fun every time when I crack open the package!
It is actually expensive for me to get blind boxes as each usually costs about 60 yuan. Sometimes my parents give me a blind box as a present or as a reward for my good behavior. Sometimes I buy one with my own pocket money.
Self-check
Items Points Check
Tense Mainly Simple Present □
Paragraphs Three or Four □
Topic Sentences Usually at the beginning □
Good Language Some…, others…
It is easy/expensive/convenient to … □
I am fond of/am crazy over…
Handwriting Neat and Clean □
Homework
为了了解同学们的课余生活情况，鼓励同学们养成健康的爱好以帮助自身拓宽视野，广交良友，你校英文报征集描写兴趣爱好的文稿。假设你是李华，请根据以下内容写一篇介绍自己的收藏爱好的短文，给英文报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 开始时间；
2. 收藏简介：1）二百多张；2）…
3. 收藏渠道：1）朋友赠送； 2） 自己用零用钱购买
4. 收获：1）了解更多的知识； 2）…
要求：100词左右。语言通顺，内容完整。
good bye!