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Unit 2
I think that mooncakes are delicious.
写作课
人教版九年级全一册
Learning objectives
3.写作微技能:
Make an outline(列提纲)在英语写作中的运用。
2.阅读有关文章,并能运用目标语言、短语及语法,写一篇有关节日庆祝或节日纪念的文章。
1.能描述某个节日的时间、庆祝活动、意义及感受。
Lead in
Mid-Autumn Festival
Lantern Festival
Which festival do you prefer
Lead in
Water Festival
Dragon Boat Festival
Lead in
Spring Festival
Writing
When we talk about a festival,what can we write
festival
things to eat
things to do
story
feeling
reasons
Writing
Chinese Spring Festival
When
On the first day of the 1st lunar month.
What to do
Receive “lucky” money; do some shopping
cleaning; family reunion dinner; set off crackers.
What to eat
Dumplings; Niangao; Fish
Writing
the Lantern Festival
When
What to do
What to eat
On the 15th day of the 1st lunar month.
Get all their families united; watch lanterns show; solve the puzzles on the lanterns.
Sweet dumplings/Yuan Xiao/Tang Yuan.
Writing
the Dragon Boat Festival
When
What to do
What to eat
On the 5th day of the 5th lunar month.
Boat races.
Zongzi.
Why
To honor the poet Qu Yuan.
Writing
The day gives us a chance to show respect to our ancestors(祖先)and family members who have passed away.
What festival it is
Qingming Festival/ Tomb Sweeping Day
Guess
Writing
读写结合:请阅读有关清明节的文章,按要求完成任务。
A well known poem by Du Mu,a Tang Dynasty poet,tells of a sad scene in early April:“Rains fall heavily as Qingming comes,and passers by with lowered spirits go.”
This scene takes place on Tomb Sweeping Day,also known as Qingming Festival.Tomb Sweeping Day is a traditional Chinese festival.It began in the Zhou Dynasty,over 2,500 years ago.Chinese people celebrate it to remember and honor their ancestors (祖先).This year,it falls on April 5th.Tomb Sweeping Day becomes a public holiday in the Chinese mainland in 2008.People have one day off on this day.
Writing
On this day,families bring flowers,food and wine to the grave sites (墓地) of their ancestors.They place cakes,fruits in front of the graves and some people may burn joss paper,as money for the dead.After that they sweep the tombs and cherish (怀念) the memories of their dead family members.
Tomb Sweeping Day gives us a chance to show respect to our ancestors and family members who have passed away and show that we miss them.This tradition shows that family values are an important part of Chinese culture.
Tomb Sweeping Day is also the beginning of the time for gardening and outdoor activities in China.Families often get together for outings or to fly kites at this time.
Writing
Information Card The name of the festival 1._____________________________________________________
The beginning time of the festival 2._____________________________________________________
The time when it became a public holiday in the Chinese mainland 3._________
The reason why people celebrate it 4._____________________________________________________
The things that people bring to the grave sites 5.______________________
Tomb SweepingDay
/Qingming Festival
In the Zhou Dynasty
/Over 2,500 years ago
In 2008
To remember and honor
their ancestors
Flowers,food and wine
Writing
【赏析:找出上面材料中的重点词汇】
发生
一个传统的中国节日
休息一天
中国文化的一个重要部分
take place
a traditional Chinese festival
have one day off
an important part of Chinese culture
表达对……的尊敬
去世
……的开始
一起外出
show respect to ……
pass away
the beginning of
get together for outings
Writing
黄金句式积累与练习
1.Chinese people celebrate it to remember and honor their ancestors.中国人庆祝这个节日是为了纪念和尊重 他们的祖先。
celebrate it to remember and honor sb./sth.
某人庆祝它是为了纪念和尊重某人/某物。
仿写1—— 中国人庆祝中秋节是为了纪念嫦娥。
Chinese people__________________________________________ Chang’e.
celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival to remember
Writing
黄金句式积累与练习
2.Tomb Sweeping Day give us a chance to show respect to our ancestors and family members who have passed away...
清明节给我们一个表达对祖先和已故家庭成员尊重的机会……
gives sb. a chance to do sth. 给某人一个机会做某事。
仿写2——我们应该给他一个向他父母展示爱的机会。
We should _____________________show love to his parents.
give him a chance to
Writing
(当堂训练)
假设你是李华,今天正逢端午节,你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣,写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下内容提示,给他写一封回信。
1.中国的传统节日之一,已有2000多年的历史(one of the Chinese traditional festivals;two thousand years of history):
2.为了纪念著名诗人屈原(honor the great poet Qu Yuan);
3.中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗(Dragon Boat races);
4.家人团聚吃粽子和其他美食(eat zongzi another delicious food);
5.有三天假期,可以外出旅游(a 3-day holiday)。
要求:1.80词左右,书信格式;
2.内容合理,要点齐全;句子及篇章结构正确、连贯;书写规范。
注意:不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。
Writing
审题
体裁
人称
时态
应用文
第一人称
第三人称
一般现在时
Writing
Beginning
Body
Ending
name , date
things to eat,
activities, story
feeling/ reason
Make an outline
谋篇
Writing
1.开篇点题,介绍端午节是中国的传统节日
它是中国的传统节日之一,有2000多年的历史。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals. It has about two thousand years of history.
2.具体介绍端午节的目的、习俗、美食和假期
(1)为了________________________
(2)与家人相聚________________________
(3)传统的食物________________________
(4)去度假________________________
(5)庆祝这个节日是为了纪念伟大的诗人屈原。
_____________________________________________________
in order to
get together with the family
tradictional food
go on vacation
People celebrate the festival to honor the great poet Qu Yuan.
造句
Writing
(6)在那天,人们经常和家人一起吃粽子和其他美食。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
(7)在中国的南方地区,人们经常举行龙舟比赛。在电视上观看这个活动非常有趣。
________________________________________________________________________________________
(8)节日期间,我们有三天假期。我们可以进行短途旅行来放松自己。
一般表达:We have a 3-day holiday during the festival.We can have a short journey to relax ourselves.
高级表达:(用so连接)
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
On that day, people often get together with their family to eat Zongzi and other delicious food.
In southern parts of China, people often have the Dragon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV.
We have a 3-day holiday during the festival,so we can have a short journey to relax ourselves.
Writing
3.表达节日感受
端午节多么有趣,我非常喜欢它。
_____________________________________
___________________________________________
The Dragon Boat Festival is interesting and I like it very much.
Writing
Dear Jack,
How's it going I'm very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. ①It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals. It has about two thousand years of history.
②People celebrate the festival to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat Zongzi and other delicious food. In southern parts of China, people often have the Dragon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival.
So we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. ③The Dragon Boat Festival is interesting and I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Beginning
Body
Ending
范文
Exercise
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友吉姆对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,介绍一下中国的传统节日——春节。内容包括:
1. 介绍春节是一个传统节日及其时间;
2. 介绍人们在春节到来前及春节期间的活动(至少3个);
3. 谈谈你的感受以及希望吉姆能来中国过春节。
作文要求:
1. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Exercise
第一步:介绍春节是一个传统节日及其时间。
参考句型:1. It’s a traditional __________.
2. It is celebrated on __________.
第二步:介绍人们在春节到来前及春节期间的活动(至少3个)。
参考句型:
1. Before the Spring Festival, people usually ______.
2. During the Spring Festival, people __________.
第三步:谈谈你的感受以及希望吉姆能来中国过春节。
参考句型: That’s one of ______. I hope you can ______.
思路点拨
Exercise
Dear Jim,
I’m very glad to tell you something about the Chinese Spring Festival. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It’s a traditional festival in China. It usually comes in January or February.
Before the Spring Festival, people usually clean and decorate their houses carefully. They put on Spring Festival couplets on their doors. On New Year’s Eve, people set off fireworks and light candles to wait for the New Year to come.
During the Spring Festival, everyone goes home to get together with their families. They visit relatives and have dinner together.When the kids greet
范文
Exercise
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
their grandparents, they can get lucky money. That’s one of my favorite parts of the festival.
That’s one of the most interesting festivals! I hope you can come to celebrate it with us some day!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing
Summary
文章层次清晰
表达准确恰当
卷面整洁悦目
仔细审题,明确要求
分析要点,提炼关键
围绕主题,编拟提纲
组织语句,补充要点
Homework
完成该课时的练习册。
预习下节课的内容
Reflection
本节课通过写作思路点拨,以及范例讲解,让学生能够自行写出关于中国传统节日的文章。
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