Unit 1 How can we become good learners. Section B How to write a composition课件(共23张PPT)

(共23张PPT)
A Lesson of Writing
Example:
Imagine that you are Li Ming, write a composition about the changes taken place in your hometown.
Key points:
1.Topic（主题）: changes 2.who: Li Ming
3.Where: Li Ming’s hometown
4.tense(时态): past tense& present tense
一般过去时&一般现在时
Living condition
Cell phones
jobs
transportation
changes
house
cars
(头脑风暴)
education
shops
food
roads
computers
clothes
building
working tools
农耕工具
reason
government
efforts
live in a low house
live in a tall building
plant crops with the help of farm animals
plant crops with the help of farm machines
study in an old school
study in a modern school
Living condition
Working tools
education
Living condition
Working tools
education
changes
(正文)
a. Changes in living conditions.
b. Changes in working tools.
C. Changes in education.
Outline
Title题目: Changes in Li Ming’s Hometown
Heading开头： Great changes have taken place in ……
Body正文:
a. Changes in living conditions
b. Changes in working tools
C. Changes in education
Conclusion结尾: Thanks to the government’s efforts(努力), Li Ming’s hometown is becoming better and better.
提纲
Changes in Li Ming’s Hometown
Great changes have taken place in Li Ming’s hometown since the reform and opening-up.
In the past, people lived in low houses. The farmers planted crops only with the help of farm animals. Children studied in old schools.
But now, most people live in tall buildings. The farmers can plant crops with the help of farm machines. And children study in modern schools.
Thanks to the government’s efforts, Li Ming’s hometown is becoming better and better.
One possible version:
heading开头
body正文
conclusion结尾
A Writing Practice
Write your own composition about Great changes in my Hometown.
以Great changes in my Hometown 为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。
1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。
2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。
3、未来会更加富饶和美丽
4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。
可能会用到的词汇：poor and backward贫穷落后的；traffic 交通； convenient 方便的；Thanks to 多亏；the country and the government国家和政府；take place 发生；education教育；modern现代；dream about憧憬

Requirement:
1.topic: 2.who:
3.Where:
4.What changes：
5.Tense时态:
great changes
I / myself
my hometown
life
roads
houses
past tense& present tense
……
Living condition
transportation
changes
house
(头脑风暴)
education
roads
building
Example:
Outline提纲
Title题目: Great changes in my Hometown
Heading开头：
Body正文:
a. Changes in …
b. Changes in …
c. Changes in …
Conclusion结尾:
Life
House
Roads
house
life
education
transportation
now
Used to be…
Once曾经
past
Many years ago
is / are
In the past
At present
before
nowadays
today
Was/were
Make sentences.
eg: 1.In the past, my hometown was poor.
2.My hometown used to be poor.
Then:
(时态)
Living condition
Cell phones
transportation
wide
roads
clean
cars
(正文)
dirty
better
narrow
poor
clothes
Convinent方便的
improve
eg: 1.Many years ago, the roads in my hometown was narrow
and dirty.
2.Nowadays, the roads in my hometown are wide and clean.
3.Today,many families have cars.
school
house
(正文)
以Great changes in my Hometown 为题，按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。
1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。
2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。
3、未来会更加富饶和美丽
4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。
可能会用到的词汇：poor and backward贫穷落后的；traffic 交通； convenient 方便的；thanks to 多亏；the country and the government国家和政府；take place 发生；education教育；modern现代；dream about憧憬

The Changes in My Hometown
I am Li Ming, today I have interviewed my grandmother. She has lived in my hometown for more than seventy years. She has seen the changes in my hometown herself.
In the past, my hometown was very small and poor. The roads were narrow. The people couldn’t get enough food.
But now, the roads were so wide, and there are more and more kinds of food to satisfy people’s needs. And now, each family has telephones, TVs, computers and so on.
I think my hometown will be more and more beautiful in the future!
Changes in My Hometown
My hometown used to be a backward place, because it was deep in the mountains, where there were no nice buildings and the roads were so narrow and dirty. People lived a poor life.
While in recent years, with the development of society, my hometown has been greatly changed. Now the roads are getting much wider. Trees and flowers are planted on the two sides of the roads. They can provide us with oxygen and fight against the pollutions. So the sky becomes cleaner and brighter. What’s more, you can see many modern and beautiful buildings everywhere, and the living conditions are improving. People are enjoying a comfortable life now.