Module 3 Unit 5 Educational exchange Writing 课件(共20张PPT)

(共20张PPT)
Writing：
An exchange visit
01 Analyze the five elements of a writing topic
02 Draft the composition with a clear structure
03 Revise the composition from three criteria.
Learning objectives
01 Lead in
02 Topic analysis
03 Drafting
04 Revising
CONTENTS
Lead in
part01
Who
Where
Why On an educational exchange
What 1. Learn to use ______________ and a little ___________ with the host family.
2. Study with Chinese students.
3. _____________ Beijing.
4. Visit ___________________ with host families.
5. Learn a bit of ________.
6. Learn a lot about _______________________________.
7.Learn _______________________.
What next
British students from Woodpark School
Xinhua Junior High School in Beijing
chopsticks
Chinese
Tour around
places of interest
t'ai chi
Chinese culture and history
Chinese painting
Students in Xinhua Junior High School will come to the UK for the second part of the exchange
An exchange visit
in
out
in
in
out
out
out
Topic analysis
part02
The students from Xinhua Junior High School have almost finished their exchange visit to Woodpark School. They need to write a report on the exchange visit before they return to Beijing.
Suppose you are one of the plete the report below.
Text type
Background
Character(s)
Tense
Main points
Topic analysis
Background
Characters
Tense
Main points
They have finished their exchange visit
The present perfect tense
Activities
in
school
Text type
A report
One of the students from Xinhua Junior High School
have classes with British students
learn a lot about British culture and history
take part in school club activities
watch films with British students
introduce t'ai chi and Chinese painting to British students
...
have a picnic with the host family
visit places of interest such as the British Museum,BIg Ben, the London Eye and Buckingham Palace...
play football with British friends
go hiking / swimming / shopping
...
Activities
outside
school
Drafting
part03
A report on my exchange visit to Woodpark School
My exchange visit to Woodpark School has gone well.
I have enjoyed my studies at the school. I have_____________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. I have also ______________
__________________________________.
My host family are friendly. They have cooked me delicious British food. __________________________________________
_____________________________________________________ ____________________.
I will keep in touch with them.
opening paragraph
body
ending
title
I have enjoyed my studies at the school. I have______________________________________________________________________________________________________. I have also _____________________________________.
My host family are friendly. They have cooked me delicious British food. ____________ ______________________________________________________________________.
topic sentences
spporting sentences
I have enjoyed my studies at the school.
I have had classes with British students.
I have learned a lot about British culture and history.
I have taken part in school club activities.
I have watched films with British students.
I have introduced t'ai chi and Chinese painting to British students.
My host family are friendly. They have cooked me delicious British food.
I have had a picnic with the host family.
we have visited places of interest such as the British Museum,BIg Ben, the London Eye and Buckingham Palace...
I have played football with British friends.
we have gone hiking / swimming / shopping.
Revising
part04
variety
（多样性）
Coherence
（连贯性）
Accuracy
（准确性）
A
B
C
3 criteria
03
04
01
02
Spelling mistakes
Subject-verb agreement
主谓一致
Grammatical mistakes
06
05
07
Accuracy
（准确性）
Tense
Pronoun
Singular or plural form of nouns
单复数一致
Fixed collocations
固定搭配
01
02
a variey of words and phrases
a variey of sentences
variety
（多样性）
visit: go to see, go sightseeing
have lessons: take classes,attend lessons
want to do : be eager to do; can't wait to do
I have had classes with British students. I have also learnt a lot about British culture and history.
I have not only had classes with British students, but also learnt a lot about British culture and history.
I have had classes with British students and learnt a lot about British culture and history as well.
Cause & Effect
Example
Sequence
Contrast
first of all，next,then,after
that,finally,…
in a word, on the whole, in conclusion,to sum up…
but, however, on the contrary, on the other hand...
Supplement
Conclusion
Coherence
（连贯性）
because, because of, thanks to，therefore, so,as a result of...
for example, such as, take… for example…
besides ,what’s more , in
addition …
Final draft time
A report on my exchange visit to Woodpark School
My exchange visit to Woodpark School has gone well.
I have enjoyed my studies at the school. I have had classes with British students.I have learned a lot about British culture and history. I have also taken part in school club activities.
My host family are friendly. They have cooked me delicious British food. We have had a picnic together. They have taken me to visit the British Museum. My new British friends are very nice. I have played football with them.
I will keep in touch with them.
A report on my exchange visit to Woodpark School
My exchange visit to Woodpark School has gone well. I have experienced a lot and made many friends here.
I have enjoyed my studies at the school. I have not only had classes with British students, but also learnt a lot about British culture and history. They are very interesting. Taking part in school club activities has impressed me most because there were too many intersting clubs to choose and I really wanted to join each one of them! What a pity!
My host family are friendly. They have cooked me delicious British food,such as sandwiches and fish chips. What's more, we have had a picnic in a small town together. They have also taken me to visit the British Museum, in which I have learn more about British culture and history.
This educational visit is meaningful and unforgettable. I will keep in touch with them and remain friends forever.
Sample writing 1
Sample writing 2
Thank you!