牛津深圳版九年级上册 Module 2 Unit 3 Family life Writing 课件 (共18张PPT)

(共18张PPT)
九年级上册 Unit 3
Writing
Learning Objectives
To master some useful expressions about family life;
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To know about a Five-star writing process;
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To write a short article about your own family life following the Five-star writing process.
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CONTENTS
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Lead-in
Pre-writing
While-writing
Post-writing
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Lead-in
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Lead-in
Emily’s and Jerry’s family life
Family members
Possessions
Housework
Family activities
Rules
Likes most about the family
Write a short article about your family life.
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Lead-in
Task
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Pre-Writing
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Pre-Writing
Key information
Topic-related expressions
Drafting
Editing
Beautiful handwriting
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While-Writing
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While-Writing
Key information
Family members
Possessions
Housework
Family activities
Rules
Likes most about the family
Step 1 Think about your own family life and fill in the mind map.
My family life
My mum, my dad, my sister, brother and me
A mobile phone, a laptop, etc.
……
……
……
……
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While-Writing
Family members
Possessions
Housework
Family activities
Rules
Likes most about the family
Step 2 Find out useful expressions from the text on P35 and add them to your mind map.
My family life
My mum, my dad, my brother, sister and me
A mobile phone, a laptop, etc.
……
……
……
……
Topic-related expressions
crowded, don’t mind
The expressions you find are based on your own situation. You can also use good expressions that you have learnt before.
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While-Writing
Family members
Possessions
Housework
Family activities
Rules
Likes most about the family
Step 3 Make a rough draft (草稿) based on your own mind map.
My family life
My mum, my dad, my brother, sister and me
A mobile phone, a laptop, etc.
……
……
……
……
crowded, don’t mind
Drafting
We are a large family. There are five people in my family. They are my mum, my dad, my sister, my brother and me. Although it’s a bit crowded in our little flat, we don’t mind.
Also decide on how to put them into proper paragraphs.
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While-Writing
Step 4 Improve your writing following the self-editing checklist below.
Editing
项目 问题类型 常见错误
单词 拼写 一些易混词（如housework与homework）
语法 谓语是否准确 （时态、语态、人称、数） 主谓不一致 （如My parents is …）
通篇一般现在时
词组搭配 介词等用错
名词单复数 可数名词单数形式
标点符号 一“逗”到底
结构 分段 通篇一段
语篇连贯性 无连词或连词混用
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While-Writing
Step 5 Write down your article beautifully.
Beautiful
handwriting
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Post-Writing
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Post-Writing
Task 1 Finish the flow chart below to review the Five-star writing process.
Summary & Self-assessment
Key information
Topic-related expressions
Drafting
Editing
Beautiful handwriting
Task 2 Add your own notes to the writing process.
Homework
Write an article about another topic following the Five-star writing process;
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Revise the Five-star writing process based on your own situation.
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Thank You