八上Unit 3 I'm more outgoing than my sister.写作课件课件 (共40张PPT)

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Grade 8 Unit 3 Writing Guide
Be
a
Better
One
Contents
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2
3
4
5
Guessing Game
Vocabulary
Collection
Sentence Writing
Sample Reading
Writing
time
Part 1
Guessing Game
Watch and Guess!
Review and Learn
A motorbike is _____________ than a cheetah.
A giraffe is ________ than an elephant.
Russia is _________ than America.
A blue whale is __________ than a bus.
A snail is _________ than a tortoise.
An ostrich is __________ than a kangaroo.
A soccer ball is _________ than a basketball.
Light is __________ than sound.
The sun is _________ than lava.
A jet is _____________________ than a sports car.
faster
taller
bigger
hotter
more expensive
quicker
smaller
taller
slower
heavier
Patr 2
Vocabulary Collection
（一）人物对比类、描述类短语
（1）人物对比类短语
1. 与……不同_____________________________
2. 与……相像的___________________________
3. 和……相同_____________________________
4. 和……一样高___________________________
（2）人物描述类短语
1. 在某方面有天赋_________________________
2. 擅长于________________________________
be different from
be similar to
as tall as
the same as
be talented in
be good at
（二）朋友相处类短语及其他
（1）朋友相处类短语
1. 和某人相处地好_____________________________
2. 真正关心我_________________________________
3. 分享一切___________________________________
4. 使我笑_____________________________________
（2）其他短语
1. 既然_______________________________________
2. 事实上_____________________________________
be good with
truly care about me
make me laugh
share everything
as long as
in fact
（三）形容词、副词的比较级
9. easy__________
10. thin_________
11. serious_________
12. popular_________
13. good________
14. bad__________
15. much__________
16. little_________
taller
shorter
smarter
quieter
later
lazier
funnier
earlier
easier
17. hard-working
_________________(没那么努力)
18. outgoing
_________________（不外向些）
1. tall_________
2. short_________
3. quiet_________
4. smart________
5. late__________
6. lazy__________
7. funny_________
8. early _________
thinner
more
serious
more popular
better
worse
more
less
less hard-working
less outgoing
Wang Lingling and Liu Lili are best friends. Look at the chart below and compare them.
Wang Lingling
Liu Lili
3a
long straight hair
popular
funny
smart
写作指导
1. 阅读表格中的描述
2. 分析描述词的特点：用形容词还是用动词描述
3. 相似的地方，用both表达共同点；不同的地方，
用比较的句式表达
4. 试着写出这些句子
5. 检查答案
One Possible Version
Wang Lingling’s best friend is Liu Lili. They are both tall, but Wang Lingling has long straight hair, Liu Lili has short straight hair. Wang Lingling likes reading, but Liu Lili likes sports. They are both popular in class. They’re both outgoing. Wang Lingling is serious. Liu Lili is funnier than Wang Lingling. Wang Lingling is more hard-working than Liu Lili, but Liu Lili is smarter.
Part 3
Sentence Writing
（一）佳句欣赏与模仿
My best friend Larry is quiet different from me.
【quiet副词，可以用来修饰形容词，表示程度，意为“十分”】
我十分擅长英语。
_____________________________________________________________________
I am quiet good at English.
（一）佳句欣赏与模仿
2. I’m shy so it’s not easy for me to make friends.
【it’s +adj. +for sb. + to do sth. 做某事对某人怎么样】
取得好成绩对我来说很容易。
_____________________________________________________________________
It’s easy for me to get good grades.
（一）佳句欣赏与模仿
3. Larry is much less hard-working, though.
【much / a little / a lot + 比较级】
事实上，李明跑步比我快得多。
_____________________________________________________________________
In fact, Li Ming runs much / a lot faster than me.
（二）表达个人的择友观
在我看来，两个人相同很必要。
__________________________________________________________
2. 我真的不介意朋友是与我相同或是不同。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 我认为朋友就像书——你不需要很多，只要他们好就行。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In my view, it’s necessary to be the same.
I don’t really care if friends are the same as me or different.
I think friends are like books — you don’t need a lot of them as long as they’ re good.
写作微技能：比较级的巧用
形容词或副词的比较级，能帮助你更具体、生动、形象地描述所要描写的人物，写出评价人物的文章。如：I’m more outgoing than my sister. 你可以根据你的需要，用”than, as…as”等更具体、生动地描述人物间的相同与不同点。
写作微技能：比较级的巧用
1. Lisa 唱得比Sam好。_________________________________________
2. 我比大多数的孩子要安静与严肃。
_________________________________________________________________
3. 他和我一样外向。____________________________________________
4. Peter学习不如Tom努力。
_________________________________________________________________
Lily sings better than Sam.
I’m quieter and more serious than most kids.
He is as outgoing as me.
Peter doesn’t work as hard as Tom.
Make notes about two of your friends. One friend should be similar to you; the other friend should be different.
A friend who is similar to me A friend who is different from me
Name: Name:
3b
Part 4
Sample Reading
Write two paragraphs describing your friends.
相似的方面: 用be both或 likes句式结构来描述
不同之处: 用形容词或副词的比较级形式，用正确的句式对比两人的不同
A is more outgoing than B.
B works harder than A.
写作指导
3c
One possible version
My friend Amy is quite similar to me. We are both tall and
thin. We are both quiet and serious. We like reading
together. We are hard-working in class, so we often get good
grades.
My friend Bella is different from me. She’s funnier and more
outgoing than me. She always speaks loudly. She is good at
soccer. She’s smart and she’s a good listener.
My friend Allen and I are similar. Both of us like swimming and reading. We both go swimming at the weekends and then have lunch together. We often share many interesting books with each other. Both of us are interested in cartoon. So we’re good friends.
The other possible version
My friend Bella is quite different from me. She is more outgoing and more popular than me. She sings better and wins a school competition. Many “fans” are attracted by her. But Bella is much less hard-working. I always get better grades than she does. We help each other.
Part 5
Writing Time
篇章训练
你的生活因为拥有朋友而精彩！
请你选择一位朋友，以“My Friend and I”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语文章，内容包括你与朋友间的相同点和不同点，以及你交友的观点。
习作步骤
审题
列提纲
扩展成篇
检查核对
审题
写作内容
时态
人称
1. 我与朋友的相同点
2. 我与朋友的不同点
3. 我交友的观点
一般现在时
第一人称 I we
第三人称 he / she
列提纲
我的朋友是谁？
我们的相同点和不同点
总结并表达交友观点
外貌上的同与不同
性格上的同与不同
成绩差异
擅长的事情的差异
……
注意：要在Body的部分，加入和朋友相处的感受，会更加煽动人。
Ending
Beginning
Body
扩展成篇
I have many friends. Mary Chen is one of my best friends.
We get on well with each other although we are different.
We both have long hair, but her hair is curly and mine is straight.
I am quiet, but she is more outgoing than me. She often makes me laugh. I am lucky to have a friend like her. My life is colorful because of her. What’s more, we often do homework together. She studies harder than me, so she gets better grades than me. I often ask her for help as long as I don’t understand. And we both like dancing. I dance as well as her. After school, we usually dance in the dancing club.
Although Mary is quite different from me, I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different.
开头方式：
“百里挑一”
第二段主题句
外貌上的同异
性格上
的差异
我的感受
学习方面和爱好方面的同异
表达观点并呼应前文
不要忘记
检查核对哦
Your
Writing
Time
Read the job ad. Then compare two of your
classmates. Decide which classmate is better
for the job.
Student Helper Wanted
The English study Center needs a weekend student helper for primary school students.
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You must:
-be a middle school student
-have good grades in English
-be good with children
-be outgoing
Call the English Study Center at
443-5667 for more information.
A: So who do you think should get the job,
Jenny or Jill
B: Well, Jenny is smarter. I think she should
get the job.
A: Jenny is smarter, but I think Jill is more
outgoing.
1 Put the words in the correct columns in the chart.
hard-working run fast quiet
serious jump high smart
what people are like what people can do
hard-working,
quiet,
serious, smart
run fast
jump high
Self Check
2 Fill in the blanks using the correct forms of the words in brackets.
My brother is _________(funny) than me. He makes
people laugh a lot.
2. I’m outgoing, but my best friend is a lot _____________
(outgoing) than me.
funnier
more outgoing
3. My brother is as____________(serious) as my sister.
They both like to study.
4. My cousin can run __________(fast) than me. She is
taller than me, too.
5. Jim is_________________ (friendly) than Tom, so
Tom has more friends than Jim.
serious
faster
less friendly
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Grade 8 Unit 3 Writing Guide
Be
a
Better
One