Unit 3 I'm more outgoing than my sister. Section B写作--朋友 课件 (共24张PPT)

(共24张PPT)
describe your
friend
Writing
Brainstorm
What kinds of things are important in a friend
A good friend is someone who makes me happy.
I think a friend should be kind.
honest
kind
easygoing
helpful
patient
friendly
warm-hearted
...
good friend
What should a good friend be like Talk about it.
Preparing for the task – 1. Collect ideas
open-minded,
generous,
good-tempered,
trustworthy,
careful,
full of love,
friendly,
caring,
interesting,
easygoing,
outgoing,
warm-hearted,
selfless,
intelligent…
other good qualities:
1）He is of medium height/ tall/short...
2 )He /She has glasses.
3 )He/She is of medium build/ heavy/thin...
4)He/She has long hair/short hair...
5)He/She has straight/curly hair...
What does he/she look like？
Preparing for the task – 2. Extend ideas
1）He/She is funny ...
2 )He /She is friendly...
3 )He/She is serious about study.
4)He/She loves nature and life
5)He/She is always ready to help others.
6)...
What is he/she like？
Preparing for the task – 2. Extend ideas
1）He /she likes playing soccer...
2 )He /She loves playing the piano...
3 )He/She is interested in singing...
4)He/She is good at dancing...
5)He/She loves reading books...
What is his/her hobby？
Preparing for the task – 2. Extend ideas
1）We have the same hobbies.
2 )He /She is a good listener.
3 )He/She is friendly to me.
4)He/She can bring the best in me. 5)He/She would like to spend time with me...
What do you like about your friend
？
Preparing for the task – 2. Extend ideas
Should friends be the same or different
------A passage from a student
My best friend
My best friend is Tom. He is 13. I am 13,too. We are in the same class. He is tall. He has short black hair. He is friendly to everyone. He is more outgoing than me. He likes telling jokes. He always makes me laugh. He likes sports. He often plays basketball after school. But I don’t like basketball, because I think it’s difficult for me. He is different from me. We are friends because he always helps me.
Preparing for the task – 3. sentence pattern
My best friend
My best friend is Tom. He is 13. I am 13,too. We are in the same class. He is tall. He has short black hair. He is friendly to everyone. He is more outgoing than me. He likes telling jokes. He always makes me laugh. He likes sports. He often plays basketball after school. But I don’t like basketball, because I think it’s difficult for me. He is different from me. We are friends because he always helps me.
Preparing for the task – 3. sentence pattern
Can you put the two sentences
into one
He is 13. I am 13,too.
I am as old as him.
I am the same age as he is.
He is tall. He has short black hair.
He is tall with short black hair.
He is a tall boy with short black hair.
Good sentences about friends
A good friend is like a mirror.
Friends are like books.—you don’t need a lot of them as long as they’re good.
My best friend helps to bring out the best in me.
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Preparing for the task-4 structure
How to be a good article
Structure
Beginning
Ending
Body
Introduction
Para 1
Para 2
My friend Tom is quite from me.
Para 3
Ending
examples and feelings
Rewriting an article
Topic sentence
My best friend Tom is quite different from me.
Topic sentence
Examples
Feelings
He is more outgoing than me. He likes telling jokes. When I am not happy, he always makes me laugh. He like sports. He often plays basketball after school. But I don’t like basketball, because I think it’s difficult for me.
Preparing for the task
A good article
*Sentence pattern
* Good sentences
* Structure
* Link words
Preparing for the task
Link words
Besides(此外，而且）
What’s more（而且)
In addition(此外）
As the saying goes（常言道）
Rewrite the passage
Combine ideas--Rewrite the passage
My best friend is Tom. I am as old as him. We are in the same class. He is a tall boy with short black hair. He is friendly to everyone.
My best friend Tom is quite different from me . He is more outgoing than me. He likes telling jokes. When I am not happy, he always makes me laugh. He likes sports. He often plays basketball after school. But I don’t like basketball, because I think it’s difficult for me.
When I am in trouble , he is always ready to help me. As the saying goes, A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.
No grammar mistakes
Independent writing
Have enough ideas
Have some examples
Have linking words
Use good sentence patterns
checklist
Sharing and evaluating Does he /she have enough ideas Yes No ☆☆☆
Does he/she give enough examples or facts Yes No ☆☆☆
Does he/she use correct linking words Yes No ☆☆
Does he/she use good sentences Yes No ☆
Does he/she have other gramma mistakes Yes No ☆
Your favorite sentence: Total stars: ________ √
Share
and
show your
story
Preparing for the task – 3. sentence pattern
Guessing-Who is her friend
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