Reading for writing
【写作指导】
审题定调
本写作任务要求写一篇游记,记录旅游经历,属于记叙文范畴。此类写作通常可按照时间顺序或游览的顺序来写,可以描写景物的特点,并抒发自己的情感。时态以过去时为主,人称多用第一人称。
谋篇布局
本写作可分为三部分:
第一部分:简述旅游概况(何时何地);
第二部分:描述旅游过程及所见所闻(具体的三日游活动介绍);
第三部分:分享自己的旅游感想。
组织语言
第一部分:简述旅游概况。
(时间), (主语)…was/were very excited to visit (地名). . .for (时间). . .
eg: Last month, my parents and I were very excited to visited Beijing for three days.
上个月,我和我的父母非常兴奋地去了北京三天。
第二部分:描述旅游过程及所见所闻。
After we arrived, we went to (景点). . .
eg: After we arrived,we went to Tian'anmen Square.
到达后,我们去了天安门广场。
After lunch,we spent our time in. . .and enjoyed. . .
eg: After lunch, we spent our time in the Palace Museum and enjoyed the exhibition of cultural relics and ancient buildings.
午饭后,我们在故宫博物院参观了文物和古建筑展览。
On the second day, (景点). . . was our destination.
eg: On the second day, the Great Wall was our destination.
第二天,长城是我们的目的地。
We admired the intelligence of . . .
eg: We admired the intelligence of ancient people.
我们钦佩古人的智慧。
In the evening,we went to(地点). . .to(目的). . .
eg: In the evening,we went to Laoshe Teahouse to watch an opera and drink tea.
晚上,我们去老舍茶馆看戏喝茶。
On the third day, we took a sightseeing tour of the city and went shopping. We also visited. . . ,which are new symbols of . . .
eg: On the third day,we took a sightseeing tour of the city and went shopping. We also visited the Bird's Nest and the Water Cube, which are new symbols of Beijing.
第三天,我们游览了这座城市并去购物。我们还参观了鸟巢和水立方,它们是北京的新象征。
第三部分:分享自己的旅游感想。
I was amazed not only at . . . but also. . . .
eg: I was amazed not only at the traditional culture but also the development of Beijing.
我不仅对传统文化感到惊讶,而且对北京的发展感到惊讶。
We were tired but our trip to. . .was really unforgettable.
eg: We were tired but our trip to Beijing was really unforgettable.
虽然我们很累,但我们的北京之行真的令人难忘。
What an unforgettable trip (it was) !
这是一次多么难忘的旅行啊!
【写作模板】
(时间), (主语)…was/were very excited to visit (地名). . .for (时间). . .
After we arrived, we went to (景点). . .After lunch, we spent our time in. . .and enjoyed. . .On the second day, (景点). . . was our destination. We admired the intelligence of . . .In the evening, we went to(地点). . .to(目的). . . On the third day, we took a sightseeing tour of the city and went shopping. We also visited. . . ,which are new symbols of . . .
I was amazed not only at . . . but also. . . .We were tired but our trip to. . .was really unforgettable. What an unforgettable trip (it was) !
【写作任务】
假定你是李华,你校英语报“Travelling”栏目正在面向全校同学征集游记,请你根据所给提示写一篇游记,介绍你在北京旅游时的所见所闻所感:第一天:参观天安门广场、故宫博物院;第二天:游长城,晚上去老舍茶馆品茶听戏;第三天:参观鸟巢、水立方,市内观光购物。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
故宫博物院The Palace Museum;
老舍茶馆 Laoshe Teahouse; 鸟巢Bird's Nest;
水立方 Water Cube(共12张PPT)
Unit 3
【写作指导】
本写作任务要求写一篇游记,记录旅游经历,属于记叙文范畴。此类写作通常可按照时间顺序或游览的顺序来写,可以描写景物的特点,并抒发自己的情感。时态以过去时为主,人称多用第一人称。
一、审题定调
本写作可分为三部分:
第一部分:简述旅游概况(何时何地);
第二部分:描述旅游过程及所见所闻(具体的三日游活动介绍);
第三部分:分享自己的旅游感想。
二、谋篇布局
第一部分:简述旅游概况。
(时间), (主语)…was/were very excited to visit (地名). . .for (时间). . .
eg: Last month, my parents and I were very excited to visited Beijing
for three days.
上个月,我和我的父母非常兴奋地去了北京三天。
三、组织语言
第二部分:描述旅游过程及所见所闻。
After we arrived, we went to (景点). . .
eg: After we arrived,we went to Tian'anmen Square.
到达后,我们去了天安门广场。
After lunch,we spent our time in. . .and enjoyed. . .
eg: After lunch, we spent our time in the Palace Museum and enjoyed the exhibition of cultural relics and ancient buildings.
午饭后,我们在故宫博物院参观了文物和古建筑展览。
On the second day, (景点). . . was our destination.
eg: On the second day, the Great Wall was our destination.
第二天,长城是我们的目的地。
We admired the intelligence of . . .
eg: We admired the intelligence of ancient people.
我们钦佩古人的智慧。
In the evening,we went to(地点). . .to(目的). . .
eg: In the evening,we went to Laoshe Teahouse to watch an opera and drink tea.
晚上,我们去老舍茶馆看戏喝茶。
On the third day, we took a sightseeing tour of the city and went shopping. We also visited. . . ,which are new symbols of . . .
eg: On the third day,we took a sightseeing tour of the city and went shopping. We also visited the Bird's Nest and the Water Cube, which are new symbols of Beijing.
第三天,我们游览了这座城市并去购物。我们还参观了鸟巢
和水立方,它们是北京的新象征。
第三部分:分享自己的旅游感想。
I was amazed not only at . . . but also. . . .
eg: I was amazed not only at the traditional culture but also the development of Beijing.
我不仅对传统文化感到惊讶,而且对北京的发展感到惊讶。
We were tired but our trip to. . .was really unforgettable.
eg: We were tired but our trip to Beijing was really unforgettable.
虽然我们很累,但我们的北京之行真的令人难忘。
What an unforgettable trip (it was) !
这是一次多么难忘的旅行啊!
(时间), (主语)…was/were very excited to visit (地名). . .for (时间). . .
After we arrived, we went to (景点). . .After lunch,we spent our time in. . .and enjoyed. . .On the second day, (景点). . . was our destination. We admired the intelligence of . . .In the evening,we went to(地点). . .to(目的). . . On the third day, we took a sightseeing tour of the city and went shopping. We also visited. . . ,which are new symbols of . . .
I was amazed not only at . . . but also. . . .We were tired but our trip to. . .was really unforgettable. What an unforgettable trip (it was) !
假定你是李华,你校英语报“Travelling”栏目正在面向全校同学征集游记,请你根据所给提示写一篇游记,介绍你在北京旅游时的所见所闻所感:第一天:参观天安门广场、故宫博物院;第二天:游长城,晚上去老舍茶馆品茶听戏;第三天:参观鸟巢、水立方,市内观光购物。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
故宫博物院The Palace Museum;
老舍茶馆 Laoshe Teahouse; 鸟巢Bird's Nest;
水立方 Water Cube
【写作任务】