(共16张PPT)
UNIT 1
PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
Introduce someone you admire
一、审题定调
本写作要求介绍一位自己崇拜的伟人，属于记叙文。介绍崇拜的伟人关键之处在于突出其主要经历和成就，并点明为何使你钦佩。介绍其生平事迹时一般用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主，但有时要根据实际情况有所变化。
二、谋篇布局
针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲：
第一部分：简单介绍人物背景；
第二部分：重点讲述该人物的主要经历和重要成就；
第三部分：你崇拜他／她的原因。
三、常用表达
第一部分：简单介绍人物背景。
When talking about......, I can't help but think of......, a famous.......
eg: When talking about “The Admirable”, I can't help but think of Yuan Longping, an famous agricultural scientist.
当谈到“令人钦佩的人”，我情不自禁想起农业科学家袁隆平。
1. ......(人名), who was born in......(时间), graduated from......(学校).
eg: Yuan Longping, who was born in September 1930, graduated from Agriculture Department in Southwest Agricultural Institute.
袁隆平，1930年9月出生，毕业于西南农学院农业系。
第二部分：重点讲述该人物的主要经历和重要成就。
2. After leaving the university, ......(人名) became a ...... in ......(地名).
eg: After leaving the University, Yuan Longping became a teacher in a remote school in Hunan.
离开大学后，袁隆平在湖南一所偏远学校当了老师。
3. In those years, he/she had a lot of experience when .......
eg: In those years, he had a lot of experience when he educated people and did agricultural researches.
在那些年里，他在教育人民和从事农业研究方面有了很多经验。
4. In .......(年份), ......(事情).
He came up with the idea of ......, which .......
eg: In the 1960s, China was suffering serious famine.
20世纪60年代, 中国遭受严重饥荒。
He came up with the idea of hybrid rice, which has a high yield.
他提出了杂交水稻的想法, 这种水稻产量很高。
5. .....(时间) later, he succeeded in ......(发明或发现) that......(作用).
eg: Ten years later, he succeeded in inventing a new species that produced a 20 percent higher yield than common types of rice.
Ten years later, he succeeded in inventing a new species.
It produced a 20 percent higher yield than common types of rice.
十年后，他成功地发明了一种新品种，其产量比普通水稻高20%。
6. Because......, (人名) is known as ......
eg: Because this solved the food crisis, Yuan Longping is known as “the father of hybrid rice”.
因为这解决了粮食危机，袁隆平被称为“杂交水稻之父”。
1. ......(人名) experienced many failures, but he did not give up.
eg: Yuan Longping experienced many failures, but he did not give up.
袁隆平经历了多次失败，但他没有放弃。
第三部分：你崇拜他／她的原因。
2. I am inspired by......
eg: I am inspired by his perseverance and scientific spirit.
他的毅力和科学精神鼓舞了我。
【拓展】
描述人的品质
patriotism 爱国精神 self-sacrifice 自我牺牲精神
perseverance 坚韧不拔 scientific spirit科学精神
patience 耐心 persistence 坚持
determination 果断 selflessness 无私
sense of responsibility 责任心 kindness 善良
3. ......(人名) made a contribution in agriculture, not only to China, but to the whole world.
eg: Yuan Longping made a contribution in agriculture, not only to China, but to the whole world.
袁隆平不仅对中国，而且对整个世界在农业方面做出了贡献。
4. As far as I am concerned, he is ......
eg: As far as I am concerned, he is a hero.
就我而言, 他是个英雄。
When talking about......, I can't help but think of......, a famous.......
......(人名), who was born in......(时间), graduated from......(学校).
After leaving the university, ......(人名) became a ...... in ......(地名).
In those years, he had a lot of experience when ....... In .......(年份), ......(事情). He came up with the idea of ......, which ....... .....(时间) later, he succeeded in ......(发明或发现) . Because......, (人名) is known as ......
......(人名) experienced many failures, but he did not give up. I am inspired by...... ......(人名) made a contribution in agriculture, not only to China, but to the whole world. As far as I am concerned, he is ......
【写作模板】
袁隆平生于1930年9月，在北京协和医院出生，长大后跟随父母辗转多地。1949年，袁隆平以优异的成绩考入西南农学院(现西南大学)，学习农作物专业。1953年，23岁的袁隆平被分配到了湖南怀化的一所农校当老师。同时继续研究他喜爱的杂交水稻，此后袁隆平经过不懈努力和钻研，克服了诸多困难，培育出了具有稳定遗传性状的人工杂交水稻，解决了困扰世界百年的粮食危机。袁隆平一生获奖无数，很多都是重量级大奖。其被誉为“世界杂交水稻之父”，中国工程院院士，美国国家科学院院士。
【人物经历】
【写作任务】
某英文报社正在开展主题为“The Admirable”的征稿活动，请你介绍一位你所崇拜的人并投稿。
注意：词数100左右。Writing——Introduce someone you admire
【写作指导】
一、审题定调
本写作要求介绍一位自己崇拜的伟人，属于记叙文。介绍崇拜的伟人关键之处在于突出其主要经历和成就，并点明为何使你钦佩。介绍其生平事迹时一般用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主，但有时要根据实际情况有所变化。
二、谋篇布局
针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲：
第一部分：简单介绍人物背景；
第二部分：重点讲述该人物的主要经历和重要成就；
第三部分：你崇拜他／她的原因。
三、常用表达
第一部分：简单介绍人物背景。
When talking about......, I can't help but think of......, a famous.......
eg: When talking about “The Admirable”, I can't help but think of Yuan Longping, an famous agricultural scientist.
当谈到“令人钦佩的人”，我情不自禁想起著名农业科学家袁隆平。
第二部分：重点讲述该人物的主要经历和重要成就。
......(人名), who was born in......(时间), graduated from......(学校).
eg: Yuan Longping, who was born in September 1930, graduated from Agriculture Department in Southwest Agricultural Institute.
袁隆平，1930年9月出生，毕业于西南农学院农业系。
After leaving the university, ......(人名) became a ...... in ......(地名).
eg: After leaving the University, Yuan Longping became a teacher in a remote school in Hunan.
离开大学后，袁隆平在湖南一所偏远学校当了老师。
In those years, he/she had a lot of experience when .......
eg: In those years, he had a lot of experience when he educated people and did agricultural researches.
在那些年里，他在教育人民和从事农业研究方面有了很多经验。
In .......(年份), ......(事情). He came up with the idea of ......, which .......
eg: In the 1960s, China was suffering serious famine.
20世纪60年代，中国遭受严重饥荒。
He came up with the idea of hybrid rice, which has a high yield.
他提出了杂交水稻的想法，这种水稻产量很高。
.....(时间) later, he succeeded in ......(发明或发现) that......(作用).
eg: Ten years later, he succeeded in inventing a new species that produced a 20 percent higher yield than common types of rice.
Ten years later, he succeeded in inventing a new species.
It produced a 20 percent higher yield than common types of rice.
十年后，他成功地发明了一种新品种，其产量比普通水稻高20%。
Because......, (人名) is known as ......
eg: Because this solved the food crisis, Yuan Longping is known as “the father of hybrid rice”.
因为这解决了粮食危机，袁隆平被称为“杂交水稻之父”。
第三部分：你崇拜他／她的原因。
......(人名) experienced many failures, but he did not give up.
eg: Yuan Longping experienced many failures, but he did not give up.
袁隆平经历了多次失败，他没有放弃。
I am inspired by......
eg: I am inspired by his perseverance and scientific spirit.
他的毅力和科学精神鼓舞了我。
【拓展】
描述人的品质
patriotism 爱国精神 self-sacrifice 自我牺牲精神
perseverance 坚韧不拔 scientific spirit科学精神
patience 耐心 persistence 坚持
determination 果断 selflessness 无私
sense of responsibility 责任心 kindness 善良
......(人名) made a contribution in agriculture, not only to China, but to the whole world.
eg: Yuan Longping made a contribution in agriculture, not only to China, but to the whole world.
袁隆平不仅对中国，而且对整个世界在农业方面做出了贡献。
As far as I am concerned, he is ......
eg: As far as I am concerned, he is a hero.
就我而言, 他是个英雄。
【写作模板】
When talking about......, I can't help but think of......, a famous.......
......(人名), who was born in......(时间), graduated from......(学校).
After leaving the university, ......(人名) became a ...... in ......(地名).
In those years, he had a lot of experience when ....... In .......(年份), ......(事情). He came up with the idea of ......, which ....... .....(时间) later, he succeeded in ......(发明或发现) .Because......, (人名) is known as ......
......(人名) experienced many failures, but he did not give up. I am inspired by......(人名) made a contribution in agriculture, not only to China, but to the whole world. As far as I am concerned, he is ......
【人物经历】
袁隆平生于1930年9月，在北京协和医院出生，长大后跟随父母辗转多地。1949年，袁隆平以优异的成绩考入西南农学院(现西南大学)，学习农作物专业。1953年，23岁的袁隆平被分配到了湖南怀化的一所农校当老师。同时继续研究他喜爱的杂交水稻，此后袁隆平经过不懈努力和钻研，克服了诸多困难，培育出了具有稳定遗传性状的人工杂交水稻，解决了困扰世界百年的粮食危机。袁隆平一生获奖无数，很多都是重量级大奖。其被誉为“世界杂交水稻之父”，中国工程院院士，美国国家科学院院士。
【写作任务】
某英文报社正在开展主题为“The Admirable”的征稿活动，请你介绍一位你所崇拜的人并投稿。
注意：词数100左右。
