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Welcome Unit
单元写作全解
新人教高一必修1
目 录
目 录
Ⅰ写作任务
Ⅱ 写作思路
Ⅲ 素材整理
Ⅳ 高分作文
Ⅴ 佳作背诵
Ⅵ 话题写作词&佳句背诵
写 作 任 务
Ⅰ写作任务
写 作 任 务
假如你是刚刚升入高中的李华,开学大约一周了,在老师和同学的帮助下你从开始的焦虑变成现在的非常有信心,而且还结交了很多新朋友。请你写信给老朋友琳琳,介绍一下你的情况,并建议大家都努力为三年后的高考奋斗。
注意:1. 文章应包括以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右;
3. 参考词汇:the National College Entrance Examination.
写 作 思 路
Ⅱ写作思路
写 作 思 路
01
一审:确定写作体裁&主题
体裁:应用文——信件
主题:介绍学校生活
02
二定:确定时态&人称(与体裁&主题息息相关)
时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:以第一人称为主
03
三明确
明确写作要点:点明主题,介绍自己的情况→提出自己的建议
素 材 整 理
Ⅲ素材整理
素 材 整 理
关键词语
senior high school,curious,
campus,anxious,confident,
impress,concentrate on,goal
素 材 整 理
完成句子
1. 我进入高中已经大约一个星期了。
(since)
It has been about one week ____
___________________________
完成句子
2. 我知道你对我的新的校园生活很好奇,
所以我现在会告诉你一些相关的事情。
(curious)
I know that __________ my campus
life, so now I will tell you
something about it.
素 材 整 理
完成句子
3. 起初,我对自己的学习有点儿焦
虑,但在我的老师和同学的帮助下,
我变得自信起来。
(anxious,confident)
完成句子
At first, I was _____________________
my study, but with the help of my
teachers and classmates, I ___________
__________________________.
素 材 整 理
完成句子
4. 现在我交了很多新朋友,他们给
我留下了很深的印象。(impress)
完成句子
Now, I have made many new
friends _____________________.
素 材 整 理
完成句子
5. 在接下来的三年里,我们应该集
中精力努力学习,以实现高考的目标。
(concentrate on)
完成句子
We are expected to ________________
________for our goals of the National
College Entrance Examinatino
in the next three years.
素 材 整 理
Keys:
1. since I entered senior high school
2. you’re curious about
3. a little anxious about; became confident
4. who impress me a lot
5. concentrate on learning hard
高 分 作 文
Ⅳ高分作文
高 分 作 文
加粗部分为本单元的重点词汇
Dear Linlin,
It has been about one week since I entered senior high school. I know that you’re curious about my new campus life, so now I will tell you something about it.
At first I was a little anxious about my study, but with the help of my teachers and classmates, I became confident. Now I have made many new friends who impress me a lot. We are expected to concentrate on learning hard for our goals of the National College Entrance Examination in next three years.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
重点句型:It has been+时间段+since
使用定语从句,体现了作文中适当运用长难句、复杂句增加得分亮点的特点。
写作中被动句式往往比主动句好
在接下来的三年里
经典的结束语,一定要背会!
佳 作 背 诵
Ⅴ佳作背诵
佳 作 背 诵
Passage 1
进入高中的首个活动是学校为了锻炼学生意志而组织的军训。你们班级要召开军训动原班会,请你谈一谈对于军训的看法,写一篇80词左右的文章。
参考词汇:military training 军训
One possible version:
Militray Training
Dear classmates:
As we all know, in our nation, it’s a usual practice for us students to attend the militray training organised by our school. Most students are annoyed and frightened of it, because the training is so hard. Students have to learn to be soldiers and the trainers are strict with them. However, I hold the belief that the military training is a good way to promote the form of students’ firm personality, which is useful to our life. Don’t you think so
佳 作 背 诵
Passage 2
假如你是李华,在新学期的第一次考试中取得了优异的成绩,班主任老师邀请你在班会上与全班同学分享你的学习心得,请你写一篇英语演讲稿,内容应包括:
1. 课前充分预习,与同伴交流各自的疑惑;
2. 课上认真听讲,记笔记;
3. 课后及时复习。
注意:1. 文章应包括以上要点,可适当发挥;
2. 次数80左右
One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone! I’m glas to stand here to share my learning experience with you. The key to studying well is to explore the learning method that suits you best. My methods are as follows.
Firstly, I always scan the contents in advance and exchange my puzzle with my partner. In addition, I am bound to concentrate on what the teacher syas and take notes attentively. After class, I often revise knowledge through understanding my notes.
Hopefully my methods can help you. That’s all, thanks.
话题写作词&佳句背诵
Ⅵ话题写作词&佳句背诵
话题写作词&佳句背诵
1. campus n. 校园;校区
2. playground n. 操场
3. laboratory/lab n. 实验室
4. dining hall 食堂
5. dormitory n. 宿舍
6. club n. 俱乐部
7. teaching building 教学楼
8. the Students’ Union 学生会
9. achievement/result n. 成绩
10. mark/grade/score n. 分数
11. hobby n. 爱好,嗜好
12. volunteer n. 志愿者
13. learning habits 学习习惯
14. the class meeting 班会
15. broaden one’s horizon 开拓视野
16. enrich one’s knowledge 丰富知识
17. enrich our school life 丰富我们的校园生活
18. have trouble in learning English
学习英语有困难
19. graduate from senior high school 高中毕业
20. Practice makes perfect 熟能生巧
21. Confidence is the key to success.
自信是成功的关键
22. When you are faced with difficulty, never lose heart/give up.
面临困难时,千万不要灰心/放弃
23. Only if you work hard can you succeed in the future.
只有你努力了,你才能在未来获得成功。
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