课件21张PPT。 English writing
for Module 2
Learning Aims
通过仿写学会与仿写内容相关的作文。
掌握英语写作六步法,并用此方法学会写作。
3. 掌握潍坊市中考作文评分标准。
4.最重要的是注意书写。My favourite
book Harry Potter写作题目My favorite book The Adventures of Tom Sawyer My favourite book is The adventures of Tom Sawyer. It’s written by Mark Twain. It’s about a young boy named Tom Sawyer.
He’s a lively and clever young boy. He finds himself in many exciting adventures. He has two friends named Huck and Joe. My favourite scene is when everyone thinks Tom is dead. The themes of the story are to do with children growing up and becoming more serious.
Although it’s only a story, I like it best because Twain wrote it in the everyday English of the southern states of America in the 19th century,so it sounds very real. I think it's the best book I've ever read.
Pre-writing 仿写书面表达六步法书面表达六步法While –writing
My favourite book Harry Potter书面表达六步法一、审题
My favourite book Harry Potter
体裁
人称
时态 书面表达六步法书面表达六步法二、抓要点二、抓要点
My favourite book harry Potter
Brainstorming 头脑风暴
While watching the short film, you must think about as many words as you can .书面表达六步法brave fight against
enemiesa magical studentTwo friends: Rone and HenryInterestedexcitingpopularWith glassesBackground informationno parentsKey Words and phrases 书面表达六步法三、Out ling 划分段落
扩展成句
What’s your favorite book ?Whom is it written by?My favourite book Harry Potter Para 1Para 2Who is Harry?Harry PotterJ.K RowlingWhat do you think of the book?Exciting
interesting
magical popular.Para 3A magical student
With glass, 16, no parents, brave,two friends三、扩展成句 My favourite book is Harry Potter. He is a magical student with glasses. It is written by J.k Rowling. It’s about a young boy named Harry Potter.He is 16 years old, he is very brave and can fight against
the energies.
He has no parents ,he has 2 friends.When I read the book , I feel very excited and
it’s popular with our students. I’m interested in it.I think it’s an interesting and magical book. I love it. 书面表达六步法 四、连句成文
书面表达六步法书面整洁不一定加分
书面潦草一定扣分注意书写Pay attention to While-writing①.开门见山,紧扣主题 。②.语言正确, 规范地道。 My favourite great book is……句型、结构,避免中国式英语。
He by bike to school.
标点符号③.重短轻长, 就易避难。 以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。 ④.过渡自然, 表达流畅。正确使用连词,保持行文的流畅。
不重复使用可置换的词。⑤.适当评论, 发表己见。 Sharing Time Who did best !
书面表达六步法
五.查错改错
要尽量剔除错误
中考英语作文评分标准词数在60- 100之间,如果少于60词,应酌情扣分。
1.内容充实,语言流畅,能恰当地运用较复杂句式及习惯用语等,语法、拼写错误极少(13—15分)
2. 较通顺完整,有少量语法、拼写错误(10—12分)
3.基本要点写出,有稍多语法、拼写错误(6—9分)
4.篇幅不足,错误较多,语句不通顺(3—5分)
5.只写了个别句子或单词(0—2分)书面表达六步法六.重新眷写
用水笔或钢笔誊写,注意字迹要求 整洁端正.
After-writing Summary词、句与篇的关系 Word
Sentence
Paragraph
CompositionCP1 P2 P3 P4 ...S1 S2 S3 S4...w1w2w3w4...Your homework
Write a composition about
“my favourite……”Thank you !