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人教新目标版 八年级(上)
Unit1 Where did you go on vacation
Period5 Section B
3a-Self check
写作课优质课
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Learning aims
1.学习本课新词汇: duck, dislike, last； take photos, tell sb(not)to do sth, keep doing sth, so….that, find out, go on, up and down, in excitement, come up
掌握句型:1) I bought something special. I learned something important.
2) The weather was hot and sunny.
3) We took some photos.
4) In the evening, I felt really tired.
2.能够综合运用本单元的重点词汇、短语及一般过去时描述旅游的经历和感受。
3. 总结日记的结构和内容，能够综合运用所掌握的知识并根据相关提示写一篇简单的旅行日记。
4.培养学生写日记的习惯。
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New words
Pre-writing
Listen and repeat.
duck
n.鸭
dislike
v.&n.
不喜爱(的事物)；
厌恶(的事物)
Tian'anmen Square
天安门广场
/skwe /
/d s'la k/
/d k/
the Palace /'p l s/ Museum
故宫博物院
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Revision
Pre-writing
Talk about the pictures. Imagine you visited the places this summer vacation. Please make one or two sentences about each picture using the simple past tense.
The Summer Palace
a farm
the mountains
the summer camp
a museum
a beach
For example,
This summer I went to the Great Wall in Beijing. It was beautiful.
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Warming up
Pre-writing
Look at the pictures. Do you know these places
the Palace Museum
the Great Wall
Tian’anmen Square
National Stadium
the Summer Palace
a Beijing hutong
the old Summer Palace
The Temple of Heaven
Have you ever been to one of these places
Imagine you are an American student on vacation in Beijing.
Write a travel diary.
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Pre-writing
3a
Complete the diary entry about a trip to one of these places. Use the words and phrases in the box to help you.
Time
Weather
Activities
Food
Description words
Before completing the entry, let's read the words and then fill in the blanks first.
hot and sunny
Beijing duck
take some photos; buy something special; learn something important
tired delicious beautiful interesting
August
写作前可按写作相关内容分类罗列相关的词汇，以便在写作中能快速依据所写内容的线索，从“分类词库”中检索自己所需词汇。
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Reading
Pre-writing
3a
Complete the diary entry about a trip to one of these places. Use the words and phrases in the box to help you.
August
hot and sunny
a Beijing hutong
interesting
took some photos
I learned something important
Beijing duck
delicious
tired
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Discussion
Pre-writing
How to write a diary entry in English
Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather was hot and sunny.
I went to Tian'anmen. It was beautiful.
We took some photos. I liked this place because I
learned something important. For dinner we had
Beijing duck. It was delicious.
In the evening, I felt really tired .
书端
the format(格式) of the diary
星期在前，月日在后，有时后面加上天气状况
正文
time
另起一行。正文可以顶格写，
也可以内缩3至5个字母空间。
时态
the past tense
人称
the first person
顺序
the time order
What are the features(特点)
of a diary entry
日期
in the upper(上) right corner
活动
activity + feeling + reason
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Discussion
Pre-writing
Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather was hot and sunny.
I went to Tian'anmen. It was beautiful.
We took some photos. I liked this place because I
learned something important. For dinner we had
Beijing duck. It was delicious.
In the evening, I felt really tired .
How to write a diary entry in English
My
travel
the framework(结构) of the diary
Beginning
Weather
Person
Place
Date
Body
Activity
Reason
Feeling
Ending
Feeling
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Discussion
Pre-writing
What do we usually write in the body part
How to write a diary entry in English
Today the weather was hot and sunny. I went to Tian’anmen Square. It was beautiful. We took some photos. I like this place because I could learn something important. For dinner we had Beijing duck. It was delicious. In the evening, I felt really tired.
weather
place + description
activity
feeling + reason
food + description
feeling
How did you feel
You can add more details to enrich your diary.
How was the weather
Where did you go
What did you do
Why did you like this place
What did you eat
How was the food
细节
丰富
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Making notes
Pre-writing
3b
Answer the questions to make notes about a vacation you took.
1. Where did you go __________________________
2. Did you go with anyone _______________________
3. How was the weather ______________________
4. What did you do every day _________________________
5. What food did you eat ______________________
6. What did you like best _______________________
7. Did you dislike anything ____________________________
8. How did you feel about the trip
____________________________
I went to the beach.
Yes. I went with my parents.
It was sunny and hot.
We went swimming every day.
We ate sea food.
I liked the paragliding best.
Yes. I didn’t like the bus ride.
It was interesting but tired.
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Writing
While-writing
3c
Write a travel diary like Jane’s on page 5. Use your notes in 3b.
______________________________
______________________________
______________________________
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Writing guide
While-writing
本文为写日记，因此应用一般过去时态。应注意动词的过去式形式。
回顾一下在3b中所回答的问题的情况，然后将这些句子按恰当的逻辑顺序排列在一起，形成条理清晰的一段文字。
可以根据旅行的经历再添加一些恰当的想像的句子。
再次，阅读一遍短文，看有没有错误的句子。
写作指导
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Writing guide
While-writing
谋篇布局
开篇点题
旅行过程
表达感想
I went to … on vacation with …this summer.
It was sunny …
We went swimming …
We usually ate …
I liked the paragliding …
But I didn’t like …
I think the trip was …
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Writing guide
While-writing
One possible version:
July 24th, Wednesday
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
________________________________________
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
I went to the beach on vacation with my parents this summer . It was sunny and hot. We went swimming in the sea every day. We usually ate sea food. I liked the paragliding best. It was exciting. But I didn’t like the bus ride. It’s boring. I think the trip was exciting but tired.
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Writing practice I
While-writing
假如你是李明,这个暑假你和你父母一起去了北京,你们在北京游览了很多地方。请你以“My Trip to Beijing”为题,写一篇短文,记述你的这次旅行。
参考词汇:Tian’anmen Square; the flag-raising ceremony(升旗仪式); the Great Wall; the Palace Museum; the Summer Palace; the Temple of Heaven
要求:1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名校名
及其他相关信息;
2. 不少于70词。
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Writing guide
While-writing
谋篇布局
My travel
Beginning
Body
Ending
Today I went to the Palace Museum ….
Then I went to visit …
In the afternoon, I went to …
Today was Chinese Army Day …
At last, we traveled around …
I felt very happy today …
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Writing guide
While-writing
积句成篇
on vacation 度假 the next day 第二天
take photos 照相 quite a few 相当多
learn about 了解 go to the beach 去海滩
at first 首先 feel like 给……的感觉；感受到
have fun/enjoy oneself 玩得高兴
have a three-day trip 进行三天的旅行
go hiking/camping/swimming 去远足/野营/游泳
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Writing guide
While-writing
积句成篇
开头句：
Last …, … went to … on vacation.
… had a good time with … in /on …
中间句：
We visited …
Because of …, we …
It was time for us to …
Everything was excellent there!
结尾句：
What a pleasant …!
I was so … that …
经典名句：
Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.
He who travels far knows much.
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Writing guide
While-writing
范文欣赏
Thursday, August 1st
Today I went to the Palace Museum. It was cool. Then I went to
visit the Great Wall. How great it is! I took many photos there. In
the afternoon, I went to Tian’an Men Square. The square is very
large. Today was Chinese Army Day. So there were many people
there and it was very crowded. We had great fun playing there! At
last, we traveled around Beijing hutong on tricycle. The Chinese
people are very friendly. I felt very happy today, but I was really tired.
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Writing guide II
While-writing
去年暑假（8月22日）你和你父母坐飞机一起去了成都,你们在成都游览了很多地方。请你写一篇日记,记述你的这次旅行。
内容提示：1.天气晴朗炎热。
2.你们晚上去旅馆附近散步，看到许多美丽的建筑物和好的饭店。
3.午饭吃了火锅，辛辣美味。
4.下午去看熊猫，喜欢熊猫，机灵可爱。很高兴了解人们正尽力拯救这濒临灭绝的动物。
5.晚上沿着Chunxi路购物，买了很多。累但很快乐。
要求:1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名校名
及其他相关信息;
2. 不少于70词。
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Writing guide
While-writing
第一段
交代背景
第二段
具体细节
第三段
总结升华
写作提纲
My travel
引入主题句，交代旅行的___，___，___，___。
按___顺序，描述旅行的过程。内容包含___，___，___...
总结旅行的__________。
I arrived in Chengdu this morning with my parents. …
It was sunny and hot, …
so we decided to......
For lunch, we had
In the afternoon, we went to...
I was happy to know people...
I felt really ….
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谋篇布局
Writing guide
While-writing
第一段
交代背景
第二段
时间顺序
天气/动作/感受
第三段
总结升华
Wednesday, August 22 th
去年暑假，我和父母坐飞机上午到达成都。
天气晴朗炎热。
所以我们决定去旅馆附近散步。我们看到了许多漂亮的建筑物和好的饭店。
午饭我们吃了火锅，非常辛辣美味，我喜欢四川食物。
下午，我们去动物园看熊猫。熊猫是我的最爱，因为它们是这么可爱。
很高兴了解的人们正在尽力地拯救这濒临灭绝的动物。
晚上，我沿着春熙路购物，买了许多物品。
It was sunny and hot.
so we decided to go for a walk near our hotel. We saw many pretty buildings and lots of good restaurants.
For lunch, we had hot pot. It was very spicy but delicious. I love Sichuan food!.
In the afternoon, we went to see pandas. Pandas are my favorite animals because they’re so cute.
I was happy to know people are trying their best to save this endangered animal.
In the evening, we went shopping along Chunxi Road and bought many things.
I arrived in Chengdu this morning with my parents by plane last summer vacation.
今天我真的感到疲惫，但是我非常快乐。
I felt really tired today, but I was very happy .
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Writing guide
While-writing
佳作欣赏
Sample writing
Wednesday, August 22 th
I arrived in Chengdu this morning with my parents last summer vacation. It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go for a walk near our hotel. We saw many pretty buildings and lots of good restaurants. For lunch, we had hot pot. It was very spicy but delicious. I love Sichuan food! In the afternoon, we went to see pandas in the zoo. Pandas are my favorite animals because they’re so cute. I was happy to know people are trying their best to save this endangered animal. In the evening, we went shopping along Chunxi Road and bought many things. I felt really tired today, but I was very happy .
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Practice
Post-writing
Imagine you are all foreigners on vacation in China. You meet each other at the airport on your way home. Talk about what you did on your vacation.
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Emotion
Post-writing
Falling in love with the diary
A diary entry helps you relive old memories,
happy as well as sad.
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Post-writing
Self Check
1 Complete the conversations with the correct words in the box.
anything
everything
nothing
anyone
everyone
no one
1. A: Did ________ go on vacation with you last month
B: Yes, my family went to the countryside with me.
2. A: Did your family go to the beach with you last
weekend
B: No. __________ from my family went, but my
friend went with me.
3. A: I didn’t bring back anything from Malaysia.
B: ___________ at all Why not
4. A: Did you buy _________ in the shopping center
B: No, I didn’t. _________ was very expensive.
5. A: How was the volleyball game yesterday
B: Great! ____________ had a fun time!
anyone
No one
Nothing
anything
Everything
Everyone
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Post-writing
Lead in
Mount Tai
What are they waiting for
The sun started to come up.
Everyone jumped up and down in excitement.
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Post-writing
Self Check
2 Complete the passage with the correct forms of the verbs in the
brackets.
Last August, our class ___ (do) something very special on our school trip. We _____ (go) to Mount Tai. We ______ (start) our trip at 12:00 at night. Everyone in our class ____ (take) a bag with some food and water. After three hours, someone looked at the map and _____ (find) out we _______ (be, not) anywhere near the top. My legs ____ (be) so tired that I wanted to stop. My classmates ____ (tell) me to keep going, so I _____ (go) on. At 5:00 a.m., we got to the top! Everyone _______ (jump) up and down in excitement. Twenty minutes later, the sun _______ (start) to come up. It was so beautiful that we ______ (forget) about the last five hours!
did
went
started
took
found
weren’t
were
told
went
jumped
started
forgot
指导：通读全文可知，本文记叙了去年八月份作者全班去泰山旅行的事情。可知本文应为一般过去时态，因此应用括号中单词的一般过去时态。因此，应明确该动词是规则变化还是不规则变化。
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Class test
Post-writing
一、用所给动词的适当形式填空。
1. We ______ (live) in Japan last year.
2. Jack ________ (stop) the car last Sunday.
3. Tom _______ (clean) my room and _______ (study) for the Chinese test last weekend.
4. What ______ you ______ (do) last night
5. On Sunday morning I _______(play) tennis.
lived
stopped
cleaned
studied
did
do
played
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Class test
Post-writing
二、改写句子。
1. Lucy did her homework at home.（改否定句）
Lucy _______ ____ her homework at home.
2. He went to the zoo last Sunday.（变一般疑问句)
______ he ______ to the zoo last Sunday
3. She stayed there a week ago.（对划线部分提问）
______ ______ she ______ there
4. There was some orange in the cup.（变一般疑问句)
______ there ______ orange in the cup
didn’t do
Did go
When did stay
Was any
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Homework
必做题：1. 阅读Self check 2的短文，并强化记忆所例举动词的一般过去式形式。
2. 总结全单元出现的不规则变化的动词的一般过去式，并努力记住他们。
3. Preview the new words and expressions in Unit 2.
选作题：(任选其一)
1. National Day is coming. Where did you go on a trip on your last National Day vacation Remember and write your own travel diary. You can imitate the diary in 3a.You can also add some more information if possible.
2. I went to Tokyo, Japan on July 19th last year. Please recall the unforgettable trip and write a diary entry for that day.
Where did you go
How was the weather
What did you do/eat
How did you feel
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Homework
Friday, July 19th, 2019
Dear diary,
I arrived in Tokyo in Japan this morning with my friends. Lucky for us, it was not very hot. We put down our luggage in the hotel and went straight to the Disneyland. I took some photos of the castles in the park. They were so beautiful that I felt like I was in a fairy tale. I really enjoyed the roller coaster ride. Everyone was screaming and it was so exciting! We ate sushi for dinner and it was delicious. Besides, the people in the restaurant were very polite. It was almost midnight when we got back to the hotel. I felt tired but happy.
Sylvia
place
weather
activity/food
feeling
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