(共50张PPT)
Writing
Unit 2
Traditional Festivals
学习内容
本课时以“传统节日”为话题,向大家介绍了一些古今中外节日的由来、意义及人们庆祝的方式等。旨在通过学习让学生能增强对传统文化知识的了解,同时还能了解西方国家的一些重要节日,积累跨国文化知识。
写作目标
壹
贰
叁
能描述某个节日的时间,庆祝活动,意义以及感受。
能在写作过程中最好能用到本单元所学的重要语法知识——宾语从句。
掌握写作微技能——列提纲(make
a outline)
How can we write an article about traditional festivals?
Read the following passage ang have a summary.
My favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. It’s a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet.
On this day people usually eat zongzi and hold dragon boat races. They also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort(艾草) around the doors and carry a spice bag around with them.
What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit — everybody tries their best to win the race. It is very exciting and interesting. So my favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.
Para 1
name, date,
Para 2
things to eat,
things to do
Para 3
feelings,
reasons
Summary
Para 2
Para 1
Para 3
name,
date,
significance
(庆祝意义)
things to eat,
things to do,
feelings,
reasons
Traditional
Festival
语言积累
name ,date, significance
Chinese Spring Festival
Chinese Spring Festival
It represents a new beginning when people send off the old days and welcome the new ones.
Mid-Autumn Festival
Mid-Autumn Festival
It represents people’s good wishes to be reunited with (与...团聚) their families.
The Lantern Festival
The Lantern Festival
It represents the
last day of the Lunar
New Year celebration.
The Gragon Boat Festival
The Gragon Boat Festival
People celebrate the festival to honor the great poet Qu Yuan.
Tomb Sweeping Day
Tomb Sweeping Day
It is a special day
for the living to show love and respect to
their dead friends or relatives.
a.lies on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month.
b.lies on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month
c.lies on the first day of the 1st lunar month.
d.is on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month
e.is on April 4th or 5th
1. The Dragon Boat Festival ( )
2. The Lantern Festival ( )
3. Tomb Sweeping Day ( )
4. Chinese Spring Festival ( )
5. Mid-Autumn Festival ( )
Match the following festival names with dates.
b
a
e
c
d
传统节日的名称与日期的不同表达
1. The Spring Festival usually comes in January or February.
2.People celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month.
3.Halloween is celebrated on November 1st.
4. The Mother’s Day is / lies / falls on the second Sunday of May.
语言积累
things to eat,
things to do.
Chinese
Spring
Festival
things to eat
things to do
Dumplings; Niangao;Fish;
Chicken
Before the Spring Festival:
clean the house, sweep the floor , put up couplets
go shopping , prepare for family dinner,
watch the Spring Festival Gala
During the Spring Festival:
wear new clothes , visit relatives and friends,
get some lucky money
things to eat
things to do
Mid-Autumn
Festival
mooncake , desserts, fruit,crabs
admire the moon ,
have a family reunion dinner,
fly sky lantern
The
Lantern
Festival
things to eat
things to do
watch the lantern show,
guess the lantern riddles,
watch the firework,
watch lion dance
sweet dumplings / Yuan Xiao / Tang Yuan
The Gragon
Boat Festival
things to eat
things to do
Zongzi ,
Realgar Wine(雄黄酒)
hanging pictures of Zhong Kui,
hanging Calamus and Moxa(挂菖蒲和艾草)
dragon boat race
Tomb Sweeping Day
things to eat
things to do
clean the tomb,
cherish (怀念) the memories of their dead family members,
plant willow trees (插柳)
spring out (踏青)
QingTuan
佳句积累
1.我们有很多方式庆祝春节,比如放烟花和贴春联。
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2. 在春节期间,我们中国人总会友好热情地招待亲戚朋友。
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3.在泼水节的时候,人们会走到街上互相泼水。
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We celebrate the Spring Festival with many kinds of activities,
such as setting fireworks and putting up red couplets.
We Chinese always treat our relatives and friends with kindness and
warmth during the Spring Festival.
People go on the streets to throw water at each other during the
Dai Water Festival.
佳句积累
4.人们有赏月和与家人分享月饼的传统。
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5.在元宵节的时候人们会团聚在一起吃汤圆。
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6.在端午节那天,人们经常吃一种叫做粽子的特殊食物。
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7.在除夕,家人们聚在一起吃一顿大餐。
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People have the tradition of admiring the full moon and sharing mooncakes with families
People often get together and eat sweet dumplings on Lantern Festival.
People often eat a special kind of food called zongzi on Dragon Boat Festival.
The families get together and have a big dinner on New Year’s Eve
佳句积累
8.那一天,有很多活动,如龙舟比赛和把粽子扔进河里。
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9.中国人已经庆祝中秋和吃月饼好几个世纪了。
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10.晚饭过后,人们会坐在一起看春节联欢晚会。
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On that day, there are many kinds of activities, such as the
dragon boat races and throwing zongzi into the rivers.
Chinese people have been celebrating Mid-Autumn Festival and enjoying mooncakes for centuries.
After dinner, people sit together and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.
语言积累
Feeling,
Reasons
Feeling
感叹句表达情感
1. What a wonderful time we have!
2. How exciting and happy we are during the Spring Festivals!
表达情感的不同表达
1. I think that getting together with my family during the spring Festival is the most __________.
2.It makes me feel _______.
3.Not only do we get lots of happeniness and fun, but we can feel relaxed.
Reasons
句子仿写。(选择一个节日,模仿下面这句话)
Behind all these things lies the ture meaning of Christmas:the importance of sharing and giving love and joy to people around us. And that is the true spirits of christmas.
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Behind all these things lies the ture meaning of Mother’s Day:the importance of showing our love to our parents.
Reasons
其他表示意义的句子。
1. Because the new year is a time for cleaning and washing away bad things. Then you’ll have good luck in the new year.
2.They carry people’s wishes to the families they love and miss.
3. It’s my favorite festival because...
写作范例
假设你是刘伟,你的美国朋友Mike想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示,给Mike 写一封e-mail,向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。
内容提示:
1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;
2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)
(Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money)
要求:1.80词左右,书信格式;
2.内容合理,要点齐全;句子及篇章结构正确、连贯;书
写规范。
注意:不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。
写作指导
列提纲
写好句
审题
成篇章
假设你是刘伟,你的美国朋友Mike想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示,给Mike 写一封e-mail,向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。
内容提示:
1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;
2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)
(Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money)
要求:1. 80词左右,书信格式;
2.内容合理,要点齐全;句子及篇章结构
正确、连贯;书 写规范。
注意:不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。
审题
1. 审主题:______.
2. 审体裁:________.
3. 审人称:_______.
4. 审时态:_______.
5. 审要点 :_______.
介绍传统节日春节
书信
第一人称
一般现在时
介绍春节,
春节(节前,除夕,过节期间)的主要活动
列提纲
Para 2
Para 1
Para 3
Spring
Festival
Spring Festival,
the most important traditional holiday
before the festival:clean our houses, decorate our houses
the eve of the festival: get together,
during the festival: get lucky money,
happy
Dear Jim,
How are you I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China.
Before the festival, we clean our houses. We decorate our houses. On the eve of the festival, family members get together . During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people.We are very happy.
范文赏析
你如何评价这篇范文?
字数不够
内容简单
词汇和语句比较简单
如何提升这篇范文?
写好句
Dear Jim,
How are you I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.
Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China.
提升
(第一段内容较少,可适当添加内容)
There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I’d like to introduce the SpringFestival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It lies on the the first day of the 1st lunar month.
假设你是刘伟,你的美国朋友MIKE 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示,给Mike 写一封e-mail,向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。
写好句
Before the festival, we clean our houses. We decorate our houses. On the eve of the festival, family members get together . During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people.
提升
①
1. 在①句子增加内容,使用到that引导的宾语从句。
we clean our houses,we
think cleaning can sweeps
bad things.
2. 在②句子增加内容,充实句子。
We decorate our houses with
paper cuttings.
②
写好句
Before the festival, We clean our houses. We decorate our houses. On the eve of the festival, family members get together . During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people.
提升
①
1. 在①句子增加要点,充实句子.
On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have a big dinner .
还可以增加:
Then we watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, we set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.
写好句
Before the festival, we clean our houses. We decorate our houses. On the eve of the festival, family members get together . During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people.
提升
①
1. 在①句子增加要点,充实句子.
We visit our relatives and friends. We wish each a happy year and good luck.
写好句
We are very happy.
提升
用感叹句表达情感
How exciting and happy we are on the Spring Festivals!
Dear Jim,
How are you I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I’d like to introduce the SpringFestival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It lies on the the first day of the 1st lunar month.
Before the festival, we clean our houses, we think cleaning can sweeps bad things.We decorate our houses with paper cuttings. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have a big dinner .Then we watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, we set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people.We visit our relatives and friends. We wish each a happy year and good luck.
How exciting and happy we are on the Spring Festivals!
成篇章
万能模板
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
引出介绍的节日
介绍节日的习俗,意义
感受
... is a/an ... festival. It is the most...festival in China. It lies on ... Let me tell you something about it.
People usually have a big dinner together with...
The most traditional food is...
It’s a symbol of....
How happy and exciting people are during...
真题演练
(2019年盘锦改编)
最近,某英语报刊正在举办征文活动,主题是“弘扬中华传统文化,畅谈中国传统佳节——中秋节”,恰巧中秋节是你最喜欢的节日,请你写一篇英语短文,介绍你喜欢中秋节及喜欢的原因。
要点要求如下:
1.最喜欢的传统节日是中秋节;
2.中秋节在每年的农历八月十五;
3.在那天,家人汇聚在一起吃月饼;
4. ......(自主发挥,至少两点)
要求:1.80词左右,书信格式;
2.内容合理,要点齐全;句子及篇章结构正确、连贯;书写规范。
注意:不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。
真题演练
审题
1. 审主题:______.
2. 审体裁:_____.
3. 审人称:_______.
4. 审时态:_______.
5. 审要点 :_____.
Para 2
Para 1
Para 3
Traditional
Festival
列提纲
写好句
1.增要点
2.用宾从
3.用感叹
教师评价
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