私家英语
202208 Z20读后续写（学案）
一、Reading for the basic information
Who I my parents Mr. Slaight the secretary
When from primary school → that year → the appointed day →2 weeks later → began my short performance → the day of my first public appearance
Where Para 1: the station Para 2: I : on live TV ; my parents: at home(watching TV)
What I dreamt to work in TV on day from primary school, and after I was named the most outstanding graduate, I started to work in Toronto, which made me feel like I was in my dream. One day, a new company had just started broadcasting, I tried to get myself a chance to audition.
二、Reading for the detailed information
Para 1: I I had a dream to work in TV from primary school and my parents taught me to be confident. For my dream, as my steady rock, my dad was supportive.
Para 2: I was admitted to the radio and television art program with my father’s help and encouragement. I was named the most outstanding graduate and I felt like I was in my dream.
Para 3: A new company started broadcasting that year and I thought about an idea to know the president, who could help me get a chance to work there.
Para 4: With my heart about pounding out of my boddy, I called up the president of Global Television, and made an appointment with him one day. I felt scared but excited
Para 5: The appointed day came and I told the president that I want to have a chance to audition.
Para 6: I was waiting for the call nervously, and 2 weeks later, his secretary called me for an audition.
Key expressions
1.小学 primary school
2.支持... be supportive of...
3.被录取... be admitted to/into...
4.最优秀的毕业生 the most outstanding graduate
5. 实现我的梦想 live my dream
6.申请... apply for...
7.不妨做，倒不如做... may/might as well do...
8.内心深处 deep down inside
9.在电话里 on the phone
10.使某人措手不及 catch... off guard
11. 结巴 stutter
12.在约定的那一天 on the appointed day
13.又愤怒又好奇 furious and curious
表示紧张的语料积累：
人发抖 shake, shiver
掌流汗 sweating
脸发烫 burn
低头看 hang, lower, fixed
心在口 heart in mouth
怦怦跳 pump, thump, pound
愧难当 guilt, shame, overwhelmed…
话结巴 falter, stumble
练习：
基础表达：I was nervous.
肢体：Trembling nervously, I …
加手部：Trembling nervously, I held my hem(边缘) tightly.
加低头：Trembling nervously, I held my hem tightly and kept my head down
加眼睛：Trembling nervously, I held my hem tightly and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the screen.
加心跳：Trembling nervously, I held my hem tightly and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the screen. Butterflies fluttered in my heart and stomach. I could feel my heart thumping wildly
加手心流汗：Trembling nervously, I held my hem tightly and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the screen. Butterflies fluttered in my heart and stomach. I could feel my heart thumping wildly and my palm sweating.
Use the micro-writing to perfect the situation 巧用微写作
独立主格结构 n./pron.+doing/done/to do/adj./adv./prepositional phrase
Mixed feelings of anxiety and inspiration surging through my whole body（涌向我的全身）, my heart raced violently and I didn’t dare to look at Mr.Slaight.
Heart pounding（猛跳，撞击） and palms sweating（流汗）, I started my performance cautiously.
Tears blurring（使...模糊） my eyes, I clenched my fists, determined to keep pursuing my dream.
Time ticking away（飞速流逝）, everything went naturally and smoothly, making me more confident and relieved.
I stood on the platform, eyes wandering across（四处看） the whole room.
An upsurge of nervousness sweeping over me（席卷了我）, I was glued to the spot and failed to utter something.
Dad’s encouraging words echoing in my mind（回响啊我脑海）, I was firmly convinced that I could make it.
形容词/介词短语作状语 (adj. / prepositional phrase)
Exceedingly delighted and anxious（又开心又紧张）, I was exactly aware that it was a precious opportunity for me to pursue my dream.
I stood there, silent and motionless（不发一言，面无表情）.
Totally at a loss（完全不知所措）, my throat abruptly tightened and my knees felt weak.
现在分词做状语
After what seemed to be centuries, I managed to finish the my performance, breathing a sigh of relief（松了一口气）.
Overwhelmed by merriness, I called my parents, telling them（告诉他们） the good news and dedicated myself to preparing for the approaching public appearance.
When the play ended with my bow of thanks, the room exploded with thunderous applause, indicating that（暗示了） I had really passed the audition.
倒装 (否定副词置句首；So+adj.+ be +S+that-clause ;
Only + 状语从句/ 副词短语 … 于句首 ; n./adj.+as /though+主谓
Never before in my life（我人生中从来没有） had I been so overcome by anxiety.
So thrilled was I that（我是如此激动以至于） I was desperate to tell the good news to my parents instantly.
So fluent and professional was my show that（我的表演是如此流畅且专业以至于） Mr. Slaight couldn’t help standing up and applauding for me.
Only then was I fully aware that（我完全意识到） perseverance and determination meant so much to every dream follower.
Tough as it was（虽然很艰难）, I kept practicing whenever I was available.
Only with determination and perseverance（只有带着决心与坚持） can we fulfill our dream.
无灵主语
The instant the news came, all my tiredness and fatigue（疲倦） gave way to no-edge exhilaration and pride.
Deep frowns gradually climbed on my face（我的眉头渐渐皱了起来）, with shining lights hitting my face, I was driven back to the reality.
The next 15 minutes witnessed（见证了） our amazing performance, everyone immersed in the show and I totally forgetting my nervousness.
Words failed to convey（言语无法表达） my exhilaration and rapture when I ultimately presented myself in front of all the audience.
The unforgettable experience witnessed my growth（这个令人难忘的经历见证了我的成长） and I was aware that through painstaking efforts and persistence there will be promising prospects in store for me.
虚拟语气 (Without/But for..., 主语+would/couldn/should’t have done)
If +主语+ had done，主语 + would/could/might/should+ have + 过去分词 升级句式（省略if, 部分倒装）
Had +主语 +done，主语 + would/could/might/should + have + 过去分词
Without dad’s support and encouragement（要是没有我爸爸的支持和鼓励）, I couldn’t have pursued my dream.
Had it not been for my sticking to my dream, I wouldn't have made it（我不可能成功）.
Hadn’t it been for dad’s support（要不是我爸爸的支持）, I wouldn’t have made such a fabulous performance and realized my dream.(共29张PPT)
My first show on live TV
Z20高三2023届开学考
CONTENTS
文本解读
目录
首句解读
写作思路
技能训练
文本解读
Read for the plots
Part 01
① I had a dream from primary school: to work in television. My parents owned a little grocery store, so we were definitely not fancy people. Thankfully, my dad had raised me to have a lot of confidence. He often said, "You can do anything you want to do." My dad was particularly supportive. He was my steady rock - always there for me.
② With his help and encouragement, I was admitted to the radio and television arts program at Ryerson in Toronto. I really loved the program and worked hard and I was named the most outstanding graduate. I felt like I was already living my dream. I began to think that maybe I could apply for an internship (实习资格) in CBC or CTV.
③ Luckily, Global Television had just started broadcasting in Canada that year. I thought to myself: I’m new and they’re new, so if I'm going to get to know one person at Global, it might as well be the president. I was scared, but I knew deep down inside that this was what I wanted. When I called my dad and told him my plan, he said, “Good, Faye. That's exactly what you should do.”
④ With my heart just about pounding out of my body, I called up the president of Global Television. Suddenly Mr. Slaight was on the phone. “I've heard that your studio facilities are amazing. I could come at eleven o’clock on Monday or eleven o’clock on Sunday for a tour. What would suit you better ”I caught him totally off guard. He stuttered a bit, and then picked a day. When I hung up, I was scared but excited.
⑤ I arrived at the studio on the appointed day. When Mr. Slaight took me around, he looked at me and said, “What do you want ” He sounded furious but curious. “All I want is a chance to audition (试镜). I just want you to know my face. That's all I’m asking.”
⑥ I didn’t know whether I'd ever hear from him again, but two weeks later, his secretary called, “Mr.Slight wants to know if you’d like to come and audition for a new school life show.” I immediately answered, “Sure!”
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance.
Paragraph 2:Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.
“我”从小励志加入广播电视节目工作。尽管家境普通，父母却一向支持我追寻梦想。特别是我的父亲，在我成长过程中给我莫大的鼓励和帮助。“我”以优异的成绩从理想的大学、专业毕业后，我就追寻初心，想要获得一份广播公司的实习资格。那一年，有幸得知环球电视即将开播，我按耐不住激动并忐忑的心，鼓起勇气给环球电视的总裁Mr. Slaight 打了电话，表明了意图并为自己争取到一次试镜机会...
时间跨度大
情绪变化小
重心理描写
轻语言描写
WHO
WHEN
WHERE
WHAT
I, my parents, Mr.Slaight, the secretary
from primary school
that year
the appointed day
2 weeks later
began my short performance
the day of my first public appearance
Para 1 : the station;
Para 2 : I: on live TV; my parents: at home
I dreamt to ___________ one day from primary school, and after I was named _________________________ , I started to work in Toronto, which made me feel like _______________. One day, a new company had just __________________, I tried to get myself a chance to ________.
work in TV
the most outstanding graduate
I was in my dream
started broadcasting
audition
I had a dream from primary school. My dad was particularly supportive.(Para.1)
I was named the most outstanding graduate and I wanted to know the president at Global. (Para.2&3)
I made an appointment with the president.(Para.4)
I got a chance to audition for a new school life show...(Para.5&6)
How did I feel
Para.2: Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.
thankful; lucky
Read for plots
scared&excited
eager
Para 1: When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance.
Key expressions
1.小学 primary school
2.支持... be supportive of...
3.被录取... be admitted to/into...
4.最优秀的毕业生 the most outstanding graduate
5. 实现我的梦想 live my dream
6.申请... apply for...
7.不妨做，倒不如做... may/might as well do...
8.内心深处 deep down inside
9.在电话里 on the phone
10.使某人措手不及 catch... off guard
11. 结巴 stutter
12.在约定的那一天 on the appointed day
13.又愤怒又好奇 furious and curious
Read for the given sentences
Part 02
Para.1 When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance. ___________________________
Para.2 Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching..
承上
How was my my first public appearance
启下
How was my performance ( excellent？ )
My feelings + reaction Mr.Slaight’s
What did I do
启下
What was my parents’ reaction after seeing my appearance
What can we learn
What did I think of
What did I see
What did he/she/they say
feelings + reaction
Possible Versions
Part 03
Possible Versions
I was too nervous and acted badly, but with my parents’ encouragement I never gave up.
I did a good job and was indeed assigned a job to act on a school life show on TV.
When you are nervous, what will you do
人发抖 shake, shiver
掌流汗 sweating
脸发烫 burn
低头看 hang, lower, fixed
心在口 heart in mouth
怦怦跳 pump, thump, pound
愧难当 guilt, shame, overwhelmed…
话结巴 falter, stumble
When you are nervous, what will you do
基础表达：I was nervous.
＋ 肢体
Tremble nervously
＋ 手部
hold my hem tightly/clench my fist
＋ 头部
lower/drop my head
＋ 眼睛
my eyes fixed to the screen
＋ 心跳
Butterflies fluttered in my heart and stomach.
＋ 流汗
my palm sweat
→ 成文
自由发挥（注意多种句式及表达）
Writing skills
Part 04
独立主格结构 n./pron.+doing/done/to do/adj./adv./prepositional phrase
Mixed feelings of anxiety and inspiration surging through my whole body, my heart raced violently and I didn’t dare to look at Mr.Slaight.
Heart pounding and palms sweating, I started my performance cautiously.
Tears blurring my eyes, I clenched my fists, determined to keep pursuing my dream.
Time ticking away, everything went naturally and smoothly, making me more confident and relieved.
I stood on the platform, eyes wandering across the whole room.
An upsurge of nervousness sweeping over me, I was glued to the spot and failed to utter something.
Dad’s encouraging words echoing in my mind, I was firmly convinced that I could make it.
Use the micro-writing to perfect the situation 巧用微写作
Design the plot
Para.1 When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance. __________
形容词/介词短语作状语 (adj. / prepositional phrase)
Exceedingly delighted and anxious, I was exactly aware that it was a precious opportunity for me to pursue my dream.
I stood there, silent and motionless.
Totally at a loss, my throat abruptly tightened and my knees felt weak.
Use the micro-writing to perfect the situation 巧用微写作
Design the plot
现在分词做状语
After what seemed to be centuries, I managed to finish the my performance, breathing a sigh of relief.
Overwhelmed by merriness, I called my parents, telling them the good news and dedicated myself to preparing for the approaching public appearance.
When the play ended with my bow of thanks, the room exploded with thunderous applause, indicating that I had really passed the audition.
Para.1 When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance. __________
倒装 (否定副词置句首；So+adj.+ be +S+that-clause ;
Only + 状语从句/ 副词短语 … 于句首 ; n./adj.+as /though+主谓
Never before in my life had I been so overcome by anxiety.
So thrilled was I that I was desperate to tell the good news to my parents instantly.
So fluent and professional was my show that Mr. Slaight couldn’t help standing up and applauding for me.
Only then was I fully aware that perseverance and determination meant so much to every dream follower.
Tough as it was, I kept practicing whenever I was available.
Only with determination and perseverance can we fulfill our dream.
Use the micro-writing to perfect the situation 巧用微写作
Design the plot
Para.2 Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.. _____
Use the micro-writing to perfect the situation 巧用微写作
Design the plot
无灵主语
The instant the news came, all my tiredness and fatigue gave way to no-edge exhilaration and pride.
Deep frowns gradually climbed on my face, with shining lights hitting my face, I was driven back to the reality.
The next 15 minutes witnessed our amazing performance, everyone immersed in the show and I totally forgetting my nervousness.
Words failed to convey my exhilaration and rapture when I ultimately presented myself in front of all the audience.
The unforgettable experience witnessed my growth and I was aware that through painstaking efforts and persistence there will be promising prospects in store for me.
Para.2 Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.. _____
虚拟语气 (Without/But for..., 主语+would/couldn/should’t have done)
If +主语+ had done，主语 + would/could/might/should+ have + 过去分词 升级句式（省略if, 部分倒装）
Had +主语 +done，主语 + would/could/might/should + have + 过去分词
Without dad’s support and encouragement, I couldn’t have pursued my dream.
Had it not been for my sticking to my dream, I wouldn't have made it.
Hadn’t it been for dad’s support, I wouldn’t have made such a fabulous performance and realized my dream.
Use the micro-writing to perfect the situation 巧用微写作
Design the plot
Para.2 Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.. _____
What was the theme
1. 我明白了只有毅力和努力才能通向成功。
_______________________________________________________________
2. 那时我才意识到，我们永远不能低估坚持和努力的力量。
_________________________________________________________________
_______________________
3. 最重要的是，我明白了，有志者事竟成。
______________________________________________________
4. “正是你的毅力和努力才起了作用!”
_____________________________________________________
5. 这次宝贵经历无疑对我产生了终生的影响，成为我人生中最重要的事件。__________________________________________________________________
It dawned on me that only perseverance and efforts could lead to success.
Only then was I aware that we should never underestimate the power of perseverance and efforts.
Above all, I learnt that nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
“It is your perseverance and effort that make a big difference!”
内容：主题意义 形式：语言句式
方法：首尾呼应
This precious experience undoubtedly had a life-long impact on me, which became the most important event in my life.
What was the theme
Sample writing
Part 05
Para.1 When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance. With boldness, I finished my performance relatively smoothly though palms were sweating. Never in my wildest dream did I imagine that I was indeed assigned the intern job to act on a school life show and my first public appearance on TV was in five days. After sharing the thrilling news with my dad, I received the warmest congratulations and expectations from my family. Picturing my families eagerly waiting for my performance, I worked day and night as busy as a bee for fear that I would make a fool of myself live on TV.
让步状语从句
倒装+宾从
现在分词作状语
虚拟语气
主题协同
语言协同
情感协同
Para.2 Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching. Wearing fancy dress and delicate make up, I was so proud but nervous that my show would be watched by so many audience. My mind suddenly went blank as I was immersed in my thoughts and totally forgot my lines. Deep frowns gradually climbed on my partners’ face, with whose sudden vigorous pull, I was driven back to the reality. I soon came up with a little trick to make up for the embarrassing blank. As the show went on, so concentrated was I that I hardly dared to even blink my eyes. After my debut, I rang my dad with frustration and disappointment, only to reap his trust and encouragement again. It was literally dad’s love that supported me along my way to be an outstanding actor.
无灵主语
时间状语从句
倒装句
强调句
时间状语从句
主题协同
语言协同
情感协同
现在分词作状语
评语
（教师点评 or学生点评）
评语
（教师点评 or学生点评）
评语
（教师点评 or学生点评）
评语
（教师点评 or学生点评）
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202208 Z20读后续写(学案)
一、Reading for the basic information
Who _______________ _______________ _______________ _______________
When _______________ → _______________ → _______________ →_______________ → _______________ → _______________
Where Para 1: _______________ Para 2: I _______________ ; my parents _______________
What I dreamt to ______________ one day from primary school, and after I graduated as __________________ graduate from university, I started to work in Toronto, which made me feel like ________________. One day, a new company had just _____________, I tried to get myself a chance to _____________.
二、Reading for the detailed information
Para 1: I I had a dream to __________________ from primary school and my parents taught me to be ______________. For my dream, as my ____________, my dad was ____________.
Para 2: I __________________ the radio and television art program with my father’s ________ and ____________. I was named ___________________ and I felt like ____________________.
Para 3: A new company ___________ that year and I thought about an idea to know ________, who could help me get a chance to work there.
Para 4: With my heart about _______________________, I called up the president of Global Television, and ___________________ with him one day. I felt ________________.
Para 5: The appointed day came and I told the president that I want to ____________________.
Para 6: I was waiting for the call ____________, and 2 weeks later, ______________ called me for an audition.
Key expressions
小学
支持...
被录取...
最优秀的毕业生
实现我的梦想
申请...
7.不妨做，倒不如做...
8.内心深处
9.在电话里
10.使某人措手不及
11. 结巴
12.在约定的那一天
13.又愤怒又好奇
表示紧张的语料积累：
人发抖
掌流汗
脸发烫
低头看
心在口
怦怦跳
愧难当
话结巴
练习：
基础表达：I was nervous.
肢体： , I …
加手部：Trembling nervously, I .
加低头：Trembling nervously, I held my hem tightly and .
加眼睛：Trembling nervously, I held my hem tightly and kept my head down and .
加心跳：Trembling nervously, I held my hem tightly and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the screen.
加手心流汗：Trembling nervously, I held my hem tightly and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the screen. Butterflies fluttered in my heart and stomach. I could feel my heart thumping wildly and .
Use the micro-writing to perfect the situation 巧用微写作
独立主格结构 n./pron.+doing/done/to do/adj./adv./prepositional phrase
Mixed feelings of anxiety and inspiration (涌向我的全身), my heart raced violently and I didn’t dare to look at Mr.Slaight.
Heart (猛跳，撞击) and palms (流汗), I started my performance cautiously.
Tears (使...模糊) my eyes, I clenched my fists, determined to keep pursuing my dream.
Time (飞速流逝), everything went naturally and smoothly, making me more confident and relieved.
I stood on the platform, eyes (四处看) the whole room.
An upsurge of nervousness (席卷了我), I was glued to the spot and failed to utter something.
Dad’s encouraging words (回响啊我脑海), I was firmly convinced that I could make it.
形容词/介词短语作状语 (adj. / prepositional phrase)
Exceedingly (又开心又紧张), I was exactly aware that it was a precious opportunity for me to pursue my dream.
I stood there, (不发一言，面无表情).
(完全不知所措), my throat abruptly tightened and my knees felt weak.
现在分词做状语
After what seemed to be centuries, I managed to finish the my performance, (松了一口气).
Overwhelmed by merriness, I called my parents, (告诉他们) the good news and dedicated myself to preparing for the approaching public appearance.
When the play ended with my bow of thanks, the room exploded with thunderous applause, (暗示了) I had really passed the audition.
倒装 (否定副词置句首；So+adj.+ be +S+that-clause ;
Only + 状语从句/ 副词短语 … 于句首 ; n./adj.+as /though+主谓
(我人生中从来没有) had I been so overcome by anxiety.
(我是如此激动以至于) I was desperate to tell the good news to my parents instantly.
(我的表演是如此流畅且专业以至于) Mr. Slaight couldn’t help standing up and applauding for me.
Only then (我完全意识到) perseverance and determination meant so much to every dream follower.
(虽然很艰难), I kept practicing whenever I was available.
(只有带着决心与坚持) can we fulfill our dream.
无灵主语
The instant the news came, all my (疲倦) gave way to no-edge exhilaration and pride.
Deep (我的眉头渐渐皱了起来), with shining lights hitting my face, I was driven back to the reality.
The next 15 minutes (见证了) our amazing performance, everyone immersed in the show and I totally forgetting my nervousness.
(言语无法表达) my exhilaration and rapture when I ultimately presented myself in front of all the audience.
(这个令人难忘的经历见证了我的成长) and I was aware that through painstaking efforts and persistence there will be promising prospects in store for me.
虚拟语气 (Without/But for..., 主语+would/couldn/should’t have done)
If +主语+ had done，主语 + would/could/might/should+ have + 过去分词 升级句式(省略if, 部分倒装)
Had +主语 +done，主语 + would/could/might/should + have + 过去分词
(要是没有我爸爸的支持和鼓励), I couldn’t have pursued my dream.
Had it not been for my sticking to my dream, (我不可能成功).
(要不是我爸爸的支持), I wouldn’t have made such a fabulous performance and realized my dream.
