中考英语写作专题 课件 中考英语复习人教版(共68张PPT)

(共68张PPT)
中考英语作文专题
中考作文
考查范围
话题类型
文章类型
写作技巧
评分标准
范文赏析
有话可说
教育类
实践生活类
记叙文
议论文
说明文
五档
五大写作小技巧
不同类型文章
一、考查范围
根据《新课标》和《中考说明》，作文考查的范围基本上与学生日常生活、学习生活息息相关。做到有话可说。例如：
Live a life without much pressure.
How to improve English
美丽校园，健康生活
二、话题类型
1、教育类话题
如：How to improve English
How to deal with the books and
notebooks (2019年陕西中考英语)
2、实践生活类
如: 暑假计划、周末旅行、走亲访友的经历等
（2018年陕西中考英语）
3、热点话题
如：新型冠状病毒、环保
（2020年陕西中考英语)
三、文章类型
1.记叙文: 2018年陕西中考作文
2.说明文：
3.议论文：
2019、2017年陕西中考作文
四、评分标准
第一档 （14-15分） 符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误，大小写及标点运用得当。全文结构严密、完整，语言流畅。
第二档 （10-13分） 符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。有语法或标点错误，但句子较为顺畅，文章思路清晰，逻辑推理正确，结构完整。
第三档 （7-9分） 基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺。语法或标点错误较多。文章结构不严密，但表达疑似清楚。
第四档 （4-6分） 基本符合题意要求，表达不清楚，语法或表达错误过多，词数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑混乱。
第五档 （0-3分） 能传达给读者少许信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
五、写作小技巧
写作小技巧 学生例句 更改例句
1.用两个词而不用一个词。 My family and I had a good trip. My family and I had a good and relaxing trip.
2.适当添加副词或者介词短语。 Students like chatting on the phone. Most students like chatting on the phone after school/in the free time.
3. 同义替换，避免重复。 I like reading books. I love reading.
I enjoy reading.
4.使用关联词表示文章的逻辑。 I should talk with my good friend, and I should listen to music. I fail in the math. I am upset. First, I can talk with my good friend. Second, I can listen to music to relax myself.
I fail in math so I am upset.
5. 学会使用简单的句子， 避免过度重复。 We should improve pronunciation as well by listening to the conversation in English movies. We should improve pronunciation by listening to the conversation from English movies.
学生：老师，我还是不会写作文怎么办啊？
1
记叙文
2
议论文
教育类
记叙文
写前
“4W+1H”: what, who, where, when, how
人称、时态subject, tense
头脑风暴:brainstorming
列提纲: 组织、提取信息
写中
组织信息
添加内容
选取信息
自我检查
写后
检查内容（主要信息）
检查词数
检查语法
拼写、标点、结构等
审题
书写
检查
真题赏析
假如你是李华，上周你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容，写一篇短文。(2018年陕西中考作文)
活动 上午 讲故事，唱歌, ……
中午 煮面(cook noodles), 休息(have a seat), ……
下午 玩游戏， 看动画片(watch cartoons),……
感受 …… 要求 ：1. 参考表格内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，疑似连贯， 书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等）
4. 词数：不少于70个词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home._____________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
who
when
what
where
记叙文
what
looked after my sister Nana
who
my sister Nana and I
when
last week
where
at home
Step 1
写前
审题
记叙文
what
looked after my sister Nana
who
my sister Nana and I
when
last week
where
at home
Step 2
写前
第一人称
一般过去时
审题
记叙文
what
looked after my sister Nana
who
my sister Nana and I
when
last week
where
at home
Step 3
写前
第一人称
一般过去时
read books
happy,tired
clean the room
a sense of responsibility
审题
写前
上午/中午/下午
in the morning/ afternoon/evening
讲故事、唱歌
told stories, sang songs
煮面、休息
玩游戏、看动画片
cooked noodles, had a rest
played games, watched cartoons
brainstorming
read books, cleaned the room
feeling
happy, tired, a sense of responsibility
……
……
Step 4
搜集、提取信息
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
In the morning, I told stories to my sister. We sang songs.
In the afternoon, I cooked noodles for my sister. I had a rest.
In the evening, We played games and watched cartoons.
I was very tired but very happy.
写中
组织信息
Step 1
draft
POINT
9
技巧1和技巧2
添加信息和技巧2
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
In the morning, I told______________________stories to my sister._______ We sang songs_______.
In the afternoon, I cooked noodles for her.__________ __________________________
____________We had a rest____________.
In the evening, We played games, ________, and watched cartoons___________________
I was very tired but really happy,
写中
many interesting and funny
After that
together
She said the noodles were very delicious, so I felt very happy.
After a while,
for about an hour
until my parents came back home.
read books
添加信息
（写作技巧）
Step 2
Because I could look after
my little sister by myself andI had a sense of resposibility.
brainstorming
和添加信息
技巧3，添加信息
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
In the morning, I told many interesting and funny stories to my sister. After that we sang songs , together. In the afternoon, I cooked noodles.She said the noodles were very delicious, so I felt very happy. After a while, we had a rest for about an hour. In the afternoon, we played games, read books and watched cartoons until my parents came back.
I was very tired but really happy, because I could look after my little sister and I had a sense of responsibilty.
写后
检查主要内容
检查词数
检查语法
拼写、标点、结构
Step3
Self-check
最终呈现
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
In the morning, I told many interesting and funny stories to my sister. After that we sang songs , together. In the afternoon, I cooked noodles.She said the noodles were very delicious, so I felt very happy. After a while, we had a rest for about an hour. In the afternoon, we played games, read books and watched cartoons until my parents came back.
I was very tired but really happy, because I could look after my little sister by myself and I had a sense of responsibility.
八年级上册的难度
POINT
15
议论文
写前
“2W+1H”: what, why, how(人称、时态subject, tense)
头脑风暴:brainstorming
列提纲: 搜集、提取信息
写中
组织信息
添加内容
选取信息
自我检查
写后
检查内容（主要信息）
检查词数
检查语法
拼写、标点、结构等
审题
书写
检查
议论文
What
Why
How
(Advice)
简单的解释现象
分析原因（2-3条）
给出意见或建议（2-3条）
写前
Step 1
审题
议论文
What
Why
How
（Advice)
简单的解释现象
分析原因（2-3条）
给出意见或建议（2-3条）
写前
提取topic sentence
教育类话题可从学生、家长、教师、学校角度出发
政府角度依据题目而定
Step 2
审题
enough ideas
examples
议论文
What
Why
How
Advice
简单的解释现象
分析原因（2-3条）
给出意见或建议（2-3条）
写前
Step 3
添加、提取信息
添加、提取信息
审题
真题赏析
假如你是李华，你们学校要开展主题为“live a life without much pressure” 的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要点提示，准备一篇英语演讲稿。
提示：1.中学生常面临的压力有哪些？
2.你的压力是什么？
3.你是如何战胜你的压力的。
要求：1.参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和地名；
4.不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Live a life without much pressure
Good morning , everyone. Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure. ________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
I hope we can live a happy life without much pressure.
What
What
How
第一人称
一般现在时
议论文
What
Why
How
Advice
写前
Nearly person in the world live a life without some pressure.
Step 1
students have too much homework;
don't have enough time to sleep;
....
talk with others;
ask teachers for help;
lower pressure by listening to music;
...
审题
should talk with others;
ask teachers for help;
lower pressure by...
...
小对象：自己
议论文
What
Why
How
Advice
写前
Nearly peson in the world live a life without some pressure.
根据提示语提取topic sentence
举例解释
支持论据
Step 2
students have too much homework;
don't have enough time to sleep;
....
大对象：学生群体
学生
老师
家长
审题
topic sentence
Many students have different pressures in a daily life
议论文
What
Good morning, everyone! Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure.
Why
don’t have enough time to sleep;
too much homework to do;
be not good at math;
How
I can talk with parents ;
We should learn to lower pressure by listening to music;
We'd better ask teachers for help.
写前
Step 3
搜集信息
We can/should/could... We are supposed to...
We'd better... Why don't ....
Let's.... What/How about doing...
Many students have different pressures in a daily life
大对象：学生群体
小对象：自己
详略得当
议论文
写中
Live a life without much pressure
I hope we can live a happy life without much pressure.
组织信息
Good morning, everyone! Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure.
What
For example, some of students don’t have enough time to
sleep.
Other students think that they have too much
homework to do.
As for me, I am not good at math.
In order to deal with this problem, I talk to my parents.
We can lower pressure by listening to music.
We can ask our teachers for help.
What+Why
How
Step 1
draft
Many students have different pressures in a daily life.
What+topic sentence
议论文
写中
添加信息（写作技巧）
Good morning, everyone! Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure.
What
For example, some of students don’t have enough time to
sleep.
Other students think it takes 4 hours to fininsh it.
It is so tiring.
As for me, I am not good at math.
What+Why
Step 2
Many students have different pressures in a daily life.
topic sentence
them
They have to finish homework on time.
具体化
I fail in math again and again.
(They have to spend at least 4 hours
finishing homework after school.)
同义句
具体化
Live a life without much pressure
内容、结构、语法、拼写、标点
Most students think the biggest pressure comes from schoolwork.
Why部分的topic sentence
In order to deal with this problem, I talk to my parents.
I can lower pressure by listening to music.
I can ask our teachers for help.
I hope we can live a happy life without much pressure.
How
议论文
添加信息(写作技巧)
写中
Step 2
(I tell them I am under too much pressure, I hope they can support and understand me.)
(My teacher encourages me a lot and her words help me build up confidence.)
具体化
具体化
内容、结构、语法、拼写、标点
Live a life without much pressure
Good morning, everyone! Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure. Many students have different pressures in a daily life. Most students think that the biggest pressure come from schoolwork.For example, some of them don’t have enough time to sleep, because they have to finish homework on time. Other students think it takes them at least 4 hours after school.It is so tiring. As for me, I am not good at math and I fail in math again and again.In order to deal with this problem, I talk to my parents. I hope they can support and understand me. I also ask my teacher for help. She encourages me a lot and her words help me build up confidence.
议论文
写中
Step 3
写作技巧2
写作技巧4
写作技巧3
写作技巧1
选取信息
(写作技巧)
议论文
写后
Live a life without much pressure
Good morning, everyone! Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure. Many students have different pressures in a daily life. Most students think that the biggest pressure comes from scoolwork.For example, some of them don’t have enough time to sleep, because they have to finish homework on time. Other students think it takes them at least 4 hours after school.It is so tiring. As for me, I am not good at math and I fail in math again and again. In order to deal with this problem, I talk to my parents. I hope they can support and understand me. I also ask my teacher for help. She encourages me a lot and her words help me build up confidence.
Step 4
回答第一个问题：中学生常面临的问题 (What)
回答第二个问题：你的压力是什么？(What+Why)
回答第三个问题：如何战胜压力？(How)
主要内容
检查词数
检查语法
拼写、标点、结构
议论文
最终呈现
Live a life without much pressure
Good morning, everyone! Nearly every person in the world lives a life with some pressure. Many students have different pressures in a daily life. Most students think they that the biggest pressure comes form schoolwork. For example, some of them don’t have enough time to sleep, because they have to finish homework on time. Other students think it takes them at least 4 hours after school.
It is so tiring. As for me, I am not good at math and I fail in math again and again. In order to deal with this problem, I talk to my parents. I hope they can support and understand me. I also ask my teacher for help.She encourages me a lot and her words help me build up confidence.
八年级的难度
POINT
15
1
记叙文
2
说明文
实践活动类
说明文
写前
“2W”: what, why,
人称、时态subject, tense
头脑风暴:brainstorming
列提纲: 搜集、提取信息
写中
组织信息
添加内容
选取信息（根据内容而定）
自我检查
写后
检查内容（主要信息）
检查词数
检查语法
拼写、标点、结构等
审题
书写
检查
说明文
1. 背景信息
2. What's it
What
Why
1.Why is it special
2. Why do you like it
How
根据提示信息扩展内容
Other
...
写前
审题
真题赏析
即将毕业的你，将如何处置初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢？假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给学校英文报纸写一封电子邮件，分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。(2019年陕西省中考英语作文)
put …into different kinds
give…to
have a book sale
要求: 1. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等）
4. 词数: 不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Dear Editor,
My name is Li Hua. I’m going to graduate soon. I’d like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
….
I hope
文章的背景信息
人称: I
时态：一般将来时
说明文
1. 背景信息
2. What's it
What
Why
1.Why is it
special
2. Why do
you like it
How
根据提示信息扩展内容
Other
...
写前
I’d like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
1.useful
2.at low prices
3.study at home on
summer vacation
put …into different kinds
give…to
have a book sale
Step 1
审题
说明文
1. 背景信息
2. What's it
What
Why
1.Why is it
special
2. Why do
you like it
How
根据提示信息扩展内容
Other
写前
I’d like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
1.useful
2.at low prices
3.study at home on
summer vacation
put …into different kinds
give…to
have a book sale
...
Step 2
第一人称
一般将来时
审题
说明文
1. 背景信息
2. What's it
What
Why
1.Why is it
special
2. Why do
you like it
How
根据提示信息扩展内容
Other
写前
I’d like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.
1.useful
2.at low prices
3.study at home on
summer vacation
put …into different kinds
give…to
have a book sale
1.keep the notebooks
for myself
2.bring me a lot of
sweet memories
Step 3
第一人称
一般将来时
审题
写前
搜集、提取信息
1. put books into different kinds
2. give my textbooks to younger sisters
3. have a book sale
4. keep the notebooks for myself
5. bring me a lot of sweet memories
6. …
Firstly,
Secondly,
Next,
Finally
Step 4
写前
依据 呈现句子
将第一条提示语转化为第一条理由
Firstly, I will put books into different kinds.
将第二条提示语转化为第二条理由
Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to
younger sisters.
根据上文添加信息
They can study at home during the coming
summer vacation.
将第三条提示语转化为第三条理由
Thirdly, I have a book sale.
Step 5
根据上文添加信息
Children can buy them at low prices.
添加信息
I want to keep the notebooks for myself.
Because they bring me a lot of sweet memories.
添加信息
The used paper will be taken to the waste center.
搜集、提取信息
写中
Step 1
First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger
sisters. They can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Thirdly, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center.
These are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
组织信息
draft
What's more
In this way
写中
First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger
sisters. They can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Thirdly, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center.
These are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step 2
添加信息（写作小技巧）
Besides
写作小技巧4
写作小技巧2
主要内容
检查词数
检查语法
拼写、标点、结构
写后
Step 3
First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger
sisters.In the way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.What's more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center.
These are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger
sisters.In the way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.What's more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center.
These are my ideas. I hope they can help.
Yours,
Li Hua
最终呈现
八年级的难度
真题赏析
每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以”My favourite_______” 为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。(2017陕西中考英语作文)
提示语：
My favourite
What does it look like
Why do you like it
When do you wear it
...
What is it
made of
cotton
fiber(纤维)
wool(羊毛)
silk
...
要求：
1. 请将短文题目补充完整；
2. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
4. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）
5. 词数：不得少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总数词）
My favourite
What does it look like
Why do you like it
When do you wear it
...
What is it
made of
cotton
fiber(纤维)
wool(羊毛)
silk
...
写前
审题
第一人称
一般现在时
Step 1
写前
Step 2
搜集信息
My favourite T-shirt
What does it look like
It is a T-shirt. It is white.
Why do you like it
special gift,
birthday gift
When do you wear it
parties with friends
It brings me a lot of sweet memories.
It is made of cotton and fiber.
审题
组织信息
My favourite___________
Among all my clothes, I like one of the ______best.
It is white.It is made of cotton and fiber. I like it because this is my birthday gift. It's a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends.
This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.
写中
Step 1
T-shirt
T-shirt
draft
My favourite___________
Among all my clothes, I like one of the ______best.
It is white.It is made of cotton and fiber, so it's very comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. It's a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we two spent together.
This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.
T-shirt
T-shirt
topic sentence
why
when
what is it made of
写中
Step 2
添加信息
My favourite___________
Among all my clothes, I like one of the ______best.
It is white, it is made of cotton and fiber, so it's very comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. It's a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we two spent together.
This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.
T-shirt
T-shirt
topic sentence
why
when
summary
what is it made of
总
分
总
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Step 3
自我检查
My favourite___________
Among all my clothes, I like one of the ______best.
It is white, it is made of cotton and fiber, so it's very comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. It's a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we two spent together.
This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.
T-shirt
T-shirt
最终呈现
八年级的难度
Practice makes perfect!
某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园，健康生活”的征稿活动。亲你根据一下图示内容积极投稿，倡导同学们“爱护校园环境，健康快乐生活”。(2020年陕西中考英语)
Practice
要求：
1. 请将短文题目补充完整；
2. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
4. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）
5. 词数：不得少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总数词）
keep the school clean
do sports
look after yourself
other
Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it Here I've got some ideas to share with you.
第一人称
一般现在时
说明文
topic: what
How
说明文
Step1
What:健康生活
Why:
How: 提示词
人称、时态 subject, tense
头脑风暴:brainstorming
列提纲: 搜集、提取信息
Step2
组织信息
添加内容
选取信息(根据内容而定)
自我检查
Step3
检查内容（主要信息）
检查词数
检查语法
拼写、标点、结构等
审题
书写
检查
写前
important, good
Why
写中
First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, it's good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, we'd better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well each other and keep happy, we'll enjoy a happy and healthy school life.
draft
First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, it's good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, we'd better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well each other and keep happy, we'll enjoy a happy and healthy school life.
写作原技巧4：文章具有逻辑性和连贯性
写作技巧4：简单句变成复合句
if条件句“主将从现”点睛之笔
写中
写后
First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, it's good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, we'd better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well each other and keep happy, we'll enjoy a happy and healthy school life.
主要内容
检查词数
检查语法
拼写、标点、结构
最终呈现
First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, it's good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, we'd better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well each other and keep happy, we'll enjoy a happy and healthy school life.
Summary
Pre-writing
审题
话题类型
教育类
实践活动类
文章类型
记叙文
说明文
议论文
what, who, where,when
what, why
what, why, how
列提纲
提示语
适当添加内容
选取信息
While-writing
人称
时态
组织信息（根据提纲）
添加信息（注意写作技巧）
选取信息（议论文)
自我检查（结构、技巧、拼写等）
Post-writing
检查
检查内容（主要信息）
检查词数
检查语法
检查拼写、标点、结构等
书写
Thank you