Unit 1 Teenage Life
Part Six - Reading for Writing
—建议信
Pre-writing
Learning to write after the model
10 September, 2018①Dear Worried Friend,②You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.③ But spending too much time online④ is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life⑤. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend⑥.All the best⑦,Susan Luo⑧
Word and Expressions
online adj. 在线的，联网的，联机的 adv. 在线
Grammar
书信或邮件的日期
书信或邮件的问候
It + be + (+ for sb.sth.) + to do sth. it 为形式主语，不定式为逻辑主语
单个动名词做主语，视为单数
此结构为v.+ it + adj. +(for sb./sth.) + to do sth.
it 为形式宾语，to do 不定式为逻辑宾语，形容词为宾语补足语。
能用于此结构的动词有think, find, believe, feel, consider等
逻辑宾语除了可以用to do不定式，还可以用that引导的从句
I think it necessary that you should apologize Jenny her at once.
According to a parenting expert, communicating through a screen makes it more difficult for our children ________ (concentrate).
You might find ______ relaxing to bring your small kids to a half-hour Story Time while you sit quietly in a corner with a good book.
In his introduction, he made it clear ______ our credits would be hard-earned.
since 引导_______从句，常用来表示人们已知的事实，不需要强调原因
书信或邮件的结尾
书信或邮件的署名
Preparation for writing—Words and phrases
recommend vt. 建议 unhealthy adj. 不健康的 encourage vt. 鼓励
useful adj. 有用的 advice vt. 忠告，建议 in one’s spare time 闲暇
look forward to 盼望，期望 be worried about 对…… 担心 be attracted to 喜爱
be addicted to 对……上瘾 concentrate on 集中精力于 be good for/do good to 对…有益处
make friends 交朋友 hear from 收到……的来信 enjoy oneself/have fun玩得愉快
While-writing
假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。
要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；友谊需要时间和投入精力(effort)。
Step 1 List the outline of the passage.
Paragraph 1: the purpose of the letter
Paragraph 2: the suggestions that you give
Paragraph 3: the writer’s hope
Step 2List the words, phrases and sentences.
Words and phrases
tip/advice/suggestion n. 建议 situation n. 情况 make friends 交朋友
have trouble/difficulty in doing ... 做……有困难 take one’s advice 接受某人的建议 share happiness and sorrow with... 和……同甘共苦
call for 需要 put one’s heart into 全心全意
Sentences
①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(have trouble in...)
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends.
②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋to do)
The situation is easy to change if you take my advice.
③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(why not) Why not be a friend first, if you want to make friends
④你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldn’t it be a good idea... )
Wouldn’t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend
⑤正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as a saying goes)
Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words and phrases.
15 Sept, 2019
Dear Su Ru,
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
To begin with, why not be a friend if you want to make friends In addition, wouldn’t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend Just as a saying goes a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least, wouldn’t it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点表达
建议信开头常用句式
I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.
我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。
② I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on... 很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。
③ Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you. 这里有帮助你的一些建议。
表达建议常用句式
① First(ly), why not join a club If you do this, you can make friends.
首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。
② Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others. Then/That way, you will feel better.
其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。
③ Third(ly) it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this you will calm yourself down.
第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。
④ Last but not least, you should talk with her first. 最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。
⑤ As far as I am concerned/In my opinion you should help each other. 就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。
建议信结尾常用句式
① I hope you will find these ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
② As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice. 如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。
③ I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll get along well with your classmates.
我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 1 Teenage Life
Part Six - Reading for Writing
—建议信
Pre-writing
Learning to write after the model
10 September, 2018①Dear Worried Friend,②You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.③ But spending too much time online④ is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life⑤. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend⑥.All the best⑦,Susan Luo⑧
Word and Expressions
online adj. 在线的，联网的，联机的 adv. 在线
Grammar
书信或邮件的日期
书信或邮件的问候
It + be + (+ for sb.sth.) + to do sth. it 为形式主语，不定式为逻辑主语
单个动名词做主语，视为单数
此结构为v.+ it + adj. +(for sb./sth.) + to do sth.
it 为形式宾语，to do 不定式为逻辑宾语，形容词为宾语补足语。
能用于此结构的动词有think, find, believe, feel, consider等
逻辑宾语除了可以用to do不定式，还可以用that引导的从句
I think it necessary that you should apologize Jenny her at once.
According to a parenting expert, communicating through a screen makes it more difficult for our children ________ (concentrate). to concentrate
You might find ______ relaxing to bring your small kids to a half-hour Story Time while you sit quietly in a corner with a good book. it
In his introduction, he made it clear ______ our credits would be hard-earned. that
since 引导_______从句，常用来表示人们已知的事实，不需要强调原因。原因
书信或邮件的结尾
书信或邮件的署名
Preparation for writing—Words and phrases
recommend vt. 建议 unhealthy adj. 不健康的 encourage vt. 鼓励
useful adj. 有用的 advice vt. 忠告，建议 in one’s spare time 闲暇
look forward to 盼望，期望 be worried about 对…… 担心 be attracted to 喜爱
be addicted to 对……上瘾 concentrate on 集中精力于 be good for/do good to 对…有益处
make friends 交朋友 hear from 收到……的来信 enjoy oneself/have fun玩得愉快
While-writing
假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。
要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；友谊需要时间和投入精力(effort)。
Step 1 List the outline of the passage.
Paragraph 1: the purpose of the letter
Paragraph 2: the suggestions that you give
Paragraph 3: the writer’s hope
Step 2List the words, phrases and sentences.
Words and phrases
tip/advice/suggestion n. 建议 situation n. 情况 make friends 交朋友
have trouble/difficulty in doing ... 做……有困难 take one’s advice 接受某人的建议 share happiness and sorrow with... 和……同甘共苦
call for 需要 put one’s heart into 全心全意
Sentences
①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(have trouble in...)
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends.
②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋to do)
The situation is easy to change if you take my advice.
③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(why not) Why not be a friend first, if you want to make friends
④你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldn’t it be a good idea... )
Wouldn’t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend
⑤正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as a saying goes)
Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words and phrases.
15 Sept, 2019
Dear Su Ru,
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
To begin with, why not be a friend if you want to make friends In addition, wouldn’t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend Just as a saying goes a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least, wouldn’t it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点表达
建议信开头常用句式
I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.
我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。
② I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on... 很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。
③ Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you. 这里有帮助你的一些建议。
表达建议常用句式
① First(ly), why not join a club If you do this, you can make friends.
首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。
② Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others. Then/That way, you will feel better.
其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。
③ Third(ly) it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this you will calm yourself down.
第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。
④ Last but not least, you should talk with her first. 最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。
⑤ As far as I am concerned/In my opinion you should help each other. 就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。
建议信结尾常用句式
① I hope you will find these ideas useful. 我希望你会发现这些办法有用。
② As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice. 如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。
③ I believe that if you follow my advice, you’ll get along well with your classmates.
我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的
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