54书面表达读后续写精彩结尾
序号
内容
精彩结尾1
画面定格
人物动作的画面定格
精彩结尾2画面定格一一特殊寓意的写景画面
精彩结尾3对话结尾
精彩结尾4主题升华
精彩结尾5
结尾留白
精彩结尾6
首尾呼应
方法技巧
精彩结尾01:画面定格一一人物动作的画面定格
01
They stood there for a moment,side by side,waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their
place in it.Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother.And slowly,
almost reluctantly,she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her
mother's shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge
她们并肩站在那里,等待着节日的浪潮,等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。然后女儿扫了一眼,
立刻注视着她的母亲。慢慢地,几乎是不情愿地,带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲
的肩膀上,轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。
02
His hard work paid off!Holding the soda tin firmly,Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch.
The moment he got the beautiful brooch,he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora's
hand.Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy,she held her son tightly into her
arms,with tears welling up in her eyes
他的努力得到了回报!鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐,冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸
针,就冲进前门,把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出
话来,紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里,眼泪涌了出来。
03
The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face,"No."God felt a bit relieved and said,"Tomorrow you
can become human again."But she shook her head and said,"No,I want to be a butterfly for the
rest of my life..."Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever.On the top of the
mountain,she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.
蝴蝶擦干了脸上的眼泪,说,“不。”上帝松了一口气,说。“明天你就可以变回人类了。”
但她摇了摇头说,“不,我想做一辈子蝴蝶”然后蝴蝶就会永远和她的爱人在一起。在山顶
上,她似乎和他们一起快乐地享受着日出和日落。
读后续写精彩结尾02:画面定格一特殊寓意的写景画面