Unit 2 Travelling Around Book One中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 2 Travelling Around
Part Six - Writing
—有关旅行计划的电子邮件
Pre-writing
Learning to write after the model
Dear Xiao Li, My time here in China is going well. I love my new school and classmates. Over the October holiday, my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army. I’ve heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can’t wait to go. To me, the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable. It’s amazing that there are more than 8, 000 statues, and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s. We’re also planning to visit several other places in Xi’an. My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum, because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”! We’re also going to the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights. We’re taking the train, leaving the day before the October holiday begins①. We’re arriving at 9:30 am and will start sightseeing right away, so I hope we sleep well on the train! I guess that’s all for now! I’ll write again soon and send photos! Do you have any plans for the coming holiday Hope to hear from you soon②. Your friend, Richard
Word and Expressions
going well 进展顺利
Terracotta Army 兵马俑
can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
unbelievable adj. 难以置信的
look forward to (doing) sth. 盼望做某事
be known as = be famous as 作为...而著名
treasure house n. 宝库
sightseeing n. 观光，游览
right away 立刻，马上
Grammar
现在分词（短语）作结果状语
语法含义：表示自然而然或意料之中的结果，前面可以加thus表强调
时态特征：其表示的动作发生在谓语动词所表示的动作之后，因此作结果状语的现在分词用一般式
逻辑主语：既可以是句子的主语，也可以是前面的整个句子。当现在分词的逻辑主语为前面的整个句子时，其作用相当于一个非限制性定语从句
位置：多用于句末，且其前面多用逗号隔开
The hospital has recently obtained获得 new medical equipment, _____ (allow) more patients to be treated.
An ancient temple庙dating back to Northern Qi Dynasty was destroyed摧毁in fire, _______(cause) concerns about the effective有效的protection of cultural remains.
allowing; causing
书信中常用的结束语
Preparation for writing—Words and phrases
take advantage of 利用 as follows 如下 take a tour 游览
set out/off 出发 a seven-day trip 七日游 enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景
leave for 动身去某地 together with 和……一起 around the corner 即将来临
take a bus 乘公共汽车
While-writing
假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封e-mail, 分享你的出行计划。要点：1. 元月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休息一晚。2. 第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。3. 第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。4. 元月24日乘坐高铁返回。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数100左右。
参考词汇：high speed railway高铁 book预订 Disneyland迪士尼乐园 recreation facilities游乐设施 souvenir纪念品 Shanghai Science and Technology Museum上海科技馆 Oriental Pearl Tower东方明珠
Step 1 List the outline of the passage.
Paragraph 1: I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family.
Paragraph 2: What we shall do every day while in Shanghai.
Paragraph 3: How about the plan for your winter holiday
Step 2 List the words, phrases and sentences.
Words and phrases
book vt. 预订 check in 登记 in advance 提前
at the same time 同时 a four-day trip 四天的旅行
Sentences
随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。
As the winter holiday is coming, I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family.
②到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够的精力去参观上海。
Upon arriving in Shanghai, we will check in the hotel for a good rest first, which will be booked online in advance, so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai.
③下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景。
We will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon, from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.
Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words.
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going As the winter holiday is coming, I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family. Here is my plan.
We are leaving Liling for Shanghai by the high speed railway at around 2:00 p.m. on Jan. 21st. Upon arriving in Shanghai, we will check in the hotel for a good rest first, which will be booked online in advance, so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai. On the second day, we are going to the Disneyland to experience all kinds of recreation facilities, and buy some souvenirs at the same time. On the third day, we will visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning. Besides, we will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon, from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai. On Jan. 24th, we will take the high speed railway back to Liling.
How about the plan for your winter holiday I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Ming
亮点表达
旅游计划
① My travel plan is as follows. 我的旅行计划如下。
② Here/Below is my travel plan. 这儿/下面是我的旅行计划。
③ Winter holiday is coming. I have a plan for it. 寒假要来了。对此我有一个计划。
旅游目的地
① This month, I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends, which is supposed to be a seven-day trip. 这个月，我将和我的两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这应该是一次七日游。
② I’m planning to travel to Suzhou, a city called Eastern Venice. 我计划到苏州旅游，它被称作东方威尼斯。
③ The May Day is coming/approaching, and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery.
五一就要到了，我要去上海旅游，看看它美丽的风景。
动身及交通工具
① I’m planning to go there by train and come back by bus. 我计划乘火车去那儿，乘公共汽车回来。
② We will set out on 10th June. 我们将于6月10日出发。中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 2 Travelling Around
Part Six - Writing
—有关旅行计划的电子邮件
Pre-writing
Learning to write after the model
Dear Xiao Li, My time here in China is going well. I love my new school and classmates. Over the October holiday, my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army. I’ve heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can’t wait to go. To me, the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable. It’s amazing that there are more than 8, 000 statues, and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s. We’re also planning to visit several other places in Xi’an. My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum, because my dad loves history and I have heard that this museum is known as a “Chinese treasure house”! We’re also going to the Xi’an City Wall and a few other famous sights. We’re taking the train, leaving the day before the October holiday begins①. We’re arriving at 9:30 am and will start sightseeing right away, so I hope we sleep well on the train! I guess that’s all for now! I’ll write again soon and send photos! Do you have any plans for the coming holiday Hope to hear from you soon②. Your friend, Richard
Word and Expressions
going well 进展顺利
Terracotta Army 兵马俑
can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
unbelievable adj. 难以置信的
look forward to (doing) sth. 盼望做某事
be known as = be famous as 作为...而著名
treasure house n. 宝库
sightseeing n. 观光，游览
right away 立刻，马上
Grammar
现在分词（短语）作结果状语
语法含义：表示自然而然或意料之中的结果，前面可以加thus表强调
时态特征：其表示的动作发生在谓语动词所表示的动作之后，因此作结果状语的现在分词用一般式
逻辑主语：既可以是句子的主语，也可以是前面的整个句子。当现在分词的逻辑主语为前面的整个句子时，其作用相当于一个非限制性定语从句
位置：多用于句末，且其前面多用逗号隔开
The hospital has recently obtained获得 new medical equipment, _____ (allow) more patients to be treated.
An ancient temple庙dating back to Northern Qi Dynasty was destroyed摧毁in fire, _______(cause) concerns about the effective有效的protection of cultural remains.
书信中常用的结束语
Preparation for writing—Words and phrases
take advantage of 利用 as follows 如下 take a tour 游览
set out/off 出发 a seven-day trip 七日游 enjoy the scenery 欣赏风景
leave for 动身去某地 together with 和……一起 around the corner 即将来临
take a bus 乘公共汽车
While-writing
假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封e-mail, 分享你的出行计划。要点：1. 元月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休息一晚。2. 第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。3. 第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。4. 元月24日乘坐高铁返回。
注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数100左右。
参考词汇：high speed railway高铁 book预订 Disneyland迪士尼乐园 recreation facilities游乐设施 souvenir纪念品 Shanghai Science and Technology Museum上海科技馆 Oriental Pearl Tower东方明珠
Step 1 List the outline of the passage.
Paragraph 1: I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family.
Paragraph 2: What we shall do every day while in Shanghai.
Paragraph 3: How about the plan for your winter holiday
Step 2 List the words, phrases and sentences.
Words and phrases
book vt. 预订 check in 登记 in advance 提前
at the same time 同时 a four-day trip 四天的旅行
Sentences
随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。
As the winter holiday is coming, I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family.
②到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够的精力去参观上海。
Upon arriving in Shanghai, we will check in the hotel for a good rest first, which will be booked online in advance, so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai.
③下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景。
We will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon, from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.
Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words.
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going As the winter holiday is coming, I will have a four-day trip to Shanghai with my family. Here is my plan.
We are leaving Liling for Shanghai by the high speed railway at around 2:00 p.m. on Jan. 21st. Upon arriving in Shanghai, we will check in the hotel for a good rest first, which will be booked online in advance, so that we can have enough energy to visit Shanghai. On the second day, we are going to the Disneyland to experience all kinds of recreation facilities, and buy some souvenirs at the same time. On the third day, we will visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning. Besides, we will climb the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon, from which we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai. On Jan. 24th, we will take the high speed railway back to Liling.
How about the plan for your winter holiday I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Ming
亮点表达
旅游计划
① My travel plan is as follows. 我的旅行计划如下。
② Here/Below is my travel plan. 这儿/下面是我的旅行计划。
③ Winter holiday is coming. I have a plan for it. 寒假要来了。对此我有一个计划。
旅游目的地
① This month, I will travel to Changsha and Zhangjiajie with my two friends, which is supposed to be a seven-day trip. 这个月，我将和我的两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这应该是一次七日游。
② I’m planning to travel to Suzhou, a city called Eastern Venice. 我计划到苏州旅游，它被称作东方威尼斯。
③ The May Day is coming/approaching, and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery.
五一就要到了，我要去上海旅游，看看它美丽的风景。
动身及交通工具
① I’m planning to go there by train and come back by bus. 我计划乘火车去那儿，乘公共汽车回来。
② We will set out on 10th June. 我们将于6月10日出发。
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