(共28张PPT)
An Unforgettable Festival you have enjoyed
Aims of our class
To learn more about festivals
To write a passage about your
unforgettable festival.
To use link words and adverbial clause of time to write the passage
Guessing Games
The Spring Festival
The Lantern ['l nt n] Festival
Tomb [tu m] Sweeping Day
The Dragon Boat Festival
The Double Seventh Festival
The Weaver Girl
and
The Cowherd
牛郎 织女
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Double Ninth Festival
festivals
traditional festivals
Chinese
western countries
International festivals
Others
Review some Chinese festivals
festivals
The Double Ninth Festival
The Spring Festival
The Double Seventh Festival
The Lantern Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival
Tomb Sweeping Day
What foreign festivals do you know
festivals
Valentine’s['v l nta n] Day情人节
April Fool’s Day
Christmas
Father’s Day
Mother’s Day
Thanksgiving Day
Halloween[h l 'i n]
Easter [ist ] 复活节
International festivals
New Year's Day
Labor Day
National Day
Women's Day
Children's Day
……
Others
Trees planting Day
Youth Day
Army Day
Birthday
……
Worship gods
Listening
(1)What is the name of the festival We call it ______.
(2)Who did the writer spend it with the _____family
(3)When is the festival It comes after ________________
(4)How did the writer spend it had a big family dinner ,ate some
food. watched New Year TV ,set off fireworks. got some red pockets with money in them.
(5)What do the writer think of it
Chinese New Year
whole
January or February
have a good time
traditional Chinese
Think about the most unforgettable festival you have enjoyed. Talk it with your partner.
What was it
When was it
Who did you spend it with
How did you spend it
Will you remember it for long Why
Writing
写作技巧1 审题(Examining the topic)
Writing tips
文体(style)
时态(tenses)
人称(persons)
要点(main points)
措辞(wording)
narrative(记叙文)
the past simple tense
一般过去时
first person
Beginning
(what)
Bodies
Ending
when who
before---- What to prepare…
on/during---- How to spend
after----What to do after that…
开门见山,引出话题
Different places have…
My unforgettable …
总结归纳
Remember it for long Why
写作技巧2——列提纲,写初稿。开头、主体要点、结尾。
main points
Conclusion words(总结性连接词)
in my opinion,…(以我之见)
in a word; in short(简而言之)
generally speaking(一般来说)
to be honest; (老实说)
to tell the truth; (老实说)
as we know; in a way;(在某种程度上);
写作技巧3——美化文章,成文 。
other link words:
first first of all,… secondly, third(thirdly),…
finally, … however; as a result; therefore;
as soon as; when ; while; since;
until; before; after;
Translate the following sentences , use the guide words.
I said Happy New Year to my family as soon as the New Year's bell rang.
I have got some luck money in the Spring Festival since I was born.
1.新年的钟声一响,我就对家人说:“新年好!”
2.自从我出生,我就开始收新年红包了。
as soon as
_____
since
_____
When I got out of the house on the evening of the Mid-Autumn Day , I saw a beautiful moon in the sky.
Whlie I was watching TV ,someone let of firework.
3.中秋之夜,当我走出家门时,我看见了天空中美丽的月亮。
4.我正在看电视的时候,有人就放烟花了。
when
_____
while
_____
After we watched dragon boat race ,my grandmother told us a story about Qu Yuan.
5.我们看完龙舟,奶奶给我们讲了关于屈原的故事。
after
_____
Finish the passage in five minutes
等级 赋分 要求
五 优 25-22分 要点齐全,内容合理,意义连贯,语言规范,行文变化有致,仅有个别语法错误,书写整齐美观,字数80个单词以上。
四 良 21-18分 要点齐全,内容合理,意义较连贯,语言形式基本正确,有少量语法错误,字数80个单词以上。
三 中 17-13分 要点内容基本符合要求,意义不够连贯,有较多语法错误。
二 差 12-7分 要点遗漏较多,内容空洞,意义不连贯,很多语法错误。
一 很差 6-0分 只有个别要点,内容空洞,或错误连篇,不知所云。
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Discuss with your parners then choose the best passage to show .The other students give the ideas then find out which is the winner.
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They are our traditional festivals.
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