中考满分作文突破之CLEAR原则-备战2023年中考英语书面表达高分攻略（全国通用）(共22张PPT，内嵌音频)

(共22张PPT)
中考满分作文突破
九年级英语学科
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写作的“CLEAR”原则
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“CLEAR”原则:题目2写作指导
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目 录
CONTENTS
迁移练习
“CLEAR”原则
01
什么是“CLEAR”原则？
中考作文评分标准
9-10分 完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。
6-8分 完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
4-5分 部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。
0-3分 与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。
满分作文标准
完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全
句式多样，词汇丰富
语言准确
语意连贯，具有逻辑性
全 Complete
顺 Logical
准 Accurate
富 Rich
书写美观
美 Enjoyable
“CLEAR”原则
一模题目2写作指导
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如何应用“CLEAR”原则写好作文？
2022年海淀一模题目2
“凡事预则立，不预则废。”
某英文网站正在开展主题为“做一个有准备的人”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈是什么经历让你意识到准备的重要性，以及你从中获得的益处。
提示词语：competition, worried, improve, confidence, proud
提示问题：● What experience taught you the importance of preparation
Please describe it.
● What benefits have you got from the experience
Being prepared is important._______________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
一、全 Complete
完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。
审题
立意
正向、积极
符合新时代中学生的身份
？
人称：
做一个有准备的人
第一人称（I)
谈论经历用一般过去时; 获得的益处可用一般现在时/现在完成时
What experience taught you the importance of preparation
Please describe it.
What benefits have you got from the experience
主题：
时态：
要点：
“凡事预则立，不预则废。”
某英文网站正在开展主题为“做一个有准备的人”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈是什么经历让你意识到准备的重要性，以及你从中获得的益处。
提示词语：competition, worried, improve, confidence, proud
提示问题：● What experience taught you the importance of preparation
Please describe it.
● What benefits have you got from the experience
列提纲（确定结构与详略）
I
Experience
Benefits
...
...
...
...
...
一般过去时
一般现在时/现在完成时
人称
提示词语：competition, worried, improve, confidence, proud
什么经历让你意识到准备的重要性？
成功经历——准备充分——成功——认识到准备的重要性
失败经历——准备不充分——不成功——认识到准备的重要性
Experience
成功经历
What
How
Result
geography competition
went to the library
fully prepared
asked teachers for help
won the prize
worried at first
improved
你从中获得的益处
比赛获奖并意识到做准备的重要性。
只有准备充分我们才能克服困难取得成功。
Benefits
继续坚持做准备的好习惯。
won the prize and realized the importance of preparation
preparation can help us overcome the difficulties
continue to be prepared
列提纲（确定结构与详略）
I
Experience
Benefits
一般现在时
一般现在时/现在完成时
人称
Result
geography competition
went to the library
fully prepared
asked teachers for help
won the prize
felt worried at first
improved
won the prize and realized the importance of preparation
preparation can help us overcome the difficulties
continue to be prepared
二、顺 Logical
语意连贯，具有逻辑性。
First of all, To begin with, Firstly, At first, In the First place, ...
In the second place, What’s more, In addition, Next, ...
Finally, At last, Last but not least, ...
On one hand, ... On the other hand, ...
not only..., but also...
三方面
Linking words
两方面
... What’s more, /In addition...
Being prepared is important. Last year, I attended a geography competition. I felt worried at first. But I didn’t give up. I went to the library to read all kinds of geography books. I also asked the teachers for help. Finally, I finished all the tasks with confidence. I won the second place, and my geography grade also improved.
I have got some benefits from my experience. Firstly, I not only won the prize, but also realized the importance of preparation. In addition, I know that preparation can help us overcome the difficulties. So I will continue to make full preparation when I face challenges.
二档文：6-8分
三、准 Accurate
语言准确
语法错误：
拼写、时态、名词单复数、固定搭配、主谓一致等。
四、富 Rich
句式多样，词汇丰富。
句型——短语——词
句子类型 引导词
定语从句 关系代词: who, which, that
关系副词: when, where, why
非限定性定语从句: which
状语从句 时间: when, while, as
原因: because, since
条件: if, unless
目的: so that, in order that
结果: so...that...
让步: although, even if/even though
其他句型 Only...can we...
It’s adj. for sb. to do sth.
There be...
源于积累
Finally, I won the second place, and my geography grade also
improved.
Being prepared is important.
Last year, I attended a geography competition.
I felt worried at first.
But I didn’t give up. I went to the library to
read all kinds of geography books.
I also asked the teachers for help.
Finally, I finished all the tasks with confidence.
I won the second place, and my geography
grade also improved.
Being prepared is important.
I have learned it through my experience in a geography
competition which I participated in last year.
I felt worried at first because I was weak in it.
However, instead of giving up, I buried myself in the library
to go over all kinds of geography books.
I spent hours discussing with teachers in order to solve
my questions.
Therefore, with full preparation, I felt I could face any
challenges confidently when I stood on the stage.
I have got some benefits from my
experience.
Firstly, I not only won the prize, but also
realized the importance of preparation.
I know that preparation can help us
overcome the difficulties.
So I will continue to make full
preparation when I face challenges.
I have got a series of benefits from my experience.
First of all, this experience has a lasting influence
on me. I not only won the prize, but also realized
the importance of preparation.
Besides, I know that only by being fully prepared
can we make difficulties the stepping stone for
success.
So I will certainly continue to make full
preparation when I face challenges in the future.
Being prepared is important. I have learned it through my experience in a geography competition which I participated in last year. I felt worried at first because I was weak in
it. However, instead of giving up, I buried myself in the library to go over all kinds of geography books. I spent hours discussing with teachers in order to solve my questions. Therefore, with full preparation, I felt I could face any challenges confidently when I stood on the stage. Finally, I won the second place, and my geography grade also improved.
I have got a series of benefits from my experience. First of all, this experience has a lasting influence on me. I not only won the prize, but also realized the importance of preparation. Besides, I know that only by being fully prepared can we make difficulties the stepping stone for success. So I will certainly continue to make full preparation when I face challenges in the future.
一档文：9-10分
五、美 Enjoyable
书写美观
整齐、无涂改
题目②
生活有酸甜苦辣，我们的情绪也有喜怒哀乐。合理的情绪管理有助于我们认识自我，并逐步提升。
某英文网站正在开展以“学会管理情绪”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中自己的经历，分享一个你管理情绪的故事，以及你的收获。
提示词语：sad, angry, control, calm, think, lesson
提示问题：● What experience can you share about managing your emotion
● What have you learned from it
应用“CLEAR”原则，完成下面写作题目。
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