2023届高考英语读后续写之描写人在自然环境下的活动（含范文）
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2023届高考英语读后续写之描写人在自然环境下的活动（含范文）
Ⅰ.主题语境词汇
常见与“水”相关的词汇 n. 岸shore 河river 小溪stream 瀑布waterfall 水流current 船boat 郊游outing
v. 钓鱼fish 游泳swim 俯冲dive 抛锚、使固定anchor 用桨划船paddle 乘船游览cruise 流动flow
Ⅱ.主题语境语块
多词语块 习俗语块 短语架构语块 句子组构语块
离岸off the shore 赏心悦目、眼福a treat to eyes 一个神奇的场景a magic scene 冲走sweep away
Ⅲ.基于主题语境的续写实践(已提示语法结构)
1．完成句子
(1)一个夏日，蔡斯和阿比盖尔在停好的船后面游泳，而他们的父亲史蒂文在甲板上钓鱼。(while 引导的时间状语从句)
One summer day, Chase and Abigail were__swimming at the back of the anchored boat while__their__Dad__Steven__was__fishing on deck.
(2)这是一次完美的郊游，深蓝色的天空、浅绿色的河水和五月末温和的阳光混合在一起，创造了一个神奇的场景。(where 引导的定语从句；景色描写)
It was a perfect outing where__the__colors__of__the__deep__blue__sky,__the light green river water and the mild late May sunshine mixed to create a__magic__scene．
(3)岸边静悄悄地坐落着几间小屋。(介词短语置于句首引起的完全倒装)
Off__the__shore__lay__quietly__several__cottages.
(4)一切都很完美，直到一股强大的水流出现了，冲走了阿比盖尔。(until引导的时间状语从句；v. ing作状语)
Everything was perfect until__a__strong__current__emerged,__sweeping away Abigail.
(5)蔡斯立刻意识到这有多危险，便游着追妹妹，(同时)拼命向父亲求救。(v. ing作状语)
Instantly realizing__how__dangerous__it__was,__Chase swam after his sister, screaming__at his father desperately for help.
(6)史蒂文不假思索地跳入水中，用尽全力游向两个孩子。(without短语；with 短语)
Without__thinking__twice,__Steven dived__into__the__water and swam towards the two kids with__all__his__efforts．
(7)听到蔡斯绝望的叫喊声，小屋里的人立即冲出去。(v. ing作状语)
Hearing__Chase's__desperate__cries,__people in the cottage rushed__out immediately.
(8)意识到发生了什么，他们抓起救援设备，跳上船，尽可能快地划桨。(v. ing＋what 引导的宾语从句； 动词的联动；as...as结构)
Realizing__what__had__happened,__they grabbed the rescue equipment, jumped__into the boat and paddled as__fast__as__they__could．
(9)经过仔细彻底的搜查，史蒂文、蔡斯和阿比盖尔被找到并获救。(表抽象意义的名词；被动语态)
After__a__careful__and__thorough__search,__Steven, Chase and Abigail were__found__and__rescued．
(10)是人们的无私和慷慨拯救了他们。 (强调句型)
It__was__the__selflessness__and__generosity of the people that saved them.
2．衔接美文
将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇。
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One possible version：
One summer day, Chase and Abigail were swimming at the back of the anchored boat while their Dad Steven was fishing on deck. It was a perfect outing where the colors of the deep blue sky, the light green river water and the mild late May sunshine mixed to create a magic scene. Off the shore lay quietly several cottages. Everything was perfect until a strong current emerged, sweeping away Abigail. Instantly realizing how dangerous it was, Chase swam after his sister, screaming at his father desperately for help. Without thinking twice, Steven dived into the water and swam towards the two kids with all his efforts. Hearing Chase's desperate cries, people in the cottage rushed out immediately. Realizing what had happened, they grabbed the rescue equipment, jumped into the boat and paddled as fast as they could. Luckily, after a careful and thorough search, Steven, Chase and Abigail were found and rescued. It was the selflessness and generosity of the people that saved them.
Ⅰ.主题语境词汇
常见与“水”相关的词汇 n. 岸shore 河river 小溪stream 瀑布waterfall 水流current 船boat 郊游outing
v. 钓鱼fish 游泳swim 俯冲dive 抛锚、使固定anchor 用桨划船paddle 乘船游览cruise 流动flow
Ⅱ.主题语境语块
多词语块 习俗语块 短语架构语块 句子组构语块
离岸off the shore 赏心悦目、眼福a treat to eyes 一个神奇的场景a magic scene 冲走sweep away
Ⅲ.基于主题语境的续写实践(已提示语法结构)
1．完成句子
(1)一个夏日，蔡斯和阿比盖尔在停好的船后面游泳，而他们的父亲史蒂文在甲板上钓鱼。(while 引导的时间状语从句)
One summer day, Chase and Abigail were__swimming at the back of the anchored boat while__their__Dad__Steven__was__fishing on deck.
(2)这是一次完美的郊游，深蓝色的天空、浅绿色的河水和五月末温和的阳光混合在一起，创造了一个神奇的场景。(where 引导的定语从句；景色描写)
It was a perfect outing where__the__colors__of__the__deep__blue__sky,__the light green river water and the mild late May sunshine mixed to create a__magic__scene．
(3)岸边静悄悄地坐落着几间小屋。(介词短语置于句首引起的完全倒装)
Off__the__shore__lay__quietly__several__cottages.
(4)一切都很完美，直到一股强大的水流出现了，冲走了阿比盖尔。(until引导的时间状语从句；v. ing作状语)
Everything was perfect until__a__strong__current__emerged,__sweeping away Abigail.
(5)蔡斯立刻意识到这有多危险，便游着追妹妹，(同时)拼命向父亲求救。(v. ing作状语)
Instantly realizing__how__dangerous__it__was,__Chase swam after his sister, screaming__at his father desperately for help.
(6)史蒂文不假思索地跳入水中，用尽全力游向两个孩子。(without短语；with 短语)
Without__thinking__twice,__Steven dived__into__the__water and swam towards the two kids with__all__his__efforts．
(7)听到蔡斯绝望的叫喊声，小屋里的人立即冲出去。(v. ing作状语)
Hearing__Chase's__desperate__cries,__people in the cottage rushed__out immediately.
(8)意识到发生了什么，他们抓起救援设备，跳上船，尽可能快地划桨。(v. ing＋what 引导的宾语从句； 动词的联动；as...as结构)
Realizing__what__had__happened,__they grabbed the rescue equipment, jumped__into the boat and paddled as__fast__as__they__could．
(9)经过仔细彻底的搜查，史蒂文、蔡斯和阿比盖尔被找到并获救。(表抽象意义的名词；被动语态)
After__a__careful__and__thorough__search,__Steven, Chase and Abigail were__found__and__rescued．
(10)是人们的无私和慷慨拯救了他们。 (强调句型)
It__was__the__selflessness__and__generosity of the people that saved them.
2．衔接美文
将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇。
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One possible version：
One summer day, Chase and Abigail were swimming at the back of the anchored boat while their Dad Steven was fishing on deck. It was a perfect outing where the colors of the deep blue sky, the light green river water and the mild late May sunshine mixed to create a magic scene. Off the shore lay quietly several cottages. Everything was perfect until a strong current emerged, sweeping away Abigail. Instantly realizing how dangerous it was, Chase swam after his sister, screaming at his father desperately for help. Without thinking twice, Steven dived into the water and swam towards the two kids with all his efforts. Hearing Chase's desperate cries, people in the cottage rushed out immediately. Realizing what had happened, they grabbed the rescue equipment, jumped into the boat and paddled as fast as they could. Luckily, after a careful and thorough search, Steven, Chase and Abigail were found and rescued. It was the selflessness and generosity of the people that saved them.