How to keep healthy作文讲评课(共18张PPT无音视频)

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How to keep healthy
作文讲评课
Let's enjoy
Health is the biggest wealth in life.
Let's say
What is a healthy life like？
Have a healthy body and a healthy mind.
Let's brainstrom
take exercise every day
have a balanced diet;
stay away from junk food
get into good living habits;
have enough sleep;
Don't stay up too late.
stay in good mood;
smile every day
How to keep healthy
a possible version
Health is very important to us. Here are some advice. We should stay away from junk food. We should take exercise every day. And we should keep smile every day. I hope they can help you.
good
spelling & grammar mistakes
similar structures
simple sentences
few linking words
We should
We should
we should
is
smiling
How to write a better composition
1.审
Analyze the information
List the outline
Connect the sentences
Polish the article
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2.列
3.连
4.润
5.查
check the mistakes
当前，新冠肺炎形式严峻，全球已经有80多万人感染，4万多人死亡。通过此次疫情，相信越来越多的人意识到了健康的重要性。请你就how to keep healthy为话题写一篇短文，向English Journey投稿，号召同学健康生活。
看法包括：①健康的重要性 ② 保持健康的建议
注意：1.短文必须包括表格中要点，内容可以适当增加；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数：80-100 词；
4.短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
短文首句：Witnessing(目睹) the serious situation of COVID-19, ...
tense（时态）？
simple present tense
(一般现在时)
1. (审) Analyze the information
2. (列) List an outline
Beginning
the importance of health
ending
best wishes
body
1
3
2
outline
my advice in keeping healthy
4. (润) Polish the article
Advanced words and phrases
(高级词汇短语)
01
Abundant sentence patterns
(丰富的句式)
02
Proper linking words
(恰当的连接词)
03
Health is very important to us.
Strategies(策略)
very
important
Health is of great importance to us.
Health is significant to us.
Abundant sentence patterns (丰富的句式)
陈述不如
倒装妙
01
合二为一
02
巧用谚语
03
Abundant sentence patterns (丰富的句式)
陈述不如倒装妙
01
单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。
单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。
单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。
Eg. Only when we put these advice into practice, can we live a healthier life.
Only in these ways can we live happily and healthily.
Abundant sentence patterns (丰富的句式)
合二为一
02
单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。
单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。
单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。
We are supposed to avoid eating junk food.
It is rich in fat.
junk food
It
It is highly recommended that we can join a sports club.
We can build up our strength there.
there
→It is highly recommended that we can join a sports club where we can build up our strength.
a sports club
→We are supposed to avoid eating junk food which/that is rich in fat.
Abundant sentence patterns (丰富的句式)
巧用谚语
03
单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。
单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。
单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要的阐述您的观点。
As a saying/proverb goes, an apple a day keeps the doctor away. Therefore, it is necessary for you to eat certain fruit.
Early to rise and early to bed makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
Laughter is the best medicine.
Heath is not valued till sickness comes. 有疾病方知健康的可贵。
4. (润) Polish the article
Advanced words and phrases
(高级词汇短语)
01
Abundant sentence patterns
(丰富的句式)
02
Proper linking words
(恰当的连接词)
03
Health is very important to us.
Strategies(策略)
very
important
Health is of great importance to us.
Health is significant to us.
To begin/start with;
what's more/moreover;
last but not least;
thus/therefore
当前，新冠肺炎形式严峻，全球已经有80多万人感染，4万多人死亡。通过此次疫情，相信越来越多的人意识到了健康的重要性。请你就how to keep healthy为话题写一篇短文，向English Journey投稿，号召同学健康生活。
看法包括：①健康的重要性 ② 保持健康的建议
注意：1.短文必须包括表格中要点，内容可以适当增加；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数：80-100 词；
4.短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
短文首句：Witnessing(目睹) the serious situation of COVID-19, ...
tense（时态）？
simple present tense
(一般现在时)
Let's write
Let's evaluate(评价)
Self-checklist
all the key points and rich content
no spelling or grammar mistakes
different sentence patterns（句式）
linking words
good handwriting
What do you think of your writing
excellent( ) good ( ) poor ( ) total star:_______
Homework
Individual work:
Finish your writing and then polish it.
Group work:
Evaluate(评价) others’writings.
Help them improve their writings and learn something wonderful from others’writings.
A better version
Witnessing the serious situation of COVID-19, an increasing number of people have realized the importance of health. Health,undoubtedly, is so vital in our life that we can do nothing well without it. Here I feel like sharing some advice which I hope will be of great benefit with you.
To begin with, it is strongly suggested that you should have a balanced diet. For example, avoid eating junk food which is rich in fat. Second, you are required to take physical activities regularly. Joining a sports club where you can exercise with others and build up your strength may be a wise choice. Moreover, to keep healthy, it is a must for you to get rid of the bad living habits such as staying up too late. Last but not least, just as a proverb goes, laughter is the best medicine. Thus, keep smiling every day and life will smile back.
To sum up, actions speak louder than words. Only when each of you puts what I said above into practice, can we live a healthier life. Let's move on right now.