人教版（2019）必修第三册 Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations Reading for writing 课件 (36页PPT)
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Unit 1 Festivals and
celebrations
Write about your
festival experience
Unit 1 Reading for Writing
inner
autonomous
region
represent
wrestling
wrestle
wrestler
archery
set off
adj. 内部的；里面的；内心的
adj. 自治的；有自治权的
n. 地区；区域；地带
vt. 象征；代表；相当于
n. 摔跤运动
vi.&vt. 摔跤；奋力对付
n. 摔跤运动员
n. 射箭术；射箭运动
出发；动身；启程
fancy
robe
eagle
grace
absolutely
moment
tent
pot
adj. 花哨的；精致的；昂贵的
vt. 想要；倾慕；自认为是
n. 袍服；礼袍
n. 雕
n. 优美；优雅；高雅
adv. 绝对地；完全地
n. 片刻；瞬间
n. 帐篷
n. 罐；壶；锅
Read the diary entry and answer the questions.
1. What does “Naadam” mean Which
events does it include
2. What Naadam Festival customs did you
learn about
3. What in your opinion is the most
impressive thing about the festival
4. What else would you like to know about
the festival and the writer's experience
1. What does “Naadam” mean Which events does it include
Naadam means “games” in Mongolian,and it includes horse racing, wrestling, and archery.
horse racing
archery
wrestling
2. What Naadam Festival customs did you
learn about
Wrestling and horse racing.
3. What in your opinion is the most impressive thing about the festival
Possible answer:
The horse racing is the most impressive, as it involved little children.
4. What else would you like to know about the festival and the writer's experience
Possible answer:
The writer did not talk about food or music, but surely they should have been interesting parts of the festival.
Analysing
Study the organisation and language features.
Read the diary entry again and
analyse its structure.
State the topic (e.g. where, when and with whom you celebrated the festival, and also your main feelings).
Opening Paragraph
First Body Paragraph
Describe the start of the festival and the surroundings.
Second Body Paragraph
Describe in detail the festival activities.
Third Body Paragraph
Describe in detail the festival activities.
Closing Paragraph
Give a brief summary
of the experience.
MY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCE 我的那达慕大会奇妙经历
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. The festival falls on the fourth day of the six month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for three days. Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wresting, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch!
今年，我第一次体验了中国内蒙古自治区的那达慕大会。该节日于每年农历六月初四开始的，通常为期3天。“那达慕”在蒙古语中的意思是“游戏”，主要表现为三大赛事：赛马、摔跤和射箭，每项运动都动人心魄！
represent vt.代表；表现；描绘；象征 representation n. 代表；表现
※represent sb. as/to be...宣称某人为……
represent...as...把……描绘成……
represent oneself as/to be...自称是……
represent sth. to sb. 向某人说明某事；向某人传达某事
※representative adj.代表性的 n.代表，代理人
1.Naadam means “games” in Mongolian，and it is represented by three events：horse racing，wrestling，and archery，which are all so exciting to watch！“那达慕”在蒙古语中意为“游戏”，主要表现为三大赛事：赛马、摔跤和射箭，每项运动都动人心魄！
(1)They represent the promise of spring and a renewal of life.(2020·全国Ⅱ)
它们象征着春天的到来和生命的复苏。
(2)She one of the most typical mothers in the world.
她把自己描绘成世界上最典型的母亲之一。
(3)Let me ________ my ideas you in an easy way in such an awkward atmosphere.
在如此尴尬的氛围下，让我用一种简单的方式向你说明我的想法。
注意：represent作“向……描述/表达”讲时，不能直接跟人作宾语，常用结构为represent sth. to sb. 或represent to sb. sth. 。有类似用法的单词还有explain，suggest，announce，guarantee等。
represents herself as/to be
to
represent
On the first day, I set off to the games early with my friend Burin. I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes. Some others were chatting or taking photographs. Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival, just as their ancestors had done for centuries.(那达慕大会的)第一天，我和好友布林早早出发来到了会场。我看到很多人穿着华丽的蒙古袍。有的在喂马，有的在练习射箭，其他人则在聊天或拍照。布林告诉我说，与他们数百年前的祖先一样，蒙古人每年都会从四面八方赶来参加这一节日。
set off 出发；动身；使爆炸；引起
[一词多义] 写出下列句子中set off的汉语意思
(1)Be careful that you don’t set the fireworks off by mistake. _______
(2)We set off at dawn so that we could get to the coast before lunch time.
___________
(3)That strike set off a series of strikes throughout the country. _____
2. On the first day，I set off to the games early with my friend Burin.
(那达慕大会的)第一天，我和好友布林早早出发来到了会场。
使爆炸
出发；动身
引起
set up 建立；创立 set aside 放在一边；留出；不理会
set down写下；记下
set out (to do) 出发；开始(做)
set about doing 开始做
(4)The moment she arrived home，she set out (clean) the house.
她一回到家就开始打扫房间。
(5)The child asked his father how he should set about (do) the homework.
这个孩子问爸爸他该怎样开始做家庭作业。
to clean
doing
用适当的介词或副词填空。
(1)We are happy to inform you that the Students’ Union has decided to
set _____a cycling club.
(2)We can set ______fireworks to celebrate the Lunar New Year together.
(3)The new government must set _______finding solutions to the country’s
economic problems.
(4)It’s wiser to set _____some time to accompany parents or do something
more meaningful.
up
off
about
aside
fancy adj.精致的；昂贵的；花哨的 vt.想要；倾慕；自认为是；想象
n.想象；想要；爱好
[一词多义] 写出下列句子中fancy的汉语意思
(1)She has a fancy for brown shoes from childhood. _____
(2)Can you fancy yourself on the moon in the future？ _____
(3)He sells poor goods but charges fancy prices. _______
3.I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes.我看到很多人穿着华丽的蒙古袍。
爱好
想象
昂贵的
※fancy doing sth. 喜欢做某事；真想不到做某事
fancy that...好像……
※have a fancy for sth. 喜欢某物
(4)What do you fancy doing，anyway
你到底想干什么？
(5)Do you fancy (go) out to roast turkey with me this weekend
周末你想不想和我一起外出烤火鸡？
(6)She she heard footsteps behind her when walking alone in the street.
当她独自走在街上时，她好像听到身后有脚步声。
going
fancied that
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began. Mongolian wrestling is different from the wrestling in the Olympic Games. There are no rounds, and wrestlers are not separated by weight. The wrestlers loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground. After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles. I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.在开幕式和几项精彩的表演之后，摔跤比赛开始了。蒙古式摔跤与奥运会的摔跤比赛有所不同：比赛不分回合，摔跤手不分体重。如果摔跤手膝盖以上任何部位着地即被判输。几首歌唱毕，选手们开始在草地上翩翩起舞，他们]挥动着双臂，宛如雄鹰。这刚与柔的展示深深地感动了我。
4. After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles. 唱完一些歌曲, 参赛者在绿色的田地上跳舞, 在空中挥舞着双臂, 好像他们是鹰似的。
as if 从句用虚拟语气
当说话人认为as if引导的从句所述的是不真实的或极少有可能发生或存在的情况时, as if引导从句使用虚拟语气。
如果从句表示与现在事实相反, 谓语动词用一般过去时，be动词都用were.
You look as if you didn’t care.
你看上去好像并不在乎。
(2)I have bought a robot who looks as if he _______(be)a real person.
were
I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favourite part. However, I was surprised to see that the riders were boys and girls! I heard it is because children are lighter and the horses can run faster and farther. At first, I was a little worried about the children’s safety, but Burin said, “Don’t worry. They’ve been riding horses all their lives. They’ll be just fine.” That was the moment I started to understand why people say “Horses are at the heart of Mongolian culture”. ...
射箭同样令我叹为观止，但赛马才是我最喜爱的部分。然而，看到赛马选手们都是男孩和女孩，我十分惊讶！听说这是因为儿童体重更轻，马儿才能跑得更快、更远。刚开始的时候，我有点担心这些孩子的安全，但布林却说：“别担心，他们是在马背上长大的，不会有事的。”我顿时明白了为什么人们说“马是蒙古文化的核心”了。……
5.I heard it is because children are lighter and the horses can run faster and farther.我听说那是因为孩子们比较轻，马儿才能跑得更快、更远。
句中it is because...意为“是因为……”，because在句中引导表语从句。类似的句式有：
That/This is because...那/这是因为……
It/That/This is why...这/那就是……的原因；这/那就是为什么……
The reason for(doing) sth. /why-clause...is that...(做)某事的原因是……
注意：It/That/This is why...后面接结果；It/That/This is because...后面接原因。
(1)He missed the first bus and that was because he got up late this morning.
他没能赶上早班车，那是因为他今天早上起晚了。
(2)You have made great progress in English.This is you have improved your studying methods.
你在英语方面取得了很大的进步，这是因为你改进了学习方法。
(3)I’ve got a cold；that is I wouldn’t like to have a meal.
我感冒了，那就是我不想吃饭的原因。
(4) she was fired she was too lazy.
她被开除的原因是她太懒了。
because
why
The reason why
was that
I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent and eat hot pot. I can’t wait!我现在已经回到家了，感到十分疲倦，但能和我的朋友一起庆祝那达慕，再累也是值得的。他邀请我冬天时再去住传统的蒙古包，吃火锅。我已经迫不及待了！
【句式解构】
本句是并列句, but连接前后两个句子。前半句中feeling really tired作伴随状语; 后半句中celebrating Naadam with my friend作主语, be worth it表示“值得的”, 是固定搭配。
6. I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. 现在我终于回到家了, 感觉很疲惫, 但是和我的朋友一起庆祝那达慕确实值得。
Read the sentence patterns below and use them to rewrite the opening sentence of the article.
P9 2
This was my first time spending … and it
was an enjoyable and exciting experience
for me.
I'll never forget … because …
I'll always … because ….
Possible answer:
This was my first time spending my holiday in China's
Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region to celebrate the
Naadam Festival, and it was an enjoyable and exciting
experience for me. /
I'll never forget the Naadam Festival in China's Inner
Mongolia Autonomous Region because it was an
enjoyable and exciting experience for me./
I'll always remember the Naadam Festival in China's
Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region because it was an
enjoyable and exciting experience for me.
Underline the sentences that describe the writer's feelings and emotions.
P9 2
Writing
Use what you have learnt to write about a festival or a celebration you have experienced recently.
Make notes of your ideas in the table and then
write your draft.
Outline
The name of the festival/celebration: ______________
Main idea of each paragraph Details Feelings
1 The topic and my feeling
2 How I prepared for the festival/celebration
3 The festival/celebration activities
4 A summary of my festival /celebration experience
P9 3
Exchange drafts with a partner. Use the checklist
to give feedback on your partner's draft.
P9 3
Is the writing well-organised
Is there an opening sentence in the first paragrpah
Does each paragraph include the necessary details
Does the writer describe his/her feelings and
emotions
Does the writer use the -ing form correctly in the
writing
Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation
errors
Get your draft back and revise it.
Put up your writing in your classroom or read it to the class.
P9 4
Sample Writing
July 4, 2018
Today was my first fourth of July celebration, and I'll always remember it because it was so wonderful. The fourth of July is Independence Day in the US-the anniversary of the day the United States became its own country in 1776.
I began the day by packing my swimming suit and a towel. Then I went with my host family to a supermarket to load up on food and drinks. After that we were off to a friend's ranch out in the country for a barbecue and pool party.
It was all so amazing! While the adults cooked food on the barbecue, we played in the pool. Then we all ate and ate until we were completely stuffed. Our friends had some
old ice cream churners, so after lunch we all took turns churning homemade ice cream. Since the temperature outside was around 40 degrees, it seemed like the ice cream took forever! I would turn the handle on the churn until my arm was sore, and then someone else would take over. But it was all worth it, because when we were finished it was the most fantastic ice cream I have ever eaten! Then, someone asked me if I would like to try horseback riding. I was afraid at first, but they gave me a very gentle horse. It was so peaceful to ride the horse through the fields and forest. Finally, when it grew dark, we had a thrilling fireworks display.
Now I'm back home with my host family. Though I'm tired, I think this had to be the most exciting day of my life! I can't wait for next year!
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Unit 1 Festivals and
celebrations
Write about your
festival experience
Unit 1 Reading for Writing
inner
autonomous
region
represent
wrestling
wrestle
wrestler
archery
set off
adj. 内部的；里面的；内心的
adj. 自治的；有自治权的
n. 地区；区域；地带
vt. 象征；代表；相当于
n. 摔跤运动
vi.&vt. 摔跤；奋力对付
n. 摔跤运动员
n. 射箭术；射箭运动
出发；动身；启程
fancy
robe
eagle
grace
absolutely
moment
tent
pot
adj. 花哨的；精致的；昂贵的
vt. 想要；倾慕；自认为是
n. 袍服；礼袍
n. 雕
n. 优美；优雅；高雅
adv. 绝对地；完全地
n. 片刻；瞬间
n. 帐篷
n. 罐；壶；锅
Read the diary entry and answer the questions.
1. What does “Naadam” mean Which
events does it include
2. What Naadam Festival customs did you
learn about
3. What in your opinion is the most
impressive thing about the festival
4. What else would you like to know about
the festival and the writer's experience
1. What does “Naadam” mean Which events does it include
Naadam means “games” in Mongolian,and it includes horse racing, wrestling, and archery.
horse racing
archery
wrestling
2. What Naadam Festival customs did you
learn about
Wrestling and horse racing.
3. What in your opinion is the most impressive thing about the festival
Possible answer:
The horse racing is the most impressive, as it involved little children.
4. What else would you like to know about the festival and the writer's experience
Possible answer:
The writer did not talk about food or music, but surely they should have been interesting parts of the festival.
Analysing
Study the organisation and language features.
Read the diary entry again and
analyse its structure.
State the topic (e.g. where, when and with whom you celebrated the festival, and also your main feelings).
Opening Paragraph
First Body Paragraph
Describe the start of the festival and the surroundings.
Second Body Paragraph
Describe in detail the festival activities.
Third Body Paragraph
Describe in detail the festival activities.
Closing Paragraph
Give a brief summary
of the experience.
MY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCE 我的那达慕大会奇妙经历
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. The festival falls on the fourth day of the six month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for three days. Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wresting, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch!
今年，我第一次体验了中国内蒙古自治区的那达慕大会。该节日于每年农历六月初四开始的，通常为期3天。“那达慕”在蒙古语中的意思是“游戏”，主要表现为三大赛事：赛马、摔跤和射箭，每项运动都动人心魄！
represent vt.代表；表现；描绘；象征 representation n. 代表；表现
※represent sb. as/to be...宣称某人为……
represent...as...把……描绘成……
represent oneself as/to be...自称是……
represent sth. to sb. 向某人说明某事；向某人传达某事
※representative adj.代表性的 n.代表，代理人
1.Naadam means “games” in Mongolian，and it is represented by three events：horse racing，wrestling，and archery，which are all so exciting to watch！“那达慕”在蒙古语中意为“游戏”，主要表现为三大赛事：赛马、摔跤和射箭，每项运动都动人心魄！
(1)They represent the promise of spring and a renewal of life.(2020·全国Ⅱ)
它们象征着春天的到来和生命的复苏。
(2)She one of the most typical mothers in the world.
她把自己描绘成世界上最典型的母亲之一。
(3)Let me ________ my ideas you in an easy way in such an awkward atmosphere.
在如此尴尬的氛围下，让我用一种简单的方式向你说明我的想法。
注意：represent作“向……描述/表达”讲时，不能直接跟人作宾语，常用结构为represent sth. to sb. 或represent to sb. sth. 。有类似用法的单词还有explain，suggest，announce，guarantee等。
represents herself as/to be
to
represent
On the first day, I set off to the games early with my friend Burin. I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes. Some others were chatting or taking photographs. Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival, just as their ancestors had done for centuries.(那达慕大会的)第一天，我和好友布林早早出发来到了会场。我看到很多人穿着华丽的蒙古袍。有的在喂马，有的在练习射箭，其他人则在聊天或拍照。布林告诉我说，与他们数百年前的祖先一样，蒙古人每年都会从四面八方赶来参加这一节日。
set off 出发；动身；使爆炸；引起
[一词多义] 写出下列句子中set off的汉语意思
(1)Be careful that you don’t set the fireworks off by mistake. _______
(2)We set off at dawn so that we could get to the coast before lunch time.
___________
(3)That strike set off a series of strikes throughout the country. _____
2. On the first day，I set off to the games early with my friend Burin.
(那达慕大会的)第一天，我和好友布林早早出发来到了会场。
使爆炸
出发；动身
引起
set up 建立；创立 set aside 放在一边；留出；不理会
set down写下；记下
set out (to do) 出发；开始(做)
set about doing 开始做
(4)The moment she arrived home，she set out (clean) the house.
她一回到家就开始打扫房间。
(5)The child asked his father how he should set about (do) the homework.
这个孩子问爸爸他该怎样开始做家庭作业。
to clean
doing
用适当的介词或副词填空。
(1)We are happy to inform you that the Students’ Union has decided to
set _____a cycling club.
(2)We can set ______fireworks to celebrate the Lunar New Year together.
(3)The new government must set _______finding solutions to the country’s
economic problems.
(4)It’s wiser to set _____some time to accompany parents or do something
more meaningful.
up
off
about
aside
fancy adj.精致的；昂贵的；花哨的 vt.想要；倾慕；自认为是；想象
n.想象；想要；爱好
[一词多义] 写出下列句子中fancy的汉语意思
(1)She has a fancy for brown shoes from childhood. _____
(2)Can you fancy yourself on the moon in the future？ _____
(3)He sells poor goods but charges fancy prices. _______
3.I saw a lot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes.我看到很多人穿着华丽的蒙古袍。
爱好
想象
昂贵的
※fancy doing sth. 喜欢做某事；真想不到做某事
fancy that...好像……
※have a fancy for sth. 喜欢某物
(4)What do you fancy doing，anyway
你到底想干什么？
(5)Do you fancy (go) out to roast turkey with me this weekend
周末你想不想和我一起外出烤火鸡？
(6)She she heard footsteps behind her when walking alone in the street.
当她独自走在街上时，她好像听到身后有脚步声。
going
fancied that
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began. Mongolian wrestling is different from the wrestling in the Olympic Games. There are no rounds, and wrestlers are not separated by weight. The wrestlers loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground. After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles. I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.在开幕式和几项精彩的表演之后，摔跤比赛开始了。蒙古式摔跤与奥运会的摔跤比赛有所不同：比赛不分回合，摔跤手不分体重。如果摔跤手膝盖以上任何部位着地即被判输。几首歌唱毕，选手们开始在草地上翩翩起舞，他们]挥动着双臂，宛如雄鹰。这刚与柔的展示深深地感动了我。
4. After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles. 唱完一些歌曲, 参赛者在绿色的田地上跳舞, 在空中挥舞着双臂, 好像他们是鹰似的。
as if 从句用虚拟语气
当说话人认为as if引导的从句所述的是不真实的或极少有可能发生或存在的情况时, as if引导从句使用虚拟语气。
如果从句表示与现在事实相反, 谓语动词用一般过去时，be动词都用were.
You look as if you didn’t care.
你看上去好像并不在乎。
(2)I have bought a robot who looks as if he _______(be)a real person.
were
I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favourite part. However, I was surprised to see that the riders were boys and girls! I heard it is because children are lighter and the horses can run faster and farther. At first, I was a little worried about the children’s safety, but Burin said, “Don’t worry. They’ve been riding horses all their lives. They’ll be just fine.” That was the moment I started to understand why people say “Horses are at the heart of Mongolian culture”. ...
射箭同样令我叹为观止，但赛马才是我最喜爱的部分。然而，看到赛马选手们都是男孩和女孩，我十分惊讶！听说这是因为儿童体重更轻，马儿才能跑得更快、更远。刚开始的时候，我有点担心这些孩子的安全，但布林却说：“别担心，他们是在马背上长大的，不会有事的。”我顿时明白了为什么人们说“马是蒙古文化的核心”了。……
5.I heard it is because children are lighter and the horses can run faster and farther.我听说那是因为孩子们比较轻，马儿才能跑得更快、更远。
句中it is because...意为“是因为……”，because在句中引导表语从句。类似的句式有：
That/This is because...那/这是因为……
It/That/This is why...这/那就是……的原因；这/那就是为什么……
The reason for(doing) sth. /why-clause...is that...(做)某事的原因是……
注意：It/That/This is why...后面接结果；It/That/This is because...后面接原因。
(1)He missed the first bus and that was because he got up late this morning.
他没能赶上早班车，那是因为他今天早上起晚了。
(2)You have made great progress in English.This is you have improved your studying methods.
你在英语方面取得了很大的进步，这是因为你改进了学习方法。
(3)I’ve got a cold；that is I wouldn’t like to have a meal.
我感冒了，那就是我不想吃饭的原因。
(4) she was fired she was too lazy.
她被开除的原因是她太懒了。
because
why
The reason why
was that
I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent and eat hot pot. I can’t wait!我现在已经回到家了，感到十分疲倦，但能和我的朋友一起庆祝那达慕，再累也是值得的。他邀请我冬天时再去住传统的蒙古包，吃火锅。我已经迫不及待了！
【句式解构】
本句是并列句, but连接前后两个句子。前半句中feeling really tired作伴随状语; 后半句中celebrating Naadam with my friend作主语, be worth it表示“值得的”, 是固定搭配。
6. I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. 现在我终于回到家了, 感觉很疲惫, 但是和我的朋友一起庆祝那达慕确实值得。
Read the sentence patterns below and use them to rewrite the opening sentence of the article.
P9 2
This was my first time spending … and it
was an enjoyable and exciting experience
for me.
I'll never forget … because …
I'll always … because ….
Possible answer:
This was my first time spending my holiday in China's
Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region to celebrate the
Naadam Festival, and it was an enjoyable and exciting
experience for me. /
I'll never forget the Naadam Festival in China's Inner
Mongolia Autonomous Region because it was an
enjoyable and exciting experience for me./
I'll always remember the Naadam Festival in China's
Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region because it was an
enjoyable and exciting experience for me.
Underline the sentences that describe the writer's feelings and emotions.
P9 2
Writing
Use what you have learnt to write about a festival or a celebration you have experienced recently.
Make notes of your ideas in the table and then
write your draft.
Outline
The name of the festival/celebration: ______________
Main idea of each paragraph Details Feelings
1 The topic and my feeling
2 How I prepared for the festival/celebration
3 The festival/celebration activities
4 A summary of my festival /celebration experience
P9 3
Exchange drafts with a partner. Use the checklist
to give feedback on your partner's draft.
P9 3
Is the writing well-organised
Is there an opening sentence in the first paragrpah
Does each paragraph include the necessary details
Does the writer describe his/her feelings and
emotions
Does the writer use the -ing form correctly in the
writing
Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation
errors
Get your draft back and revise it.
Put up your writing in your classroom or read it to the class.
P9 4
Sample Writing
July 4, 2018
Today was my first fourth of July celebration, and I'll always remember it because it was so wonderful. The fourth of July is Independence Day in the US-the anniversary of the day the United States became its own country in 1776.
I began the day by packing my swimming suit and a towel. Then I went with my host family to a supermarket to load up on food and drinks. After that we were off to a friend's ranch out in the country for a barbecue and pool party.
It was all so amazing! While the adults cooked food on the barbecue, we played in the pool. Then we all ate and ate until we were completely stuffed. Our friends had some
old ice cream churners, so after lunch we all took turns churning homemade ice cream. Since the temperature outside was around 40 degrees, it seemed like the ice cream took forever! I would turn the handle on the churn until my arm was sore, and then someone else would take over. But it was all worth it, because when we were finished it was the most fantastic ice cream I have ever eaten! Then, someone asked me if I would like to try horseback riding. I was afraid at first, but they gave me a very gentle horse. It was so peaceful to ride the horse through the fields and forest. Finally, when it grew dark, we had a thrilling fireworks display.
Now I'm back home with my host family. Though I'm tired, I think this had to be the most exciting day of my life! I can't wait for next year!
本课结束