health and food 写作课件

课件13张PPT。Listen to the rhythm of the falling rain
Telling me just what a fool I’ve been
I wish that it would go and let me cry in the rain
And let me be alone again
The only girl I care about has gone away
Looking for a brand new start
But little does she know that when she left that day
Along with her she took my heart
Rain please tell me now does that seem fair
For her to steal my heart away when she doesn’t care
I can’t love another when my heart’s somewhere far away
Rain won’t you tell her that I love her so
Please ask the sun to set her heart a glow
Rain in her heart and let the love me new start to grow
Oh listen to the falling rain Pi-Le-Pa-la Pi-Le-Pa-LaRhythm of The Rain英语话题与书面表达专项训练
——Health and fitnessBrainstorminghealth and fitnesswatch your dietKeeping a healthy diet is important.A lot of vegetables can help you keep healthy.Let’s talk and writetake exerciseYou need to take exercise at least five times a week.You can take part in fitness class.Let’s talk and writerelax oneselfYou can relax yourself by listening to music.If you are worried about something, talk to your parents or your teachers.Let’s talk and write Keeping a healthy diet is important. You should have more healthy food and drink, such as fruits, vegetables and milk. There is an old saying, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”, so fruit is good for health. Besides, don’t eat too much junk food, like potato chips and candy. Because they put on your weight. Some burnt food can cause cancer, please stay away from it.对主题句进一步说明，阐述理由主题句（注意：关联词、从句、格言…）Let’s write a paragraph about watching your diet常见表示逻辑关系的过渡词语有：1.表并列:both…and, not only…,but also, as well as…
2.表转折:but, however, yet, …
3.表结果:so/such…that, finally, at last ,
in the end , as a result…
4.表递进: what’s more, in addition,
5.表选择: or , either …or …, neither…nor…
6.表原因:because, because of ,
7.表让步:though, although, in spite of … .
8.表顺序: first, next, then, finally/at last…
9.表举例:such as, for example, like… ______________________________.For example, you can go running or do some sports five times a week. You can also take a walk after supper every day. Doing more exercise builds up our bodies and help you keep healthy.take exercise Let’s write topic sentencesYou need to take a lot of exerciserelax ______________, you can relax yourself by listening to music, _________it can rest our brains. ___________it’s good for study.________, it’s important to get enough sleep every night. ___you don’t get enough sleep at night, you’ll have less energy the next day. _____choosing proper ways to relax is necessary. In my opinionWhat’s more,BesidesIfbecausesoFill in the blanks with proper conjunctionsThe way to keep healthyKeeping a healthy diet is important. You should…. As an old saying says,.. so…, besides…
You need to take a lot of exercise. For example,…
In my opinion, … because … Besides, …
If… choosing proper ways to relax is necessary. The main body整体三部分The beginningThe end点题,一两个句子,概括性总结观点，表达祝愿和期望Let’s write a composition中考评分标准第五档（18-20分）：
1、包含所有要点，完全完成了试题规定的任务
2、有清晰的文本框，较多的语法结构和词汇
3、有效的使用了语句间的连接充分，使全文结构紧 凑、行文连贯、表达清楚
4、语言基本无误覆盖所有内容要点框架、从句语言地道，规范连接词★ Polish (润色) and copy The way to keep healthy to your exercise paper.
★★Write another composition about whether the students should use the mobile phones at school or not on your exercise paper. Homework for today!