外研版 必修一 Module 6 The Internet and Telecommunications Writing 课件(21张)

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Book1 Module6
The Internet and Telecommunications
现在,网购正在被越来越多的消费者所接受。但是,由网上购物所引发的问题也引起了人们的高度关注。请根据以下内容,写一篇英语短文,分析网上购物的利与弊,并简述自己的观点。
1.利:方便快捷,便宜,产品种类多。
2.弊:无法保证质量,容易受骗,网上付款有风险。
注意:词数100左右。
参考词汇:网上购物online shopping
方便的convenient (adj.) 便利 convenience (n.)
保证ensure (vt.)  质量quality (n.)
一、审题定调
这是一篇辩论报告,属于议论文的范畴。议论文通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来辨明是非曲直,从而表达出作者的观点。写作时要求逻辑严密、结构清晰、言而有据,同时注意论点和论据之间的逻辑性。
陈述正反(利弊)观点时,常用一般现在时。
二、谋篇布局
辩论报告一般分为四部分:
第一部分:引入话题;
第二部分:利及其理由;
第三部分:弊及其理由;
第四部分:表明自己的观点。
第一部分:引入论题:
现在,网购正在被越来越多的消费者所接受。但是,由网上购物所引发的问题也引起了人们的高度关注。
要点提取
1.网购正在被越来越多的消费者所接受
2.网上购物所引发的问题
第一部分:引入话题:
1.网购正在被越来越多的消费者所接受
句式重构
随着互联网的流行,越来越多的人喜欢网上购物。
随着… with结构/as 从句
越来越多more and more
更喜欢 prefer doing/would like to
With the Internet becoming popular,more and more people prefer going shopping online.
As the Internet becomes popular,more and more people would like to go shopping online.
第一部分:引入话题:
2.网上购物所引发的问题
句式重构:存在优缺点在网购方面
存在表达:there be 句式
优缺点:advantages and disadvantages
There are both advantages and disadvantages in online shopping.
第二部分:列举正方观点及其理由;(利)
利:方便快捷,便宜,产品种类多。
要点提取
3.方便快捷
4.便宜和种类多
第二部分:列举正方观点及其理由;(利)
3.方便快捷
句式重构:我们可以购物在网上在家
We can buy things online at home.
句式升级:
We can buy things online without leaving home.
第二部分:列举正方观点及其理由;(利)
4.便宜和种类多
句式重构:存在各种不同的物品供我们去选择
同时,网上物品价格便宜比实体店
价格price 便宜cheap 货物goods
选择choose 实体店 real shop
There are many kinds of goods for us to choose from.
Meanwhile,The price of the goods online is also cheaper than those in real shop.
第三部分:列举反方观点及其理由;(弊)
弊:无法保证质量,容易受骗,网上付款有风险。
要点提取
5.无法保证质量,
6.容易受骗,网上付款有风险。
第三部分:列举反方观点及其理由;(弊)
5.无法保证质量
句式重构:我们不能确定物品质量,因为我们只能看到物品的图片在网上。
不确定:be not sure about… 质量quality
we are not sure about their quality, since we can see only pictures of goods online.
第三部分:列举反方观点及其理由;(弊)
6.网上有很多广告容易受骗,
句式重构:顾客(我们)容易被虚假广告欺骗.
此外,网上支付有风险.
欺骗cheat 广告advertisement(ad)
虚假的fake 顾客 customer 充满be full of
Customers are easily cheated by the fake advertisement.
Besides ,It is full of danger to pay for online.
句式升级
There are a number of fake advertisements Online, making customers cheated.
第四部分:表明自己的观点。
7.在我看来,我们应该小心,当在享受网上购物的便利的时候。
In my opinion,we should be careful while we enjoy the convenience of shopping online.
句式升级
In my opinion,we should be careful while enjoying the convenience of shopping online.
要点句汇总
1.随着互联网的流行,越来越多的人喜欢网上购物。
2.存在优缺点在网购方面。
3.我们可以购物在网上在家。
4.存在各种不同的物品供我们去选择.同时,网上物品价格便宜比实体店。
5.我们不能确定物品质量,因为我们只能看到物品的图片在网上。
6.顾客(我们)容易被虚假广告欺骗. 此外,网上支付有风险。
7.在我看来,我们应该小心,当在享受网上购物便利的时候。
英语要点句汇总
1.With the Internet becoming popular,more and more people prefer going shopping online.
2. There are both advantages and disadvantages in online shopping.
3. We can buy things online without leaving home.
4. There are many kinds of goods for us to choose from.
Meanwhile,The price of the goods online is also cheaper than those in real shop.
5. we are not sure about their quality, since we can see only pictures of goods online.
6. Customers are easily cheated by the fake advertisement.
Besides ,It is full of danger to pay for online.
7. In my opinion,we should be careful while enjoying the convenience of shopping online.
过渡词语
In fact,事实上
It is widely believed… 广泛认为
First of all,首先
what’s more,接着
However,然而
besides,除此之外
meanwhile 同时
at the same time,同时
without doubt,毫无疑问
连句成篇
With the Internet becoming popular,more and more people prefer going shopping online. In fact,There are both advantages and disadvantages in online shopping.
It is widely believed that there are several advantages as follows. First of all, We can buy things online without leaving home. What’s more, there are many kinds of goods for us to choose from. Meanwhile, the price of the goods online is also cheaper than those in real shop.
However, shopping online also causes us some problems. We are not sure about their quality, since we can see only pictures of goods online. At the same time, Customers are easily cheated by the fake advertisement. Without doubt ,It is full of danger to pay for online.
In my opinion, we should be careful while enjoying the convenience of shopping online.
Thank you !