【人教八上英语尖子生阶梯阅读+听说写训练】Unit 10 以读促写

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
如何写好关于“谈论结果”的文章
　　本单元的话题为“谈论结果”。再次阅读第111页主题为“如何成为学校里受欢迎的学生”的阅读理解,完成以下任务,从中找出关于“谈论结果”类书面表达的写作规律。
1.What structure is the article (这篇文章是什么结构 )(用中文回答)

2.What's the Chinese meaning of “if” in the sentence “Ask yourself if your desire for being popular comes from looking down on yourself or an unlucky situation.”

3.Underline two conditional sentences in the article. (在这篇文章里的两个条件句下面画线。)

1.Choose some wonderful expressions and sentences from the article. (从文章中挑选一些精彩的短语和句子。)


2.Write three conditional sentences of your own. (写出你自己的三个条件句。)


3.What two other ways do you think can help you become a popular student in your school (你认为能帮你成为学校里受欢迎的学生的其他两种方法是什么 )


Finish rewriting the article by filling in the blanks. (填空,完成文章的改写)
1.　　　　 students want to become popular at school. But how can you become popular Here are some ways for you.
Find out 2.　　　　 you want to be popular and be confident. Be friendly to 3.　　　　. Show your talents or 4.　　　　 in a right way. 5.　　　　 at school and develop your own personal style. Be yourself and have fun taking part in school 6.　　　　 and sports teams.
If you follow these ways, you can be popular at your school.
Write the following article using the guidance you've just learned. (运用以上所学知识,进行练笔)
　　假设你是星光中学的李华,你将参加主题为“How to Be Popular”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿,主要内容包括: 1.注重外表形象; 2.微笑友好; 3.做好的倾听者,不说闲话; 4.做真实的自己。 参考词汇: attract 吸引;gossip 说闲言碎语 注意:1.词数:100词左右; 2.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 分数:　　　　　 书写:★★★★★ 结构:★★★★★ 内容:★★★★★ Advice from your teacher:
书写区域Good writing makes your article better. Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. Most people would like to be popular with others, but 　　That's all. Thanks very much! 修订区域
技巧点拨与答案详析
【审】
1.“总—分”结构。
2.是否
3.①If it does, then work first on your self-confidence.
②If you are strange or different, realize that everyone is strange in their own way.
【润】
1.Most　2.why
3.everyone/everybody
4.skills　5.Volunteer
6.clubs
【练】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone,
　　I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to being popular (开篇点题,文章采用“总—分—总”结构,3分) In fact, it is very simple. The first step is to pay attention to our appearances. If we stay in good shape and keep clean, people will be attracted by our good looks and impressed by our confidence. Another important step is to smile and be friendly. It's also important to be good listeners. In this way people will feel comfortable enough to be with us. However, no matter what we do, we must not gossip. Above all, we must remember to be ourselves. (重点介绍如何成为受欢迎的人,9分) If we can do all of the above, I am sure being popular will come our way. (最后总结全文,升华主题,3分)
　　That's all. Thanks very much!
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