【人教八上英语尖子生阶梯阅读+听说写训练】Unit 8 以读促写

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
　　　　　如何写好关于“描述制作过程”的文章
本单元的话题为“描述制作过程”。再次阅读第85页主题为“自制美味的水果
冰激凌”的完形填空,完成以下任务,从中找出关于“描述制作过程”类书面表达的写作规律。
1.What does the writer teach us to make in this passage

2.How long do we need to keep it cold in the fridge before eating

1.Choose some wonderful words and expressions from the article. (从文章中挑选一些精彩的词和短语。)

2.Choose three imperative sentences and some transitional words from the article. (从文章中挑选三个祈使句及一些过渡连接词。)

3.Write your own expressions and sentences describing the process of making one of your favorite foods or drinks.(写出自己的短语和句子来描述你最喜欢的一种食物或饮品的制作过程。)

Finish rewriting the article by filling in the blanks. (填空,完成文章的改写)
Fruit ice-cream is delicious. I believe you must like eating it.
To make the fruit ice-cream, you will 1.　　　　 a cup of yogurt, two spoons of honey, two cups of 2.　　　　, two spoons of sugar, some lemon juice, some apple sauce, cheese and one small watermelon.
When you 3.　　　　 up all the ingredients in a 4.　　　　 according to the instructions, put the watermelon pieces on the top and put the bowl in the fridge to keep them 5.　　　　.
About 6.　　　　 hours later, you can eat the delicious fruit ice-cream. It's great.
Write the following article using the guidance you've just learned. (运用以上所学知识,进行练笔)
　　你知道怎样制作苹果奶昔吗 请根据提示内容介绍一下苹果奶昔的做法。 提示内容: 所需原料:三个苹果,一些冰激凌,一瓶牛奶。 制作步骤:1.苹果去皮切碎; 2.把苹果和冰激凌放进搅拌器; 3.把牛奶倒进搅拌器; 4.打开搅拌器运转大约一分钟; 5.把奶昔倒进杯子里。 词数:80左右。 分数:　　　　　 书写:★★★★★ 结构:★★★★★ 内容:★★★★★ Advice from your teacher:
书写区域Good writing makes your article better. 修订区域
技巧点拨与答案详析
【审】
1.Super fruit ice-cream.
2.For three hours.
【润】
1.need　2.milk　3.mix　4.bowl　5.cold　6.three
【练】
One possible version:
　　The apple milk shake is healthy and delicious. Do you like it Now let me teach you how to make it. (开篇点题,文章采用“总—分”的结构,3分)
　　You need three apples, some ice-cream and a bottle of milk. First, peel the apples and cut them up. Next, put the apple pieces and ice-cream into the blender. Then, pour the milk into the blender. Turn on the blender and have it work for about one minute. Finally, pour the milk shake into a glass. Now it's time to enjoy it! (根据提示内容,分步介绍制作方法,内容环节完整,12分)
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