Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark . 单元作文（思路点拨+写作实践）

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Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark .
单元主题写作
一、话题分析
本单元的话题是 “谈论生活变化”。主要从以下三个方面展开：（1）介绍自己现在和过去的变化（2）介绍家人、同学朋友等发生的变化； （3）对于身边发生的变化给出一些评论等。
写作方法
“总分法”描述变化
总述变化。
分述过去和现在
提出希望。
素材积累
对比变化常用词汇归纳：
性格： humorous // silent //helpful //shy //outgoing //quiet //calm //active// friendly //funny //serous
外貌： talk //short //thin // heavy // strong // big eyes // wear glasses // beautiful // handsome
学习：score // absent // examination // be good at // do well in //fail
对比变化常用句型归纳：
He used to be really ...
I didn’t use to ...
...life has changed a lot in the last few years .
The biggest change in my life is ...
This is the most important change because ...
写作任务
Write a short passage about your parents’ changes in the past three years when they get along with you (写一篇关于在过去三年李你的父母在与你相处过程中变化的短文）（请根据下面的提示，写出一篇90-120词的短文）
The title of your short passage . (你的短文的标题）
First , write the general introduction about how your got along with you in the pas (首先写关于你父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍）
Second , write the most important change and how it happened . (其次写最重要的一次变化以及如何发生的）
Third , write about how you feel about his change （最后写一下你对变化的感受）
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My parents have changed me
I didn’t get along well with my parents in the past .
I used to spend much time playing computer games . At that time, I was interested in computer games and I spent most of the time on them . My parents were worried about me . Because of playing computer games and staying up late , I was ill in hospital . Under the education of my parents , my life has completely changed in the past three years. So far , I have changed a lot . I like sports and study hard . I hope to get into a better high school . They’re proud of me.
I deeply feel the love of my parents . I fell very proud and happy . too.
写作实践
根据表格中的内容，以 “Peter’s Changes” 为题，谈论Peter三年来的变化，并写出他提高英语水平的三个方法。
Peter’s Changes
3 years ago now
shy , quiet outgoing , friendly
be weak in English be good at English , have many good ways to learn English , for example ...
要求： 1. 短文需包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名；
词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Peter’s Changes
It seems that has changed a lot. _____________________________________________________
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参考答案
It seems that Peter has changed a lot .
He used to be a shy and quiet boy in a primary school .But now he is outgoing and friendly . He was weak in English in the past , So he was afraid to answer the teacher’s questions during English classes.
After he went to the middle school , something changed . He learned many interesting English stories and his English teacher was patient with him . He studied hard in class and practiced English by watching English films and listening to English songs in his free time . Little by little , he found it more and more interesting to learn English . He could even talk with his classmates in English .
Now he often gets good grades in English and he has confidence to do it better in the future.
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