2023届高三英语二轮复习读后续写之情绪表达讲义（含答案）

读后续写---情绪表达
开心、激动
My heart was as sweet as honey，full of joy. （比喻）
Her face lit up when I gave her the present. (光彩焕发，原形：light up)
A big smile spread across his face.
A thrill of joy filled her heart，her eyes shining with joy/excitement.（快乐的颤栗）
He jumped with great excitement.
我的心像蜂蜜一样甜，充满喜悦。
我给她礼物时，她脸上露出喜色。
他满脸笑容。
她心中充满了喜悦，眼睛里闪烁着喜悦/激动的光芒。
他兴奋得跳了起来。
二、悲伤、沮丧
My heart sank to the bottom.
Sorrow and grief came in waves and a river of tears poured out. (比喻)
(grief悲恸 > sorrow > sadness)
Sorrow and grief flooded me. (flood洪水；v淹没)
He buried his face in his hands, tears rolling down his cheeks.
Desperate and hopeless, he knelt down, tears streaming down his face.(比喻)
(绝望的) (knee, 膝盖，v跪) (stream小溪; v流出)
Hearing the bad news，he froze with sadness，as if rooted to the ground. (比喻/夸张).
(freeze--froze--frozen结冰; v僵住) (root 根; v生根)
The last word went like a bullet to my heart.（比喻） (bullet子弹)
I went home with a heavy heart, not knowing what to do.
我的心沉了下去。
悲伤接踵而来，泪水滔滔不绝。
悲伤淹没了我。
他双手捂着脸，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。
绝望失望的他跪了下来，眼泪从脸上流下来。
听到这个坏消息，他悲痛欲绝，好像根扎在地上。
最后一句话像子弹一样击中了我的心。
我心情沉重地回家了，不知道该怎么办。
三、羞愧、内疚
He stood in front of his mother with his head down/dropped.
So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to his face.（倒装）
He dropped his head with/in shame.
He felt his face burning with shame.
Reflecting on what he had done to his father，he felt very guilty. (思考)
Feeling extremely guilty，he couldn't help crying.
他低着头站在母亲面前。
她感到非常羞愧，以至于她能感觉到血冲到他的脸上。
他羞愧地低下了头。
他感到羞愧得满脸通红。
回想他对父亲所做的一切，他感到非常内疚。
他感到非常内疚，忍不住哭了起来。
四、愤怒、生气
Seeing what he did, I could hardly contain my anger/rage. (包含/控制)(愤怒)
Filled with anger, I was unable to say a single word.
He glared at me, his eyes shining with anger.
He shook his fist at me，shouting at me with his face red. (拳头)
He trembled all over with anger. (颤抖)
看到他所做的一切，我几乎控制不住自己的愤怒。
我气得一句话也说不出来。
他怒视着我，眼里闪着愤怒的光芒。
他朝我挥动拳头，满脸通红地朝我大喊大叫。
他气得浑身发抖。
五、焦虑，担心，紧张
He paced back and forth in the room just like a cat on hot bricks.(比喻)
(踱步) (前前后后) (热锅上的蚂蚁)
He held his breath for the results, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.(如坐针毡) (比喻)
My heart was pounding/racing/beating wildly，my hands were sweating and my throat felt tense and dry. (狂跳)
My heart was beating wildly as if it was going to leap from my body. (跳跃)
My mind was almost a blank.
Time seemed to stop as I held my breath，waiting for the result /punishment...
他在房间里来回踱步，就像热砖头上的猫一样。
他屏住呼吸等待结果，觉得坐立不安。
我的心在狂跳，我的手在出汗，我的喉咙感到紧张和干燥。
我的心在狂跳，好像要从我身上跳下来似的。
我的脑子几乎一片空白。
当我屏住呼吸等待结果/惩罚时，时间似乎停止了...
尴尬
She stood there with a red face, hoping to find hole to hide herself.
She bit her lips, not knowing where to rest his hands.
All the air seemed to disappear and she felt as the whole world was watching her.
He scratched his head, avoiding my eyes.
她红着脸站在那里，希望能找到一个洞把自己藏起来。
她咬着嘴唇，不知道他的手该放在哪里。
所有的空气似乎都消失了，她感觉整个世界都在看着她。
他搔了搔头，避开了我的眼睛。
害怕、恐惧
Surrounded by complete darkness, I was so scared that I felt my hair stand on end.
Seeing the snake, I froze with horror, too scared to moved.
His hands were trembling and his teeth were chattering.
被一片漆黑所包围，我吓得毛骨悚然。
看到那条蛇，我吓得浑身发抖，不敢动。
他的手在颤抖，牙齿在打颤。
八、惊讶
He looked at me in surprise with his eyes wide open.
It came as a complete shock /surprise to me，and I would never have expected this to happen.
She looked straight at me in my eyes with an unbelievable look on her face.
他睁大眼睛惊讶地看着我。
这对我来说完全是一个震惊/惊喜，我从来没有想到会发生这种事。
她直视着我的眼睛，脸上带着难以置信的表情。
其它
1.He dragged his feet towards home, tired and exhausted. My knees were shaking and my muscles were aching.
2. I fell fast asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow.
3. Her eyes fell on the photo, which reminded her of her happy memories in her childhood
4. She opened a book, pretending to read, with tears dropping on the open page.
Seeing such extraordinary beauty，I felt every cell in my body wake up
Life can be so wonderful, full of surprise and joy. It can also be full of challenges, setbacks and heartbreaks. However，no matter what difficulty we are faced with，we mustn’t give up hope/our dream. (挫折)
It’s not what you said but what you did that matters.
It’s never too late to learn/follow your dream.
My hard work/efforts paid off.
Actions speak louder than words
Every single act of kindness contribute to a better world. (善举)
I'm proud of myself as I can get what I want through my own efforts. (努力)
Nothing can be achieved without effort.
Happiness depends on your mindset and attitude. (心态)
Your attitude makes a difference to how you view the world.
The world always makes way for dreamers.
All our dreams can come true, if we have courage to pursue them.
What happened today made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.(美德)
他拖着脚向家走去，又累又累。我的膝盖发抖，肌肉酸痛。
我的头一碰到枕头就睡着了。
她的目光落在这张照片上，这使她想起了童年的美好回忆。
她打开一本书，假装在看书，眼泪掉在打开的那一页上。
看到如此美丽的景色，我感到身体的每一个细胞都苏醒了
生活可以如此美好，充满惊喜和欢乐。它也可能充满挑战、挫折和心碎。然而，无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不能放弃希望/梦想。
重要的不是你说了什么，而是你做了什么。
学习/追寻梦想永远不嫌晚。
我的努力得到了回报。
行动胜于雄辩。
每一个善良的行为都有助于创造一个更美好的世界。
我为自己感到骄傲，因为我可以通过自己的努力得到我想要的。
不努力什么也做不到。
幸福取决于你的心态和态度。
你的态度决定了你对世界的看法。
世界总是为梦想者让路。
如果我们有勇气去追求，我们所有的梦想都能实现。
今天发生的事让我意识到宽恕是一种美德。
句式汇总
It was his teacher’s encouragement that built up his confidence.
It was his determination and efforts that made him succeeded.
It was my mother who accompanied me through the hardship.
It is love that makes the world so attractive.
It was his courage and braveness that saved him.
As the old saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”
As the old saying goes, “There is no such thing as free lunch in the world.”
It didn’t take long before I realized that I was lost in the forest.
It didn’t take long before the breakfast was finished.
It didn’t take long before it was completely dark around and I was really scared.
归纳：It didn’t take long before ...没过多久就....
What impresses me most is that he is always patient with every student and never loses his temper. (发脾气)
What annoyed me most was the way he talked to me.
What excited me most was I was elected to the activity on behalf of our school. (代表)
归纳：What + V + sb most is/was .... 最让人...的是...
It is the first time that I have come to Beijing.
It was the first time that I had seen such extraordinary beauty.
归纳：It is/was the first time that I have/had done sth.
It is the best meal that I have ever tasted.
It is the best gift that I have ever received.
归纳：It is the best ... that I have ever done. 这是我....过的...最....的...
If you hadn’t helped me, I wouldn’t have made such rapid progress.
Without you, I wouldn’t have won the first award.
归纳：If you hadn’t done sth, I wouldn’t have done sth.
或Without ...., I wouldn’t have done sth.
要不是..., 我就不可能.. (假设过去)
If only I hadn’t made the mistake!
If only I hadn’t told him the secret!
归纳：If only I hadn’t done sth！要是...就好了！
It took sb. ... to do sth.
It is evident/obvious that...
I have no choice/alternative but to wait.
Compared with/to B， A....
Not until then did I realize....
I hold the firm belief that.... 我始终坚信....
Waves of anger/joy/disappointment/sorrow/excitement flooded me. ...的浪潮淹没了我。
Nothing is more significant than health.
It not only promotes our love for Chinese culture but also enables us to have a better understanding of it.
I was about to give up when I recalled what my mother said. (正要干....突然....)
I was doing my homework when I heard a strange noise coming from the window(正在干....突然....)
A good idea occurred to me that I could cook a meal for my parents as a gift.
A good idea occurred to me that we could help them by donating some food and clean clothes.
归纳：A good idea occurred to me that ....（想法的具体内容）
“我突然想起了个好主意: ...”
I have made a decision that I will do what I can to help people in need just like my mother.
It taught me a lesson that so long as you put your heart in it, you can realize your dream.
In spite of the fact that he himself was not rich, he donated his own clothes and food to the homeless without hesitation. (=although)
归纳：that 引导的同位语从句用来解释说明前面名词的内容。
附：
各种说的表达：
回答说：answer reply respond 悄悄说：whisper to me
喊着说：shout yell cry 补充说：add
尖叫说：scream 安慰说：comfort
承诺说：promise 承认说：admit
抱怨说：complain 命令说：command
道歉说：apologize 继续说：continue
宣布说：declare announce 微笑说：smile
警告说：warn 威胁说：threaten
提醒说：remind 批评说：criticize
重要高级副词：
显然：obviously /evidently /apparently 幸运的是：fortunately /luckily
完全地：completely /totally /entirely /absolutely 立刻：immediately
尤其：particularly /especially 最后：finally /eventually
十分非常相当地：extremely /fairly 偶尔：sometimes /occasionally
严重地：seriously /severely 频繁地：frequently
不断地：constantly /increasingly 逐渐地：gradually
意外地：unexpectedly 故意地：deliberately /on purpose
实际上：actually /as a matter of fact 流利地：fluently
独立地：independently 随便地：casually
绝望地、无助地：desperately /hopelessly /helplessly
读后续写---情绪表达（译文）
一、开心、激动
我的心像蜂蜜一样甜，充满喜悦。
我给她礼物时，她脸上露出喜色。
他满脸笑容。
她心中充满了喜悦，眼睛里闪烁着喜悦/激动的光芒。
他兴奋得跳了起来。
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二、悲伤、沮丧
我的心沉了下去。
悲伤接踵而来，泪水滔滔不绝。
悲伤淹没了我。
他双手捂着脸，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。
绝望失望的他跪了下来，眼泪从脸上流下来。
听到这个坏消息，他悲痛欲绝，好像根扎在地上。
最后一句话像子弹一样击中了我的心。
我心情沉重地回家了，不知道该怎么办。
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三、羞愧、内疚
他低着头站在母亲面前。
她感到非常羞愧，以至于她能感觉到血冲到他的脸上。
他羞愧地低下了头。
他感到羞愧得满脸通红。
回想他对父亲所做的一切，他感到非常内疚。
他感到非常内疚，忍不住哭了起来。
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四、愤怒、生气
看到他所做的一切，我几乎控制不住自己的愤怒。
我气得一句话也说不出来。
他怒视着我，眼里闪着愤怒的光芒。
他朝我挥动拳头，满脸通红地朝我大喊大叫。
他气得浑身发抖。
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五、焦虑，担心，紧张
他在房间里来回踱步，就像热砖头上的猫一样。
他屏住呼吸等待结果，觉得坐立不安。
我的心在狂跳，我的手在出汗，我的喉咙感到紧张和干燥。
我的心在狂跳，好像要从我身上跳下来似的。
我的脑子几乎一片空白。
当我屏住呼吸等待结果/惩罚时，时间似乎停止了...
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六、尴尬
她红着脸站在那里，希望能找到一个洞把自己藏起来。
她咬着嘴唇，不知道他的手该放在哪里。
所有的空气似乎都消失了，她感觉整个世界都在看着她。
他搔了搔头，避开了我的眼睛。
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七、害怕、恐惧
被一片漆黑所包围，我吓得毛骨悚然。
看到那条蛇，我吓得浑身发抖，不敢动。
他的手在颤抖，牙齿在打颤。
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八、惊讶
他睁大眼睛惊讶地看着我。
这对我来说完全是一个震惊/惊喜，我从来没有想到会发生这种事。
她直视着我的眼睛，脸上带着难以置信的表情。
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九、其它
他拖着脚向家走去，又累又累。我的膝盖发抖，肌肉酸痛。
我的头一碰到枕头就睡着了。
她的目光落在这张照片上，这使她想起了童年的美好回忆。
她打开一本书，假装在看书，眼泪掉在打开的那一页上。
看到如此美丽的景色，我感到身体的每一个细胞都苏醒了
生活可以如此美好，充满惊喜和欢乐。它也可能充满挑战、挫折和心碎。然而，无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不能放弃希望/梦想。
重要的不是你说了什么，而是你做了什么。
学习/追寻梦想永远不嫌晚。
我的努力得到了回报。
行动胜于雄辩。
每一个善良的行为都有助于创造一个更美好的世界。
我为自己感到骄傲，因为我可以通过自己的努力得到我想要的。
不努力什么也做不到。
幸福取决于你的心态和态度。
你的态度决定了你对世界的看法。
世界总是为梦想者让路。
如果我们有勇气去追求，我们所有的梦想都能实现。
今天发生的事让我意识到宽恕是一种美德。