Module4 School life Unit 7 Memory第5课时 Writing课件(共17张PPT)

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Module 4 School life
Unit 7 Memory
第5课时 Writing
目录
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课堂练习
写作乐园
写作乐园
话题七描述一次特别的回忆
【短文写作】
你有特别的回忆吗？请你根据下面的要点提示，以“A special memory”为题写一篇关于你自己的故事。 要点：1. 介绍你的故事里的人物;
2. 介绍故事发生的时间和地点;
3. 描述故事的开头、经过和结尾;
4. 说明为什么这是一次特别的回忆。
A special memory
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举 例
【写作指导】　　
此篇作文以一个故事为主线，主要内容是讲述一个特别的回忆性的故事。写作内容渗透着本单元的话题与语言目标——回忆。
在写作过程中要明确以下两点：
1. 由作文的体裁来决定写作需要使用的正确时态——一般过去时。
2. 结合话题内容，我们在写作过程中要明确具体的几个要素，即时间、地点、人物、事件，而事件的起因、经过、结果都是不可或缺的。
【范文赏析】
A special memory
One day I went shopping with my mother. After we got what we need, my mother went to pay the bill. She gave the shop assistant two hundred yuan. The shop assistant gave back seventy yuan for change. My mother put it into the pocket.
Then, we were ready to leave. When I checked the list and bill, I found that the shop assistant made a mistake. He gave us another twenty yuan.
Later, I told my mother and we went to tell the shop assistant. The shop assistant took back the money and said thanks to us. He also said I was honest.
This is a special memory for me. I didn' t take the extra money, but I got thanks from others.
课堂练习
一、翻译句子
1. 记忆力在我们的日常生活中扮演着很重要的角色。（play a role）
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2. 如果我们有好的记忆力，我们学起来就更容易。（much easier）
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Memory plays a very important role in our daily life.
If we have a good memory, it will be much easier for us to learn things.
3. 我怎样才能增强我的记忆力呢？（improve）
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4. 让我给你一些关于如何提升记忆力的建议。（give sb.some advice）
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How can I improve my memory
Let me give you some advice on how to improve your memory.
5. 有规律的运动可以给我们带来很多好处。（bring）
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Regular exercise can bring us a lot of benefits.
二、书面表达
假设你是某校八年级（6）班的李华，上周五你们全班同学针对记忆力展开了讨论，请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇讨论报告。
要点：1. 好的记忆力带来的好处（学习更轻松……）；
2. 好的记忆力带来的麻烦（难以忘记别人的错误……）；
3. 你的看法。
提示词：1. 好处benefit 2. 分数mark
3. 错误 mistake
要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4. 标点正确，书面整洁。
We held a discussion about memory in our classroom last Friday. Here are the results.
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We all agree that a good memory plays an important role in our study. It can bring us lots of benefits. On one hand, a good memory helps us get better marks. On the other hand, we can remember things more quickly and learn lessons more easily. Thus, we can have more free time to do things we like.
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However, we sometimes meet trouble with a good memory. For example, it takes us longer time to forget others' silly mistakes and we may be unkind to those people.
In my opinion, it' s necessary to keep a good memory.
【写作评价】
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